A strange phenomenon appeared in the sky, with seven stars in a row.
When he opened his eyes, Li Kou was lying on the bed in the military camp, his armor still on and covered in blood. The shouts of soldiers practicing could be heard from outside the tent, and the candlelight inside the tent flickered, reflecting the military newspaper spread out on the table - it was the plot written by her herself.
Li Kou entered the novel he wrote and became a general who should have died in battle.
In this world, men and women are reversed, and women are respected. And Li Kou, a modern romance novel author, has now become a general in Zhenbei with a large number of troops. What's worse is that according to the original plot, I will be shot by several arrows in a battle three days later and die on the battlefield.
Memories come flooding in
"General, a letter from the capital." The voice of a soldier interrupted my thoughts.
I unfolded the letter, and familiar handwriting came into view: "My sister personally writes: I heard that the border war is tense, and my parents are worried day and night..." The handwriting is elegant, but there is a hint of uneasiness.
A novel about female honors (the male protagonist was unclean in his previous life, but he will be clean in this life)
Please forgive me if the writing is not good.
Reader comments
I've read about chapter 20. There are many questions
First of all, the paragraph is too long. It is difficult to read the whole paragraph. It should be divided into paragraphs.
Secondly, the psychological description of the characters is very strange. The same sentences and adjectives are repeated over and over again. Please add more words, it is a bit monotonous.
Three repeats! ! ! ! ! There are too many paragraphs to describe, and one thing can be described repeatedly as to what it is doing. Don't write repeatedly about things that can be described in one or two sentences. It will look like it was written by AI.
I've read about chapter 20. There are many questions First of all, the paragraph is too long. It is difficult to read the whole paragraph. It should be divided into paragraphs. Secondly, the psychological description of the characters is very strange. The same sentences and adjectives are repeated over and over again. Please add more words, it is a bit monotonous. Three repeats! ! ! ! ! There are too many paragraphs to describe, and one thing can be described repeatedly as to what it is doing. Don't write repeatedly about things that can be described in one or two sentences. It will look like it was written by AI.
Little me, give yourself a score [shy]