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It's very interesting and funny, and I don't want a female protagonist! I met a sister online half a year ago I met a 32-year-old sister online half a year ago. We chatted very well and we were like a confidante in ancient times. Today she asked to meet, but I hesitated. I said you have a family and it felt uncomfortable to meet her. But she said it was okay and they were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty, with an S-shaped figure. In fact, she is not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a coffee shop. We did not choose to meet elsewhere. We were mainly afraid of meeting acquaintances. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for about an hour. While waiting for her, I looked at her photo and thought it was a "car rollover scene." She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is my favorite type. She also recognized me and didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good and made people feel warm. Her heart rate was a bit fast. After sitting in the coffee shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process was She peeled shrimps for me, picked out fish bones, and walked out of the restaurant after dinner. She held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got off the car, she said give me a hug. When I got home, I found that she put a note in my pocket, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content...

I'm good-looking, well-organized, and the main character isn't anything like a stallion. It's purely for the sake of becoming an immortal, not for anything else. And he is kind, but not holy. For example, take Liu Ruyan in it. When she was making decisions in private, the protagonist did not choose to coddle her, but chose to make her suffer, but he did not kill her or kill her indiscriminately. Then there are basically no casualties in the many tasks that the protagonist does, and he will not let others die just because they disrespect him. It has the character of a modern time traveler. Anyway, I quite like this book.

This book is too abstract and has all kinds of jokes, which is really fun to see [laughing]

The author wants the protagonist to be uniquely beautiful. I see so many people who want Ziwei Tiandao to be the heroine. I feel numb [crying] Seeking unique beauty, the main character is a solo author...

Overall, the shortcomings are not hidden, each character has special characteristics. Personally, I feel that the role of Tiandao is very novel. As for the shortcomings, I will not talk about the role of the harem master. How many times have I wanted to complain about it? Oh, but I gave up in the end. It will not make me feel bad. I can only say that this is a small point. The other characters are pretty good (✪▽✪)

The protagonist is Tiandao's father, and the Tiandao of everyone in the group is either the protagonist's son, or was beaten to death and crippled by the protagonist. The character of the protagonist is hard to describe in one sentence. He is a feudal patriarch. Those who obey me prosper and those who go against me perish. Small favors that are only a drop in the bucket will never be reciprocated, and the kindness is repaid incisively and vividly. In the group, there is the group leader who pretends to be sophisticated, Er13 who makes jokes, the hardcore who supports unconditionally, and the female group friends who are coquettish and unrestrained. Four stars low quality. Identification completed.

After two days of reading, the following is just my personal opinion. This article has a daily-style atmosphere, without the brain-burning battle of wits, nor making people laugh out loud, but it is relatively humorous, and the use of a large number of jokes and king lines is also remarkable. The author does not copy mechanically or forcefully. It can be said that every plot and line is cut just right, and has been adapted accordingly. In fact, we can roughly tell that the author is not very old. He is around middle school students and college students. Compared with the all-age novels written by veteran authors, this kind of people know exactly what you want to read. Moreover, this article is indeed a good work for passing time and relieving stress. It is very suitable for students who have gone to school for a day to go home and read novels to relieve stress and kill time. If you are someone who usually has nothing to do after school and homework and wants to kill time to relieve stress. This book can be read without thinking. Among them, the settings about the way of heaven and so on are relatively new in my opinion. This is only my personal opinion. In addition, I have not finished reading it. If there is anything missing. Supplements are also welcome. Then there is my selfish sentence. The Children of Origin are in urgent need of strengthening.

Wow, it's so exciting. It's such a hearty reading. It's truly an incomparable and exciting article.

So far, the writing is cool and the male lead is very handsome! I just want to ask if the male protagonist doesn't have cp, right?

Brother Yi is so awesome! ! ! This is an absolute genius, an invincible strong man. My admiration for Brother Yi is like a torrential river, endless and inexhaustible. It is so strong! ! ! ! ! ! [Flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][shy][shy][shy]

It's a 9-point score, it's a comfortable and personable refreshing article, I recommend it!

At present, the development of the plot is still very stable. There are many jokes in the novel. Those who can accept it will find it interesting, and those who cannot accept it may find it inexplicable. However, this type of invincible flow is particularly easy to end, and it is not long. I hope it can end smoothly.

There are novel ideas, but the writing is as good as ghosts. Poison point preview (contains spoilers): There is a female supporting character Liu Ruyan in the back. If you hate this female supporting character, you can leave. This female supporting role never left the show, and was even helped to become an empress by the protagonist.

Absolutely positive reviews, and I received the chat group only after I was basically invincible. Seeing that there is currently no CP, no emotional inclination at all, and there is no female lead in the comments so far. In the eyes of the protagonist, Ziwei's Heavenly Way is like a hakimi, and the Tribulation of Becoming an Immortal is a great tonic that the protagonist holds in his arms and gnaws on, in an unmanned form. The whole story is quite irritating, and the rest of it feels like it has lost its salt. However, there are no ambiguous or explicit descriptions of women that are common among men, and it is very comfortable to watch. The article is super interesting and has a lot of funny jokes. The protagonist himself is also determined to become stronger. He is extremely powerful, decisive, domineering and greedy [laughing evilly], and is also super cautious. He spends all his time completing tasks to find treasures and so on. The world simply cannot bear his power.

