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Overall, it's good. The environment, atmosphere, and character creation are okay. The author has ideas, but there seem to be a bit too many ideas, which leads to problems with the structure of the writing and a little too much foreshadowing. In terms of plot. It doesn't matter if you whitewash it, but the plot is a bit slow. You may also have your own considerations. The complete reconstruction of the revenge character later can be regarded as a kind of revenge. After all, killing is also revenge, and being treated as a dog is also revenge. To quote the original text, "Death is not the end, but the beginning of allegiance." Keep up the hard work and try to reconstruct the previous chapters if you have the chance, come on!

Brother, where are your heroines?

Overall, it's good. It's worth watching if you like the harem. The settings are reasonable. I really like the design of the palace. The plot is exciting and rich in content, and the characters have distinct personalities. I hope the protagonist will meet a more powerful opponent to play the game. I also hope that all the members in the palace will have a good ending (especially Xiaoguang).

[Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Personally, I feel very good. Come on, keep working hard, I believe in you.

It's a pretty good novel. It's set up with two cheats. I don't know why not many people read it.

It looks good, the author will keep up the good work

I think it's pretty well written

Okay, well written

Hurry, get out all the manuscripts!

The novel is well written, there are generally no problems with the text, the concept is okay, and the tension is relaxed.

5 Star praise! Because the author is away from stereotypes, away from what others say, and away from vulgar taste. Explore new directions and express your own opinions! Worthy of encouragement

Well written. Such a low score. Have you been tricked?

Super nice novel

It's okay, you can take a look, come on

The start looks good so far. I'll give the author a five-star first to encourage him. If the follow-up doesn't look good, I'll deduct stars [laughter]

The setting is relatively good. As an old bookworm, there are few books that I can read [like][like][like]

Clear structure and great content