Hpcellar White Moonlight

This is the most beautiful HP fanfic I have ever seen. The author's writing style is very good and the descriptions are very charming. The heroine's favorite thing is always herself, and she will always surrender to herself. I really love this. After all, many people write fan fiction, and the female protagonists are just tools. Whether she becomes the heroine of Little Badger or the heroine of Little Snake, they all have their own characteristics. The characters described are very distinct and full of charm. I will always surrender to the charm of the heroine. A very good feature here is that the Harry Potter trio are no longer just emotional. They are really growing up and will not doubt Professor Snape. They are all very good babies. The novel described by the author is harmonious and has a touch of sadness, which is very charming (ps: it is not cruel, it is life) The sentences inside are also very well written, which makes me suspect that DaDa is not a novice. If he is a novice, it means DaDa is extremely talented and is really good at writing. Here are the sentences I excerpted: Sometimes, when a person misses an item, he is actually thinking about the person related to the item. We miss our hometown food because we miss the people in our hometown; we miss our childhood because we miss the people who have drifted away over the years. We may not realize it ourselves, but those people have become a kind of taste, a kind of... Temperature, engraved in our souls. Destiny, what is destiny? It is my fate to be born in a rough place, and it is my luck to be appointed a marquis and become a prime minister. China's golden mean has never been about mediocrity and incompetence. "Forget it" is what only those who have been hurt are qualified to say. Missing you probably means that there is no need to think of you in particular, your shadow is already everywhere in your life. A person's most profound love is probably that even though I am still in pieces, I can piece together a meager heartbeat to ache for you. Whether it's love or family affection. It's me wishing you well. "Memory is the reason why a person becomes himself and not someone else. Different past experiences create different people. If you abandon your own memory, it is tantamount to committing suicide without death." Being stubborn is an excuse for not being loved. Growth always involves pain, breaking bones, flesh, and blood to create a new person. Being kind to the weak can help them survive the cold winter; being kind to the enemy can bring spring back to the withered bones.

The author's writing style is so good. It is the best writing style I have ever read in HP. In this article, the heroine has memories from China. She also implements the thoughts of a Chinese very well. I will give you a few excerpts to give you a feel for the author's literary talent. "Destiny, what is fate? It is my fate to be born in a rough place, and it is my luck to be appointed a marquis and become a prime minister. China's golden mean has never been about mediocrity and incompetence. " "She looked blankly at the outside world, and seemed to see little Snape struggling in the thick smoke. Before he died, Professor Snape, did you run out of this dirty alley?" "Time is a great adventure. Some encounters may be reunions after a long separation. " Ps: I feel that the author is probably a liberal arts student. I really like the writing style [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Such a heart-warming article, so healing. After reading it, I feel I have forgiven the world. . . The heroine is a sunny and cheerful baby who has changed a lot of things. It has really become a children's book. It is very beautiful. The author's writing style is also very good. It has the feeling of a dreamy fairy tale... [Sending Hearts]

It looks good. In fact, I couldn't stand it at first. I thought it was a time-traveling film designed to save the professor. Unexpectedly, it turned out that the indigenous heroine was a prophet who came to the high-dimensional world (for HP). The setting was novel, and she was not specifically here for one person at the beginning, or to save literature. She was hesitant at first, and she would not conflict with the setting of the original Hermione. She was an auxiliary, not a help, but another kind of care for the team. CP Si Jiao, when getting along with Si Jiao, they were treated equally and respected by teachers at first. In the eyes of all the teachers, he was a good boy. Later, as they got along with each other, he became more and more biased toward Si Jiao, and the same was true for Si Jiao. The relationship between two people is equal and arises from getting along with each other. I like this. It's the same with the protagonist group. Mutual respect as equals is not about saving literature, so I really like to give five-star reviews. PS: Tomato don't recommend me fanfics that save literature. I think such feelings are inexplicable and unequal. It's inexplicable from the perspective of the original characters.

Beautiful! A very capable author (▽)>♡<(▽) The writing style is delicate and warm, not embarrassing and very logical. I haven't seen such fine chaff in Tomato for a long time wwww

Seni is so cute, the writing is so gentle, and the plot is so loving. I'm used to the interaction between Seni and Sijiao, and there aren't any weird or unreasonable plots or heart-felt descriptions in it. Great cheers [Adoration]

Wow wow wow, this book is really well written. I finished reading it in one afternoon and kept crying. It is clearly written in such a gentle way but I just wanted to cry. It feels like a moist fog. Seni is a very good baby. Platinum's noble family is the most important. Slytherin is uniquely inconsistent, but this time there is a gentle person. Two souls in a gray area, unable to go up or down, have experienced a turning point. Seni is a little snake in the coat of a little badger. The changes in her destiny are unpredictable, but ambitious people will never give in. It really feels good. It's a good victory for a desperate team.

