Ant in the Palm
掌中蝼蚁
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 700k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Apocalypse
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Why Are There Always High-Rise Safe Houses in the Apocalypse? Is There No Such Thing as a Bunker Villa?
Wasteland, Robots, Scavengers, Cyborgs, Alien Beasts, Various Races
There Is a Shortage of Books, Please Contribute.
Unlimited streaming, group chats, and more! Don't be brainless, don't forcefully deceive and show off. Thanks
Are there any Cthulhu-style novels? Don't use indescribable weird novels. Don't let the protagonists be from the past, and don't let the protagonists kill people randomly!
Apocalyptic or Zombie Novels
Not the Virgin's
Is There Anything Good to Read? the Doomsday Book Is Gone.
I would like to read a book like "Global Wasteland: Starting with Upgrading Your Shelter".
The End of the World Is the Best
I want to read a book similar to "The End of the World: Why Did You Mess with Her? She's Cheating (God Comes to the End of the World)". The best and most relaxing book in the apocalypse
I'm Looking for a Post-Apocalyptic Article That Doesn't Involve Cheating or Cheating.
Nowadays, various spaces in the bad streets are worth billions at every turn. The apocalyptic articles written by a group of children with no life experience are really disgusting. Is there any kind of apocalyptic novel that doesn't rely on space, golden fingers, or parents leaving tens of billions to hoard supplies?
The End of the World + Zombies + Super Powers + Space + Country + Pattern Opening + Strong Women + Group Portraits
I would like to read a book similar to "I give instructions to the protagonists in the apocalypse (Special Situation in the Apocalypse)". I want to be like Bai Yaoyao, Sheng'an, and many more
Please, I've Been Out of Books for Three Weeks and I Really Don't Know What to Read. Do You Have Any Recommendations?
Don't Push the Ones That Don't Look Good, Don't Push the Ones That Don't Feel Aggrieved.
Looking for Apocalyptic Literature, Metaphysical Literature (Love) (It Would Be Better If a Real Person Listens to the Book)
I want to watch something similar to "The End of the World: Little Corpses, I, Hoard, Hoard, Hoard!" Book. (Love) (It would be better if there are real people listening to the book) There is also the little Taoist priest and the fox, the childhood sweethearts metaphysics, and the doomsday protagonist is given a code (I forgot what the heroine is called Sheng)
1111111111, I Want You to Be Number One in My Heart
I want to read a book similar to "Eternal Death, Bury Heaven, Bury Earth, Bury All Living Beings". Shuhuang is dead, he is going to die
Ask for Doomsday Texts, Not the Holy Mother
I want to watch something like "After the End of the World, I Killed Half of the People!" Book. Not the Holy Mother
Is There Any Male Protagonist with Normal Outlook on Life? 🍅 Some Books Made My Outlook on Life Split.
Single girl or multiple girls are fine, as long as the three views are correct, any subject matter is fine
It's from Douyin. After looking at the first few pictures, it's true that it's a bit watery, but I can't really put it into words. In short, it's very awkward. The protagonist's time travel is not explained clearly. It is best to have a transition and introduce things such as working as a worker, time traveling in 2025, being hit by a car, etc. Otherwise, it lacks a sense of substitution. The description of the environment is also average. You can't rely on readers to guess. There must be a general description of the environment, such as how big the laboratory is and whether it is underground or on the ground. These explanations must be provided, otherwise it will be difficult to substitute. Because you are writing about a different world, you have to introduce the city as big as it is and how many people there are. You can use the perspective of the protagonist, but a lot of scene descriptions are necessary. It will be uncomfortable to just focus on the dialogue, and the introduction of the characters is also very dramatic. In fact, the protagonist's character setting can be more intelligent, such as that of a drama god, with limited clues to piece together the current situation, so that readers will feel comfortable. The character description at the beginning does not reflect the protagonist's wisdom, and the protagonist's responses later begin to destroy the character. The above three points must be met. Also, it is difficult to describe the chattering sound of this communicator. There are also problems with the description of the supporting characters, such as too little introduction to their dressing, body and appearance. In short, I feel that the sense of substitution is lacking too much, and the start of the golden three cards is not ideal. My personal suggestion is to re-open a new book with the setting and big world view. I just abandoned this one and re-opened three chapters to see if anyone can read it. Otherwise, the number of people is too small, and I have to eat for love. The above only represents my personal views. Give it five stars, cheers for the author. And I think the introduction is better than the main text, alas.