I didn't want to read it when I saw that it was a new book and I had read so much, but I was a little interested in the subject of chat groups and planned to read a few chapters to taste it. I didn't expect the author to be so capable and read it in one go [Blow kiss]

Yes, some people say nanny stories, but I feel it is different from other nanny stories. The protagonists improve themselves for the resources of the mission, and they are very strong, not overpowering, and currently invincible.

The author's writing style is particularly good, the plot of the story is fluent and natural, and the writing style is concise and vivid. I read it around Tomato and found that it is one of the few well-written books. The logic is clear and smooth, and the character descriptions are well grasped. It is always enjoyable to the end. He is a good big brother. When I saw him, I thought, it would be really cool if I could have such a big brother on the mountaintop. It's so awesome. He can really ascend to heaven in one step. Hahaha, [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]. Overall, it's pretty good in every aspect. He's an author with quite mature writing skills. It's quite interesting to read. Five stars is enough. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Although it says it has been removed from the shelves, it seems that you can still read it if you add it to your bookshelf. I used to read dozens of chapters and found it quite interesting, so I kept waiting for it to be finished before reading it. In the end, I was exhausted, but luckily I added it to my bookshelf. You can still watch it.

666, Five-star praise, it's really fun to watch, I laughed to death

This novel is truly fascinating! The plot is full of twists and turns, the characters are vivid and vivid, and the writing is beautiful and smooth, making people want to put it down. I highly recommend it to readers who like adventure and fantasy stories, I believe you will fall in love with it as much as I do!

The language is vivid and humorous, and the plot is fast-paced. I haven't seen a female protagonist yet, so it's not brainless. The writing is clear and concise. The male protagonist's character is very popular with me. Each character has his own unique points. The world view is relatively large, and it's quite fun to follow the Dihua stream. But because it is a new book. The author's update speed is not good at all (tsk

What a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou read it himself. Sigh no... This must be one of the four great masterpieces -, definitely in the 21st century The first great sacred book, Shengxu is almost lacking in literary talent in front of it! Doupo In front of it, there is almost no connotation! Zhu Xian almost feels in front of it Love! Covering the sky is almost imaginary in front of it! Buddha is in front of it Nearly laid out! A rare classic of online novels! The 21st century The greatest literary works in history! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naiyan, Wu Chengen, Cao Xue Qin Kong Mo Lao Zhuang Li Du Su Xin Qin Han Wu Tang Zong Song Anzu Genghis Khan, Gautama, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle read All agreed! The author's book is really well written. Fluent writing and rhetoric Decent, deeply inherited from the Wei and Jin dynasties, and further carrying forward the style of the Tang Dynasty and the Song Dynasty It's a shame that I can read the author's book in my lifetime book. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. Read this book by the author After that, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness - Ah, such a good novel, if I can never read it again in the future What should I do? What should I do? Until I After putting this book by the author on the bookshelf without hesitation, I felt The excitement gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought Really, if others can't read such a good novel, then it won't be Is it a waste of the author's efforts? After painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to sacrifice my little self and dedicate myself to my greater self. I want I take out this book review and dedicate it to the world for reading. I want to write this novel~ -Go straight. Push it up, push it up! Push it up until everyone can see it So far! When I walk between heaven and earth, the sun is scorching and the moon is bright in the sky, I have to ask I - one sentence, is this novel enough to read? Not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are surging and the water is rolling. Ask me, is this novel enjoyable enough? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, I see beautiful buildings and jade buildings, and immortals in the sea of clouds. Ask me, is this novel updated quickly enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters, not enough speed and content Enough! Not even enough!

Good, good, the author deserves a reward! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] No? Why is it gone after you keep raising it? Prison fish, you must win the resurrection match.

The writing is pretty good. Liu Ruyan is too toxic. People who read this need antihypertensive medicine. If you want to pass the time, this book is a masterpiece.

When the first ray of morning sunlight gently passes through the sky, it wakes up the sleeping earth, and everything slowly wakes up in this gentle light. The early morning breeze is picturesque, taking away the silence of the night and bringing new vitality. At this time, both the mountains and rivers in the distance and the streams nearby are bathed in this faint golden light, like a vivid picture, which makes people intoxicated.

The protagonist is strong yet cautious, and there are also elements of comedy. It's a great book!

The novel combines the elements of cultivating immortals with chat group elements. The protagonist Chen Yi has traveled through the world of cultivating immortals for 800 years. When he is about to become an immortal, he is pulled into the "Mutual Aid Group for Travelers of All Worlds", but the group is full of cute newcomers who have just traveled through the world and are in various situations. This setting breaks the routine of traditional immortality novels and adds a lot of interest and freshness to the story. For example, the group members have various bizarre time-travel encounters, such as becoming abandoned concubines in the cold palace, villain cannon fodder, and the protagonist's father, etc., Making the plot full of variables and surprises.

He has always been very strong, his interaction with Ziwei Tiandao is very interesting, and his character is decisive in killing. I have been following it for a long time and have always kept it on my bookshelf. Now that it is finished, I read it. I also liked it very much before.

Tied (56) The setting is novel and the coolness is okay. After becoming invincible, you can help the poor and go to various worlds to win trophies while grabbing some opportunities. I don't know if after overcoming the tribulation and becoming an immortal, I still need to start from the grassroots level, but with the existence of group chat, it is probably not difficult to start from the grassroots level. Put it on the bookshelf first, and then see if you want to modify the rating later.

A great read, from beginning to end. Nothing poisonous. 9.1 Feels like a low rating to me.