Crazy Criticism of the Male Protagonist Because He Is Delicate and Weak and Can Easily Be Pushed Down

The first part of this book was pretty good, but in the middle, I felt a little uncomfortable because of the male protagonist's attitude towards Mother Lin. He relied entirely on his family for food and clothing, but he challenged the person who was the best to him in the family. The reason for the challenge was to protect Song Li, but such a description made it seem that the male protagonist was a bit... Later, he had different ideas from Mother Lin, so he gave up communication and finally resolved the conflict. Otherwise, this situation would have really become a failure in shaping the character, but fortunately, he talked it out with Mother Lin later. This big stomachache finally disappeared. Then there are the main supporting characters in it. They have their own stories and thoughts. They feel quite flesh-and-blood, but they are a little one-sided. You can write more about the different aspects and actions of the characters to reflect their growth. Personal advice. Finally, there is the relationship between the two protagonists. It is smooth and flowing, and there is no feeling of falling in love for desire at all. It is because the other person is a very good person that I fell in love with her heart. It's not like two people got along overnight. Xiao will stay vigil for Song to take care of him who is weak and sick, and Song will also have his own little thoughts, because Xiao deliberately eats spicy food when his eyes are not on him hahahahahahaha, this makes people feel a little scheming and cute, sweet and cute

It is not a clichéd fast-food love story that has been written about in recent years. It is a relatively plain and gentle love. —— I have always criticized the slightly thin family and love lines in fast-travel novels. The continuation of a relatively unfamiliar relationship is real. So how can relatives in a strange world not be suspicious and continue to have a relationship when faced with a person who is always false? It's so unreasonable. But for the sake of the happy ending effect and the expressiveness of the plot, most authors will abandon this issue that is not noticed by others. But I actually wrote it. This is something I was very surprised and pleasantly surprised about. (Finally, I saw a relatively new article on Tomato featuring two men wearing ancient costumes) Another point is the emotional line of the protagonist. What impressed me deeply is that both the protagonists approached each other under the premise of being very "sober". I can feel that they are starting a relationship very seriously. "How do I truly love you" "How can I truly come to you" Let's talk about the last point, which is also the most touching point: the slow pace of this book. What I personally like the most is the daily life of raising cubs in Xiao Mansion. The two trapped beasts had a few moments of respite. Perhaps the warmth that still shines through the years is the greatness of the slow-paced emotional line. (Personally think) In the end, I hope the young couple will live a good life. Five stars for you, cheers~ (Thank you for reading. Can you like it? Oh, by the way, I wish you happiness every day.)

First of all, I am a person who has read many novels, and I really like this one. Xiao Xiao and Xiao Song are really good babies, regardless of Xiao Song's tragic past and fate, and his suppressed love for Xiao. Although Xiao Song has been hurt, he is still willing to fall deeply in love with Xiao Xiao after he treats him well. Xiao Xiao's love for Xiao Song was a brother's love at the beginning, it was heartache and pity. Because Xiao Xiao is a straight man, he is not very clear about loving Xiao Song now, but it is love after all. The plot is also slowly advancing. After Xiao Song was rescued, he also confessed to our Xiao Xiao. I hope the two babies will get better and better. In short, I personally think that the writing is logical. I think the characters created by the author are very real. For example, Mother Lin really loves Xiao Xiao and is infinitely doting and controlling. Xiao Xiao also knows his mother's love and has complicated emotions for Mother Lin. Or Father Xiao, who will visit his son when he is sick, Song Yucheng's change in Xiao Xiao's attitude, etc. In fact, the most important thing is that this kind of age is very good, and it feels like a kind of mutual redemption. I hope Xiao Xiao and Song are all well!