The teacher's writing is really good. The writing style is completely different from the introduction. I have been persuaded to quit because of this weak introduction, but I still clicked in with the mentality of giving it a try. I am extremely glad for my choice at that time. The logic of the article is very good. Some of the author's views on the world and The concept coincides with mine, and the foreshadowing is very clever. It has the style of "a snake's gray line, a hidden pulse thousands of miles away". The setting of the heroine's identity and family background is very powerful, as if such a family really exists in the world written by Rowling. The writing is also really good. My underline in this book is the purpose. It is the most underlined book among all the books I have read so far. This is also a positive proof of my teacher's writing style. Moreover, there is no redemption for the sake of redemption. The setting of the heroine itself is very easy to cry (Caroline, the prophet who is destined to be wiped out of all existence by the world, finally completes her pursuit of destiny) ( Slight spoilers here), the heroine not only saved Sijiao, but also herself (it was the mutual redemption of two little bitter melons), and the author's extra story... He killed me with a knife, and you returned my tears... Some of the scenes are obviously very heartwarming, but I just feel sad... Well, I'm going off topic. All in all, this is a really good article and well worth it. This is also the first time in so long that I am eager to write a review on Tomato (also my first book review). The above are all my true thoughts. If there are any inappropriate points, please let me know. (If you don't accept it and didn't read it, you'll just make a rant) It is recommended to use the last paragraph of the main text for the introduction (personally I think it is very appropriate) Serenity Caroline × Severus Snape Slytherin's love goes against nature and abandons instinct. I am higher than heaven and earth, and I only bow my head for you. Yes, love is not tame. Please stay awake, stay rational, be yourself completely, and then love me. This story has nothing to do with who saves whom, it is just one soul gently touching another soul. My dear, the only one who can save you is yourself. And the only one I love is you. We come from the mire, we are full of ambition, We are cunning and shrewd, we desire glory, We are strong and calm, we are never afraid, We are Slytherins.

It's really great. I feel that the author's writing style is more delicate. It can make people invest emotionally. I really like our little heroine and Professor Snape. Slytherin is good at favoritism and Slytherin also enjoys favoritism.

The characters in the novel are so lifelike that they seem to appear on the page. The protagonist has a distinct personality, with both a brave and wise side and a fragile and confused side. This complexity makes the character more real and believable. The supporting characters also have their own characteristics, each with their own unique backstory and personality traits, and the interaction between them and the protagonist is full of emotional tension. Whether it is friendship, love or family affection, they are all vividly displayed between the characters, making people feel the warmth and complexity of human nature during the reading process.

The writing is really good. Reading the whole article makes me feel soft ❤️ In the early stage, every chapter really made me smile unconsciously. The professor also became more alive. The little foreshadowing laid in the previous part was also recovered in the follow-up. It is not too unexpected, but it is also very surprising. The setting of the Caroline family as an omniscient one is also one of the rare families that is written so that people don't realize it is golden finger, and can perfectly integrate into the HP magic world without feeling OOC. Really! ! Go see it! ! Very pretty! ! At least I didn't stop watching it after I started watching it. I even stayed up all night without sleeping [Sending Hearts]

[Girl giving candy·There is a knife (lower tears, please pay attention)] [The extra is also very good·Be watching if] [Face covering] The family knife is very heartbreaking, but this kind of erasure of the world is even more heartbreaking... Fortunately, the candy is still quite sweet, the master of the house is so handsome! (Four little ones of the same style scream [Sending Hearts]) [Eating Melon] Except for our well-raised Sifu who was ruined by the world consciousness and turned into an old bat... Others are very good, and the foreshadowing before and after is also very loving. There are many details, and the inner portrayal is also very detailed (it makes me cry 555~). Fortunately, we, Seni, never accepted our fate, and fortunately, Seni's family, friends, allies, and lovers also did not accept our fate, so everyone had a better ending. It is said that watching movies is really very social hahahahahaha [laughing evilly]. Fortunately, I didn't bring the person involved with me to watch the movie afterwards (Original Snape: Feed me the peanuts!!!). Snake Yard is equipped with Snake Yard. Silver is not very OOC, both have embedded threads, and it feels ok. The author has buried a lot of Easter eggs (Myrtle, a toy pendant, has all kinds of Easter eggs anyway, and it is very wow when you open it later).

