Cultivation of Immortals Is Wrongly Linked, and Pure Saints Throw Themselves into Their Arms

A very interesting book. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was a generic product that uses witches to help with cultivation. In the end, there were 60 pictures, and the protagonist was still a quasi-boy who only broke once. The overall plot design and character creation are quite good and worth watching.

Well, I personally quite like this kind of saintly chase, and the criticisms are very clear. The bad things in the comments are all those that have not been read below. If you read below, there will be explanations. The logic is clear, but the pace is a bit slow. The chapter of Hua Ye Ye looking for the protagonist is too long. Okay, when I read Chapter 58, I felt it was a bit abstract.

The plot is good, the pace is moderate, the emotions are delicate, and the writing style is humorous. The protagonist has an online IQ, a lovable personality, and a way of dealing with people. Life is like a play. He has high acting skills. He is careful and observant. He runs decisively when an opportunity arises. He fights boldly for interests. He never forgets to seek revenge when he has a grudge. He studies hard and has full self-discipline. He has a thick face and a dark heart. He has a lot of cunning and flexible bottom lines... I think the main character is a good character. The plot of the character taking orders is quite interesting. The first one is "Swallow, how can I live without you", the second one is "Don't bully a young girl into being poor", and the third one is "Keep that girl". I hope the protagonist will not abandon this relationship consulting business. The author can intersperse his writings. The above are just personal opinions [I learned it]

In terms of the plot, the unexpected driving was a bit funny, but maybe because someone reported it, after the little black room came out, fewer people watched it and the profit was no longer good. The fairy world can only be passed through in a hurry. The harem is as follows. The 18 human maids and the 7 demon maids are all related, but not much is written about them. 1A saint from the Hehuan Sect, one of the five major forces in Lingyuan Continent. (Rating: D) 2 [Yue Yao] The protagonist's neighbor next door to Fangshi Dongfu, a disciple of the inner sect of Mingyin Tiangong. (Rating: C) 3ZhaojunZhaojun, the demon master of the Demon Realm, is a demon clan whose spirit is enlightened by the silver mirror. (Rating: D) 4XuanyingThe prince of the Holy Spirit Kingdom, the little civet cat is her clone. (Rating: E) 5Shangguan WanrouThe master of Miaoxian Palace and the master of slave Lin Xianxian. (Rating: D) 6 [Baili Qinghui] A contemporary saint of the Yuqing Immortal Sect, one of the five major forces in Lingyuan Continent. (Rating: D) 7 [Baili Wangshu] The former witch of the Miaoxian Palace of the Demon Sect and the sister of Baili Qinghui. (Rating: D) 8QingliThe master of Die Nian Peak of Hehuan Sect and the master of Hua Ye Ye. (Rating: C) 9 [Lingwei] His majesty, the Holy Spirit Kingdom of the demon clan, is an immortal in the tribulation period. (Rating: C)

The writing style is a bit immature, but the plot is interesting and some parts are quite unexpected. The flaws are not hidden and it is worth watching. (There are many female protagonists, who can suppress the realm but not the combat power. The combat power can kill across borders. The female protagonists are all original and not second-hand. The male protagonist is not cowardly and brainless when facing the enemy. The traditional cultivation realm is divided, and there is no need to remember the messy realm settings.) Come on, the author, work hard to update, there are too few now, not enough to read!

The story is interesting, the plot is not procrastinating, and there is no poisonous point. The male protagonist is not like Teddy who rushes to pick up girls at the first sight, and only develops with an emotional foundation. Quality 9.5 Or above

It's a good read. I love reading it. Highly recommended by Shuhuang. It's not like other books. It's just like an assembly line production. There are quite a lot of interesting jokes in this book [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Although there are many flaws, they are rare in this environment. It is a pity that the environment really limits the details of the book. Many places were obviously deleted in a small dark room, making the reading incoherent. However, the advantage is that the harem is open and open and never separated. Many harem stories are included in one The heroine never appeared again after only a few pictures. This setting of always being together is the standard for a good harem story. Unfortunately, although the harem are getting stronger, they don't have many opportunities to appear. They hardly help the protagonist in the battle, but the problem is not big. At least the emotional line is clearly written. It's a pity that the review really blocked the essence, and the only one-size-fits-all approach is really helpless.

It's pretty good, and it still looks like new. It has some minor flaws but it looks pretty good. I don't know why it scored so low.