I think this book is very interesting. Some people can just abandon it if they don't like it, instead of leaving a sentence to scold the protagonist. I think the protagonist's reaction is a normal person's reaction. Anyway, I can't get close to a stranger within a period of time, even if she is the original owner's mother. , Some people say that we should maintain a superficial relationship, so what is the difference between this and falsehood? He is indeed seriously OOC, but this can also be a sign of his sincerity. Not everyone is very scheming and deep-seated. It would be the most unrealistic if the protagonist is perfect and omnipotent, okay?

My family is so interesting [Like] [Like] I really want to praise the author for making the emotional changes of the characters very natural, but it doesn't look weird or sudden. The characters are also very distinctive [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] (But I don't know who is the one above or below [sneaky laugh]. When I watched it, I felt that Song Baobao was a small zero. I don't know why. Anyway, it just depends on the feeling, and it is really delicious [laughing][laughing] I like this, hehe. It's not that I don't care. The author must follow his own ideas, I believe it will be more colorful [blowing kiss][blowing kiss])

First of all, the author's writing is really great. I really like [Blowing Kiss] (probably because I read a lot of mindless articles on Tomato). The author's writing is really very comfortable (*▽), and the two protagonist babies are very cute. The relationship between Xiao Jincheng and Song Li is also a gradual and slow-burning type, which will not make people feel too abrupt. Then, the details in the author's big story are very delicate, making people feel that the slow flow of the clear stream is very comfortable (I think) and it is not something like that. In addition, the supporting characters written by the author are all three-dimensional and distinct: Wangcai's hypocrisy and slickness, Laifu's friendship and honesty, Xiao Guifei's viciousness, and Tan Yixing's gentleness, humility and courtesy, all of which fit the plot setting. Concubine Xiao's viciousness but love for her family makes this character distinct and distinctive. After all, a woman who can stand out among the three thousand beauties in the harem is never an economical lamp. Xiao Jincheng's mother was resolute but doting on her son, and she and her father had a love that was rare in ancient times. Both of them made the characters personalized, three-dimensional, and vivid, or to put it romantically, they became flesh and blood. In addition, Tan Yixing's gentleness, humility and courtesy are not only reflected in the author's introduction with the help of Xiao Jincheng's perspective, but his humility and courtesy are engraved in every move. It is really hard not to make people shine. However, the emmmmm Song Li's personal monologue scenes written by the author are a bit less (I think so). I would like to suggest more. I really want to know the reason why baby Song Li stood in the snow for a long time (it may also be the suspense [thinking] left by the author) or the reason why baby Song Li wants to die (personal guess), which doesn't feel like it. Although the image of Xiao Jincheng is from the past in the 21st century, he does not have too much hesitation or mercy in dealing with people who hurt him. I think this is a highlight of Xiao Jincheng's gentle character. I like Xiao Jincheng's baby very much (づ′▽`)づ. The interaction between Xiao Jincheng's baby and Song Li's baby is so cute and I love it [sending my heart]. The plot is also intertwined. Xiao went to treat Tan Yixing's mother with disrespect, but came a step late. This link has a sense of powerlessness and uncertainty in the world. It is a great plot. It also eases the relationship between Xiao and his mother. It's really great (๑•̀ㅂ•́) ✧ In short, I really like this article written by the author. I hope the author will get better and better. I look forward to (☆▽☆) the next plot! This is my first long review, it's a bit long-winded, hee hee😁

It's very interesting. I look forward to the author continuing to update it. It will accompany me in the last few dozen days and even until the high school entrance examination.

After reading it, overall it was okay. It's just that the villain in the middle rebelled and caused trouble. It was a bit hard to comment on. It was like a joke. The writing style was a bit casual. Hahaha. The young couple was also quite sweet. They even went back to modern times together. Many people said that Shou was not good to the mother of the original owner. She was not his biological child in the first place. In the end, Shou begged them to let them live. Okay, and the original owner's mother also hated taking over the original owner's body. I think it's okay to separate each other like this. However, the imperial concubine sister and the twelfth prince are a bit pitiful. I originally thought that I could let them rescue them and let their family of three live a normal life (after all, the sister and the second prince written in the article seem to be true love). I can read it to pass the time.