The author's writing style is delicate and gentle, which touches people's hearts. He does not deliberately favor or look at other colleges with a prejudiced eye, but speaks out the advantages of all colleges. The heroine is really a very gentle person. Oh, I like the heroine's character so much. There are some thought-provoking words in the article, which made me suddenly understand why I like those characters? Especially the plot you wrote about Potter and the others understanding Professor Snape, I really hope to clear up all the misunderstandings and prevent Professor Snape from being misunderstood by Potter. When I read the original novel, I felt so sad when he risked his life to protect Potter but was still misunderstood and hated by Potter!

It's really great. I read the latest chapter in one breath after discovering this book. The author's writing is very detailed and vivid, and the writing style is very good. The style is like the tranquility and warmth of a fire in the fireplace while it's raining outside. Everyone is portrayed wonderfully. Everything is beautiful in the author's writing. The heroine is soft and tough, and the protagonists no longer doubt each other and they are all good friends. Okay, I can't think of anything here. It's really beautiful! When it is finished, I will write another paragraph to recommend such a good work [Love]

It's very nice, the heroine has a silly look to her, but she's not silly at all. She had an airy feeling that was different from everyone around her. It's very gentle and warm. When I read this book, I felt that all the people in this book suddenly became cute! [Laughing] I really like to see the heroine's views on others. It's really warm and cute. [Shy] I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Blowing kiss]

It's beautiful, but I don't know why the rating is only 8.1. The author's writing style is really delicate and gentle. There is no clichéd cool writing, and there is no Shura field of Mary Sue. It just reveals the truth bit by bit, and the plot gradually forms a closed loop. The language is calm and gentle. Just by reading the words, you can feel that Saini is not willing to accept her fate, but does not want to surrender to it. "Live to be 18." A simple and sincere wish, which may come true easily in the eyes of others, is indeed a huge mountain for Saini. She resisted fate and never compromised with it. She is the head of Caroline's family, a prophet of prophecy, and a genius, but she is herself. She never surrendered to fate, she controlled it. She succeeded. It's really Bai Yueguang. I hope the author will update more.

I was really convinced. It made my heart melt at first, and then he stabbed me from time to time. In the end, even the change of identity did not shake their friendship. This book really shaped everyone's image very well, and really broke some of the conventions of fan fiction about characters. The stereotypes and various foreshadowings are intertwined to form a perfect closed loop. I feel that this type of drama is really right. It is obviously the ending of he, but I just feel empty in my heart. The writing is really good. I guess it will take a long time to get out of it [crying] [crying] [crying]

It can be said that this book has subverted all my understanding of HP. The author is really cultured! I can't imagine how someone can write both lighthearted and funny and heavy things so well, and be able to capture both firmly without being abrupt. First of all, this book is supposed to be about lighthearted daily life, but at the same time it is very logical, so it must be read with your brain, otherwise it will be easily confused. It's really bold to choose this kind of subject matter, but we managed to hold it together! But now I want to ask when will the showdown with SS be? I want to see their sweet daily life... Reading now is like solving a puzzle, and there are many golden sentences!

A very good-looking novel, with a beginning and an end. Although the number of words is a little short, it is a very complete story. If you like Severus Snape's novel, this novel is definitely worth reading. You can feel the very warm feeling in the novel, and the regrets in the movie are basically solved. Moreover, many of the ideas in the novel are extraordinary and worth thinking about. The heroine Ji in the novel is a Slytherin and a Hufflepuff student, which shows that people's personalities are very changeable, not just one. In the novel, the heroine is both strong and ambitious, leaning towards Slytherin, but also tolerant, gentle and patient, leaning towards Hufflepuff. This is a novel worth reading!

It's great. I originally thought it was a love story about the encounter between the Book Traveler and Snape, but later I found out that this is the history of Cerunity's struggle against fate. I respect Cerunity, her tenacity, unyielding and madness, and this great woman.

Sister Bao is really cute. Capibara has a gentle and firm character. Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Xiaolong are all cute and kind-hearted children. Si Bao also makes people feel warm. Under the leadership of Si Bao, the little ones here no longer have prejudices against Si Bao. It is well written.

It's very, very, very beautiful. The author's writing style is great, smooth and delicate, logically closed, and has no flaws. It can be followed from serialization to completion (I never read serialization, unless it's a particularly good novel). The author's novels have complete characters, neither thin nor one-sided, and the characters are very full. Especially in terms of emotions, the writing is neither too warm and greasy nor too dry and dry. It is handled just right and is particularly consistent with the characters. The concept of the novel is also great, "I want to kill fate with my own hands", I want everyone to see me and remember me, and not let history forget me, ah ah, it's very, very cool. I'm short of words and can't come up with any gorgeous words, but it's really beautiful. I highly recommend it and I'm looking forward to the extra chapter [Love]