Except for being a bit short, there are no problems with the plot. I feel that too few people have read it, so the rating cannot go up. Logically speaking, there is nothing wrong with this 9.0 Book. It is worth reading. It is a harem, a bit like an urban immortal, and there is no brainless pretense. It is just right. Good luck to the author [laughs]

It is a slow-paced novel about daily immortality. The protagonist is a casual cultivator with no background, struggling in the world of immortality. It has a bit of urban flavor in it, which is quite interesting. The recruitment of girls is not brainless. The relationship between each female character is developed step by step and is very attentive. The fly in the ointment is that this book has entered a small dark room, and Che Wen Gai has changed beyond recognition. It is not enjoyable to read, otherwise it would be a solid 9.5 Points. The author's writing style is quite humorous, and many of the jokes and character settings are quite interesting. For example, the saint son likes to compare his beauty with the saint girl. I laughed when I saw this, thinking that the saint son was jealous of the protagonist and the saint girl being together. He spent a long time pretending to be a boy and a girl, and asked the mirror every day who was the most beautiful between the saint girl and the saint girl. There are many unexpected reverse designs like this. Some readers will say that the protagonist is not decisive enough in killing. Considering the background of the story, the protagonist does not have a strong backer as a casual cultivator. The world is not only about fighting and killing, but also about human relationships. It's unrealistic for a casual cultivator to challenge a sect with thousands of years of experience. It's also not in line with the character of a protagonist who has worked his way up from the bottom. This book is not about Long Ao Tianwen. The appropriate and reasonable slap in the face balances this point so that it is not not enjoyable to read.

It's around eight o'clock. It's very suitable for leisure and entertainment. It has a little pornographic content and a lot of weird and funny jokes. It's very interesting. The ending is a little fast, but it's a good ending. Although the system has a large proportion, fortunately it looks very comfortable and overall you can take a look.

I'm following from the previous book, the heroine's portrayal is very delicate, keep it up.

Non-toxic, knife-free and with multiple female protagonists, it is very difficult to find such a novel in Zaiyang Persimmon. The quality is definitely higher than the current rating. It's a pity that it ended at the speed of light due to force majeure. Otherwise, it could be mentioned in the review.

The rare grass jelly for tomatoes is knife-free and non-toxic. The male protagonist is invincible all the way but does not lack tension. The female protagonists are also very interestingly written, with just the right amount of humor without being boring. However, it was hit hard by the censorship, and the content and length were greatly cut down. It was ended hastily in the later period, otherwise it would have been a pity to write a thousand chapters. But being able to finish this situation is already a top-notch author. It must be 5 stars.

This is a good harem novel about cultivating immortals. The emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists are very detailed. It is not a ruthless killing of straight men. For me, I will not read novels without female protagonists, and I will not read novels without harem. The plot design is also reasonable, the female protagonist is decisive, and there are no poisonous points. Everyone can eat it with confidence. I give it a five-star review. I hope the author will work hard and keep up the good work!

It's pretty good, a purely entertaining harem story, and the system is awesome and doesn't steal the show, unlike some systems that are very annoying.

I finished reading it in two days. It is a very exciting novel. Each heroine is well portrayed, the writing is also very good, and the content is wonderful. Can the update be faster? Can't wait to continue reading.

The writing style, the plot is very good, and it's funny, not too toxic. I bought it as a subscription for the book next door. The author said that many cuts were made due to entering the dark room, and the writing was more streamlined towards the end, but I felt that the overall flow was still very smooth. The author said that there were some details about the daughter that he wanted to write about later, and he couldn't write it down.

After reading it, I will come back to evaluate it. Overall, it is quite good. The writing style and plot are all worthy of praise. You can read it and recommend it. When I read it, it scored 8.4. To be honest, in an environment like Tomato, this score is too low. I suspect someone maliciously scored it. I read novels. The most important thing is the writing and plot. If it's not good, I'll firmly resist it. This book is worth at least 9.5 On Tomato. Not to mention too much, the author is very careful. Worth recommending.

It's good-looking, and I really like the character of the male protagonist. He's not overly pretentious, but he's a bit cunning and interesting, so it's quite natural. Also, I like the little cat Feifei [Adoration]

The writing style is a bit white, but the writing is relatively smooth and the content is quite interesting. It's something you can read at a glance.

The story is very good, and I can follow the entire book here without poison or thunder. The early and middle stages are well written, and the emotional handling and details are very good. It's a pity that I went into a dark room and deleted too many things. I can only rush the ending. Alas, it's a pity. I'm looking forward to the new work. It's really good [Like]

The framework, plot, and character settings of this book are 90% similar to a book I read two years ago. There are some optimizations in the cheating method and some details. I forget the specific book but it must be there. I remember that the cat is a boss [smile]

It's a lot better than before. Come on, come on.

I have seen Chapter 71 so far, let me comment first. The "Monthly Report" created by Jin Yuan's encounter made me instantly feel the shadow of Entertainment Spring and Autumn. Seeing the mosaic and leaves at the back, there are more shadows of the entertainment spring and autumn, and the character looks like a combination of Yue Xiaochan and Qin Wuye.

Not bad, not bad, the more you look at it, the bigger it gets [Admiration][Admiration][Shy][Shy]

It's "good" to watch, but if you don't like it, watch more hehe The female channel Lu Tai is "good", watch it hehe Having fun alone is not as good as having fun with everyone hehe Get them all into the water! Hee hee hee

Okay, okay, the biggest advantage is that the relationship is not abrupt, there is foreshadowing, development, and a lot of fun to watch, but the disadvantage is that there are too few updates! ! !

Very good, the writing is better than the previous book, there is no poison, and the car is faster