In the City Where Women Are Respected, I Became Their White Moonlight

Yes, except for being a bit softer in Wanqing, the protagonist, as a normal "man" who has traveled through the past, does not challenge the principle of being a normal person (especially the chapter about changing clothes on the beach looks uncomfortable). In my opinion, the heroine is just the most efficient layer of skin (that is, a layman) for the enjoyment of women chasing men, not to mention that in male channels, it is taboo to be a soft-skinned shrimp or a tortoise from a male perspective. Afterwards, it is not difficult to see that the protagonist's attributes of being a gentle and good person are too high, especially Jiu An and Bai Zhi. Good people have principles, and bad people have to have motives. They all serve to promote the plot. On the whole, it is still very good. It is humorous and has a sense of experience. The characters are three-dimensional, the swinging and complex psychological activities are more vivid, and the sweet and ups and downs of the plot are more growth-oriented. It is interesting, keep updating, and come on!

In fact, the first part is okay, but after meeting Sister Lu, the protagonist was created into an image that would not feel weird if the gender of all the characters was changed. For example, the description of the tender white feet and so on was relatively soft, that is, he changed from a tough man to his sister's little bitch [face covering] I don't know what happens next, but I personally hope that he can be calmer and harder.

Judging from the article, you have surpassed 90% of the authors, but from that point of view, I feel a little sorry for Li Bai Porridge for some reason. It reminds me of Lu Mingfei and his senior sister. However, Bai Porridge is less than Lu Mingfei, although he lacks the ability to exchange 1/4 of his life for power, but he has a sense of ambition. When he was redeemed by the male protagonist, I actually felt very touched. When I saw that the male protagonist had been eaten by the rich woman, Li Bai Porridge, as a poor girl, When I still couldn't get anything and when I was ridiculed by Qiaoqiao, I felt a little sad for no reason. I was touched by his dissatisfaction. It seemed that I saw Lu Mingfei in the if line. It made me feel like after being redeemed, I tried my best to become famous and then marry the person who redeemed me. It may be the sequelae of the Dragon Clan, but I really hope that there will be a good follow-up to Baizhou. Good luck to the author.

Female heroes are all for people with 4i tendencies. Men who watch them have "feminine" in their hearts (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡

Why is the yellow hair gone in Chapter 10 [I'm about to cry]

I feel it is the best one I have read in the past few weeks. It is emotional and not anecdotal, and unlike other similar or similar articles, I don't eat meat in chapters 100 and 200. I should finish this one soon (I won't comment until I finish chapters 50 and 60).

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The rhythm is okay now, and the author really listens to advice. Readers who have problems or unreasonable sentences will remind the author to make real changes. From the current point of view, the direction of the article and the plot are not poisonous. It is okay to keep writing at this pace. Of course, there are still some slight flaws, such as the time arrangement for the college entrance examination. It is a small mistake, and it is not a big problem to accept. Keep up the good work. Compared with many new authors, they have written very well, and even surpassed some authors with "LV 5th level titles" [Like] I've read Chapter 14 so far

The protagonist dyed his hair yellow just to protect himself. The male protagonist did not do anything bad and he is a decent person. Later, I dyed my hair back to normal. It looks nice now that it's less toxic.

The male protagonist is not a sissy, he is good in daily life, and he has good reviews.

The male protagonist is not a mother-in-law, and there is nothing poisonous about it. [Sending Hearts] is very good in a novel about women. Is the author really a newcomer? [Pouts]

It's a good book, but the updates are too slow. Why can't the author write the text overnight? [Smile] Isn't it enough to code for 12 hours a day? Ha Jifen, you guy [Smile]

The story is novel and logical, the author greatly "come on!" [Admiration]

It looks okay so far, but the introduction is a bit girly [laughing]

Lin Qiaoqiao has become a master of suffering, give him a chance, really [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] It's a good read. Well, if some boys can't accept it, just think of it as a pseudo-lily. After all, if the male protagonist's character is changed to our world, he is indeed a male, but his gender has been changed.

I feel pretty good. The plot is more everyday. I feel like the setting of the protagonist is pretty good, neither strong nor weak. It's enough [like][like]

This nunzun's writing is really beautiful. If you eat too much coarse chaff, eat some fine chaff. Especially the chapters where the male protagonist is a yellow guy? It's fun for me to watch. [Cover face] [full] [full][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][shy][shy][shy][shy]

I can keep this pace, but now I feel like the presence of the previous characters has been weakened since Sister came out.

It's good to watch, updated quickly, and there are too many female protagonists. Originally, it's a female character. It feels bad to have too many female protagonists (I just love it).

Welcome to leave a message. If you have any ideas, please tell me. I will read it. How long have you been watching Kangkang?

Wai Rui Gu is so good that my head rotates 360 degrees

It's okay,,,(I really like that you have to have at least 5 words to post a comment)

At least now I think it looks pretty, come on

It's good to read. Many of the female protagonists are transsexuals. The main character turns into a sissy. The main character in this book is quite courageous.

It's good, there is no eye-catching plot

In addition to being a bit girly and coquettish in front of the policewoman. She is too manly in front of other heroines. Use modern people's thinking to collide with the contrast between the female world. It's time to eat, no ink stains. I give it a high score because the male protagonist is not a girl. It suits my taste.

Five-star praise first, then another. Writing about the harem is like defusing a bomb. I suggest you choose one as the ending. If a woman had multiple husbands in a normal world, do you think it's reasonable?

Who gave such a good novel three stars?

Okay, she's not a sissy like other heroines

Not bad, I hope the author will publish another female novel