Quick Wearshe Is a Stunning Beauty and a Heartthrob

I hope the author will stick to the writing style of the first volume. The first volume can be seen to be very clever, and the heroine's character is just beginning to show. The second volume is a bit disappointing. If you want 1V1, be firm. If not, just lay out the clues at the beginning. The introduction can also be clearer. The heroine is just Bai Yueguang instead of C. P, if you want to change the character, you can change it to an immersive one. The heroine in the first volume has characteristics, is gentle and planned, but the second volume gives people a sense of dependence, and the personality is a bit fragmented, flattening the characteristics of the heroine. If you focus on shaping the characteristics of the heroine in the follow-up, I believe we can achieve good results.

The basics are so good, I really thought there would be multiple male protagonists, the writing is very good, it's fun to watch, I'll watch it next time

It looks good, but some places make it a little uncomfortable. For example, Li Sha in the first world (forgot), he did whatever it took to take photos of Ayan for traffic. You can read the description yourself. It's a bit scary and feels like crazy. But in reality, there are also anchors who eat melons like this. This is the opposite. It's true. Just think of him as the clown who drives the plot. It's just my personal opinion. I have ten thousand layers of armor. Overall, I like this book very much. The beauty of Ayan is like a pool of gentle spring water. She is a very good person. Although the score is only 5.2 Now, I believe that this book will definitely get high scores. Run away, bye bye

Very interesting, a treasure novel. It can be seen that there are many details and the author has carefully thought about the concept. In this environment where fast food articles are rampant, it is really not easy. It has been added to the bookshelf, thank you to the author! The emperor is worthy of your hard work, and I wish you can become a god with your book [love] [love] [blowing kiss]

Among all the heart-throbs of the quick-travel female channel that I have read, this is one of the best-looking ones. Other heart-throb heroines are all passive. This one is similar to the one where goddesses cannot be blasphemed. I give the author a big five-star review. I hope the rating will be released soon. I also hope the author can update 100 chapters a day.

It's so heart-warming. I feel that the heroine is very gentle and devoted to loving someone (in other people's eyes). It's beautiful and beautiful.

This book is still very beautiful. "Hide love in the buds and bloom in the heart" 𝓗𝒾𝒹𝓮 𝓁𝓸𝓋𝓮 𝒾𝓃 𝒶 𝒷𝓊𝒹 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒷𝓁𝓸𝓸𝓂 𝒾𝓃 𝓂𝓎 𝒽𝓮𝒶𝓇𝓉.

Beautiful, the first world is so gentle🥰

Absolutely amazing. The author's writing is super good and the setting is very beautiful. A rare good book in Tomato. And it's the big beauty setting that I like. It can be said that this is the most beautiful article about a beautiful woman that I have ever seen in Tomato.

It's really good to read. In fact, I rarely comment. It's very well written. I hope it won't be deleted.

Really super good-looking, a true female standard

The description of the heroine is very good. I like that the heroine is amazingly good-looking. I don't know if this would be gay. I put in the face of a fairy who doesn't care about flowers. It's very beautiful.

The first world is the most beautiful

Beautiful ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა, the author would like to work on more updates

It's really beautiful (♥∀♥)[Send heart][Send heart]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I think it's okay, why is the rating so low [laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

The writing is okay, why is it so bad?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, like, like, like

Not bad, the real heartthrob is a fan of both men and women~ It's just that Small World is too abbreviated~

I think it's pretty good among the same type. I feel that the current rating is a bit too low. I think the average should be around 8 points.

Nice! It's so well written, so captivating!

A very novel kind of book, it is no longer just a very gentle and standard heartthrob about falling in love.