I’m new to writing, so feel free to criticize me and point out what needs work. I’ll do my best to revise it.
Ten Days In, the System gives me a mission to change the ending.
Racing against time and battling space, I try again and again as time rewinds, but the story keeps getting in my way, and I never manage to complete the mission.
“Forget this! I’m not doing it. Just send me back!”
The System’s cheerful voice rings in my ear.
“No.”
“Fine, then nobody gets to live. Turn it up to full power and let’s do this again.”
The System crashes.
I’m seriously stuck here now.
Whatever, I’ll see if I can make time rewind myself.
(Original plot, not true to the source, please forgive me.)
(Transmigration + amnesia)