It's refreshing. I feel that every character in it is quite three-dimensional. There are no pure villains, and I can't hate any of them. Hateful people must be pitiful. [I'm about to cry] From everyone's perspective, I really can't tell the difference between right and wrong. I like Shou's character very much, he is very sensible, and the emotional line with his mother really pokes at me. At first, it was the alienation of a stranger, and later he wanted to repay the closeness of his mother's care for him. There is a way of seeing the child grow up and understand the truth, which really poked me. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh. The emotional line is relatively slow. The most exciting thing now is when Song Li calls me brother😄Show me when you can...

It's probably a pretty good book, I'll give it four stars. One point was deducted because of the introduction. I was deceived by the introduction. After all, the words "marry" and "marriage" are too confusing. I thought it was the main attack, but it turned out not to be. Please change the introduction, or mark it, it won't be troublesome [crying] The author is very good [like]

A reminder for readers who have never read it, the male protagonist is a modern person with his own thoughts. He will not follow the original owner's parents in everything. He has different ideas and there will be conflicts. In the article, he contradicts the original owner's mother. Of course, his character is not perfect. If you particularly mind this, please stop your losses in time, thank you🙏

Very well written! The writing is particularly smooth, the plot advances layer by layer, and the foreshadowing fills in the gaps. The most important thing is! The feelings are increasing bit by bit! The characterization is really good. Xiao Song is contradictory. His feelings for Xiao Xiao were complicated at first. Little by little, he took Xiao Xiao into his heart, but he was also entangled. He hoped extravagantly and retreated at the same time. He stood on the critical line and did not dare to take that step (the latest chapter really impressed me, Xiao Song is promising!) And Xiao Xiao, he is always enthusiastic about Xiao Song. Unknowingly, Xiao Song has entered his heart. He just doesn't know when he will realize it. In addition, he doesn't seem to have much sense of belonging to his current "home". He feels guilty and is in a daze. He also wants to have a family. I once thought that the mother would change her mind in a sense because she loved her son, and thus change the direction of the story. However, she also made the wrong choice because she "loved her son", but this seems to be natural. The mother's background is still her, and she has not changed because of Xiao Xiao. There is not much to say, but I have to say it at the end! It's been a long time since I followed a serial without missing a chapter, and it's been a long time since I scratched my head and scratched my head anxiously while following a serial! (It's really not enough to watch.) Come on! We are all waiting for you to feed us! It will definitely get better and better when you get older! Don't give up!

Really nice looking girls. . . Why doesn't anyone read it? The author's writing is very detailed and I have been following it all the way till now. The protagonist is not a virgin, but has brains and ambition. The main author updates two chapters every day, which makes the little girl happy. Now when I get home from school, I look forward to reading novels. The author is waiting for your update tomorrow! ! ! I want to see the jealous Song Mao! !

It's so cool. It took me half a day to finish it. It's so delicious! The characters are all standing up, and there are no clichéd plots and characters. The process is not very sad, but it is not overly sweet. The sweetness is moderate, and the relationship is slow to warm up. This is my favorite taste (=^^=)

Except for the central protagonist's attitude towards his mother, which is a bit uncomfortable, everything else is well written, especially the emotional line of the main CP. The interaction between the young couple in the front is so sweet to me, and the back part makes my heart feel like a knife. I really want to watch the plot behind! So sit with him, don't let him be too tired~ At least I can write 100,000 words in one day. Abba Abba😮😮😮 Still pretty ❤️

