Let You Simulate, Not Let You Commit the Crime Perfectly!

This book is well-written, I personally feel, because the heroine in it was kept in the dark at first, but she has her own skills and care for strangers who don't know if she is her own brother. After the incident, she was angered and wanted to save hope for herself, so she hit the person with all her strength. Then, she accidentally killed her brother, which can reflect the heroine's inner pain and suffering, as well as her care and love for her brother. It can be said that the heroine completely regarded that person as her biological brother and took full care of him, and the heroine herself has the ability to help people change from being innocent and kind at the beginning. I haven't finished reading it yet. Anyway, I feel that if it's a later one, it should be the kind of person who has a kind heart, but is willing to give everything for it. I also feel a little bit for the heroine here. I feel very sorry for him being kept in his bones. I also feel sorry for him because of manslaughter. My brother was treated the way I thought he was treated, so that he was injured and collapsed, and then he was deceived by the system and punished by a system that is not human. If I were to say it, I couldn't imagine it, so I feel very sorry for the heroine and care about it. I also hope that the author can do it next time. Spare the heroine in your hand, don't let the next heroine write such a heartbreaking story. This makes me feel very distressed. It also makes me feel that I can't face the next novel, and I dare not continue to listen to it. If you write novels based on your mind, I feel that you are a very good author. He is a potential novelist, but such heart-wrenching remarks are a big burden for me. However, at first, I heard that the heroine killed people, and then, it was quite exciting to commit crimes. I also had this kind of imagination, but I didn't want to be so cruel.

I haven't read the entire book, so I'll only tell you my feelings about the part about Ye Xiaoguo. It didn't feel full. The protagonist only did a few things, but everything was over in an instant. There are a lot of names in the police section, and it's hard to think of who is who when writing the names of the characters. The police didn't do a lot of work. It felt like they were just using their skills to do a small job and not crowding in too many people. If it is necessary to add characters, you can intersperse them a little during the introduction. A large paragraph is all about introducing the characters. Even if the character's personality and appearance are highlighted, readers will not be able to bear it when they see a large paragraph of the same type of content, and they will not be able to remember the characters. The scene switching is a bit jumpy, and people don't notice that the scene has been changed. It's only halfway through that I'm surprised that I've changed to a different set. At first, it was not revealed that Ye Xiaoguo committed the crime on the 31st, so the protagonist was confused when she misled everyone on the street to win 3 yuan on the date. She pushed it for several days, and it was not until she explained it to the system that she realized the trick. There is a feeling that the fragments look good when taken apart, but when put together they feel messy. The information in this chapter is a bit messy when I read it. Some of it feels like I noticed it later and added it to fill in the gaps. It seems that the article is scattered. You can try the feeling of scattered form and spirit in prose, which is scattered but has a main body. The writing style is good, witty and interesting. Come on, I hope the author will make rapid progress and write good articles one after another🌚👍🏻 It feels a bit confusing to write paragraphs separately, but it can be understood anyway (ง •̀_•́)ง I'm sorry for writing such a long paragraph, but I believe you can make faster progress with real feedback from readers [Love]

At first I thought it was a cool article. After Ye Xiaoguo died, I felt heartbroken and in pain. Later I felt relieved. Come on, you are the best.

It's still very interesting and relatively short. If you are interested, you can read it.

I found it based on the tweets. The author is quite different from the content of the tweets, but they are equally beautiful.

The plot is compact and the story is quite novel. I thought it was a cool article at the beginning, but I got stabbed in the middle by a knife. The author should pay attention to his health while writing so many articles! Come on!

I think it looks pretty

I think it's very interesting. I've been looking for this book.