A strange phenomenon appeared in the sky: the seven stars aligned.
When Li Kou opened her eyes, she was lying on a cot in a military camp, still in her armor and covered in blood. Outside the tent, soldiers shouted as they drilled. Inside, candlelight flickered over the military reports spread across the desk. They were the very plot she'd written herself.
Li Kou had entered her own novel and become the general who was supposed to die in battle.
In this world, gender roles were reversed and women held power. Li Kou, a modern romance novelist, had become the Northern Defender General, commanding a mighty army. Worse still, according to the original plot, three days later she would be struck by several arrows in battle and die on the field.
Memories surged back like a tide.
“General, a letter from the capital.” Her personal guard's voice interrupted my thoughts.
I unfolded the letter, and familiar handwriting appeared before me: “To my dear sister: I hear the fighting at the border is growing fierce. Father and Mother are worried day and night...” The handwriting was neat, yet there was a hint of unease.
A woman-dominated story. (The male lead wasn't chaste in his previous life, but both leads are chaste in this one.)
Please forgive the poor writing.
I've read about chapter 20. There are many questions First of all, the paragraph is too long. It is difficult to read the whole paragraph. It should be divided into paragraphs. Secondly, the psychological description of the characters is very strange. The same sentences and adjectives are repeated over and over again. Please add more words, it is a bit monotonous. Three repeats!!!!! There are too many paragraphs to describe, and one thing can be described repeatedly as to what it is doing. Don't write repeatedly about things that can be described in one or two sentences. It will look like it was written by AI.
Little me, give yourself a score 😳