He transmigrates into the primordial world and becomes Li Jing, the commandant of Chentang Pass!
After his third son, Nezha, is born, Li Jing unexpectedly awakens the Good Parenting System!
Whether he raises Nezha to become a success or protects him from harm, he can receive a hundredfold reward in return!
So, after giving Nezha a sound spanking, he receives the Spirit-Linking Swordplay and the Nine Pagodas of the Stupa!
After helping Nezha resolve the crisis with the East Sea Dragon Clan, he receives the Boundless Ocean Spear and the Celestial Origin Gourd of Primordial Unity!
After helping Nezha refine and remake his body, he receives the twelfth-grade Pure World White Lotus!
Before he knows it, Li Jing, once merely a human commandant of Chentang Pass, has grown into an unparalleled powerhouse who can stand tall for his child and look down on all under heaven!
No more
Tsk tsk tsk. . .
The self-narration is too strong, there are too many words of praise, and everyone's name must be written by one name, but no more "you, me, her, him"
It's not bad, I'm just trying to push my limits
Too many adjectives
AI feels too heavy
It feels okay
Come on author Oli, there's nothing wrong with it
Well written!