I like the character settings of the novel very much, but I also love that the author has written these settings beautifully. The content is smooth and flowing. I feel that the characters are very vivid. The emotional line between the two is very comfortable to watch. The author's writing style is very comfortable to watch. It makes me feel that I have read it. There is no discomfort in the general content. I can sum it up in two words: comfortable. There is no typical storyline, but in short, this novel is worth reading. I have read similar novels, but this one is so good that it adds another novel to my bookshelf. I kind of regret not reading this novel earlier [star] It's so delicious. In fact, I should say that I'm lucky that I found it (ᗒᗣᗕ)՞

It looks great! I hope Lili won't be disfigured!! And don't abandon the article! I still want to see the finale [send heart][send heart][send heart][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][love][love][love]

To be honest, this is one of the few good articles of this type that I have seen on Tomato. The writing style is very good, the logic of the world is also very good, and the plot connection is also very natural. I really like it, Dad, I will always follow you! ! !

It's so good, it's so good, I love it so much, I feel sorry for Xiao Xiao, I'm in a dilemma. I've always seen the protagonist in another world accept his family and love as a matter of course. It's rare to see someone who feels alienated like this. It completely eliminates the weird feeling I had when I read this kind of novel about traveling through another world. . . Very awesome,,,[almost crying]

It's really good to watch. Some of the plots made me cry. It's really not easy for young lovers. The plot is also well written and the emotional lines are smooth. I like it very much! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Wow, it's very good. I don't know why the rating is a bit low. To be honest, I just randomly clicked on this book. The plot is very good. I actually finished it. There are very few novels that I can read on Tomato. It's amazing, brother.

The emotions in this book are very delicately depicted, the characters are well created, some are sweet and some are sadistic, and the tactics are well written, interlocking, and there are some foreshadowings, some unexpected and reasonable. And I really like Xinji Green Tea Gong now, it's very good, and the relationship between Gong and Shou later is also very sweet. The author's writing is great [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

First of all, the story is very logical, and good and evil will eventually be rewarded. The relationship between the two male protagonists is also smooth and smooth, not too abrupt. Many time-travel books have the same stories and are abandoned before the end. This book is not bad.

It's a good read, but the two poor little guys are a bit dependent on each other. They may not be very friendly mentally, but they are very satisfied materially. It's really painful for me why all the good-looking Tomato novels are being serialized. I found this one yesterday and couldn't read it for an entire night. I just finished it now. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and I feel that the plot is more of a humorous redemption novel.

It looks so good. I felt a little heartbroken when I found myself standing on the wrong side at first, but I couldn't help but keep reading. It's really good. Song Li is so cute, cute, and delicious. This one is so good. The author knows how to write. Xiao Jincheng is also very good. It reminds me of a sentence I read before about being pitiful and accommodating. Jincheng really dotes on this cute Song Li. Our little lovers will be happy forever [shy] I would like to ask the author, Jincheng, if he has any strength behind him (◦˙▽˙◦)

The optimistic and cheerful Xiao Jincheng gradually influenced Song Li with his sincerity, which was so easy to beat! Moreover, the author's writing style is really good, and the story is quite interesting to read. I like this kind of writing very much. I will wait for the update soon. [Please update]

It's a super nice book. There are really not many books that I can read in one sitting. When I was reading the article, I was thinking about how beautiful Song Li is. It made us crazy. We must be 99 as a young couple. Anyway, I really like it. I highly recommend it! ! !

The palace battle part is particularly enjoyable, and I give it four stars just for this reason. It's so awesome, I enjoyed it with gusto, and the relationship between the aristocratic families is also very interesting. The characters are written with flesh and blood, and you can't hate them, but you can't hate them, you can't pity them, especially the twelfth prince. Alas, he was born as a result of a mistake.

It's so beautiful, I like the modern extras! I didn't like the chapters in the palace, they were so bloody, bloody and messy. For the sake of the throne, everyone has changed beyond recognition, and no one feels like a good person. It's still a heartwarming extra. [I'm full] I can only watch sweet ones when I'm older. Why is the rating so low? This book shouldn't be rated so low.

It's really beautiful. I can't describe how I feel. The emotional line is also very sweet.