It is particularly beautiful, and there are many foreshadowings that can be matched one by one. I feel sorry for little Saini, but fortunately, she and Si Jiao healed each other's childhood, and little Saini also broke through the curse of fate. The particularly delicate and gentle words tell a story full of sharp spears [almost crying] [almost crying] much more [almost crying] [almost crying] The big and thin water stabbed countless knives into my heart [crying][crying]

I really like this article. It can be seen between the lines that the author is a very gentle person. He always touches my cute spots and the words are warm. The writing style is also very good. I only slowly appreciate and collect good sentences at an age when I don't have to take exams [laughing and crying], he The author can truly understand the suffering under Chinese education. It is not the suffering that appears on the surface, but the light words that reveal the heaviness. He is a person who truly understands our suffering. The article contains the helplessness of reality, the beauty after the storm, and most importantly, the resistance that is unwilling to be manipulated. What runs through the whole article is to live, live better, and live for yourself. Also, if you love others, you must also love yourself, love yourself first and then love others. Author, great [blowing kiss] This character is super cute and lovable. Growth is not easy, but everyone is working hard. My favorite characters are Civet Hero and Sister Bao, because I am a cat person. [Adoration] The civet cat hero revival match is awesome! ! ! The foreshadowing is all connected. Time is a reincarnation. Everything will be fine in the end. If not, just change it.

It is a very novel novel. I prefer the character design of the heroine in the early stage. During the marriage, the heroine was purely Ewtlin's character. Of course, it would also be good to combine the two later, but I prefer the early and pro-generation characters. Regarding the love line, to be honest, I feel that the love line in this book is quite rushed. It's the feeling of suddenly realizing what you like (the heroine to Snape) Because in the later period, the heroine and Snape, I personally feel that they are more familiar with each other through memory, so I think it will be very strange here. I feel that they are not the same as they were before. Even though they have that memory, they are still different. Here, I don't think it's good. Although they are the same person, I think they are quite separated. I think they are different people. That is, whether it is Snape or the heroine, I feel that they are not the same person in the parent generation and in the child generation. There is also the entanglement about Harry's feelings for Snape, because this book does not expose Snape as a whistleblower... But overall it's still very good, but I feel that the progress is a bit too fast later. The heroine is a pure Slytherin. Please correct my typo.

All I can say is that the author is simply a god! A masterpiece! Where it's sweet, it can bore people to death, and when it's cruel, it can sting people to death. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and every one of them is filled in. It's an epic shock to see what follows. The writing is also very good, written like a poem. This is a rare book that does not criticize any person/college. Everyone in it is very cute and gets along very warmly. Saini is definitely my favorite heroine, the person who loves herself the most. She is not only gentle, tolerant, smart, kind, but also cool! Although I didn't want to click on it when I saw the title at first, luckily, I finally clicked on it. I hope no one will miss this book! Highly recommended! ! !

What a great article [crying]. I thought it was the old-fashioned time-travel or anti-travel, but I didn't expect that the author really played with the setting of the prophet, nesting and reversing it layer by layer, and wrote the best story. Needless to say, Madam is great. I originally wanted to read two chapters of Hypnosis before going to bed and read it until 3:30. Great!

In HP fanfics, I have seen a lot of heroines walking in the timeline, but this one still stood out to me. The emotional drama between the protagonist and Snape is subtle, and there is no sudden change in personality because of each other. Everything is a long-term foreshadowing, just for the final embrace, and there is no deliberate increase in speculation about a certain force. It is very stable. The author is very productive, and your dear readers and children are waiting for food [shy][shy][shy]

So far, the logic is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and the heroine feels warm and open-minded. She walks in the world, is free from the world, but dares to win against her fate. Such a heroine is really lovable. It would be very sad if Snape were the male protagonist. Fate teased him again and again. The female protagonist who should have existed in his era was given to Harry by fate. It is difficult not to complain or hate. In the end, I also hope that he can get enough favor to bury the miserable and desolate first half of his life.

It's so beautiful when I go! ! ! ! ! This book can be ranked in the top three HP books I have read! The author's writing is super good and the style is very gentle. The writing style in the first half is cute, warm and has many funny jokes. Later, as the identity of the heroine is revealed, the plot reverses and reverses again. The foreshadowing before and after becomes a closed loop. It feels really cool. I especially admire the author's imagination. Love, family, friendship, everything is very touching and tear-jerking. Everyone has a knife on their body, but they are all very gentle babies. There are many emotional explosion points that make me feel particularly shocked. I don't know how to describe it, but it's really sour and gratifying and I can't bear the tears. I can't help but feel like I'm falling down. I once again praise the author's writing style which is really awesome. The heroine's lover loves herself first, the mutual redemption between them, and the moment when they finally break the shackles of fate and take control of their own destiny after going through hardships, I shed tears. It's so beautiful! !