I transmigrated into the world of Lord of the Mysteries and became Austin Hall, the older brother of Audrey Hall, the Tarot Club's Justice. From the start, I awakened the Investor System!
Invest in the Fool, Klein, and gain the Fool's protection!
Invest in the Hanged Man, Alger, and gain the abilities of an Ocean Songster!
Invest in the Star, Leonard, and gain the skills of a Marauder!
By investing in Tarot Club members, I earn all kinds of miraculous rewards and become the club's biggest backer behind the scenes!
Audrey: “Brother, where... where did you get all that money?”
Klein: “Mr. Austin, you are truly generous!”
I smiled faintly. “Investing is all about having a good eye!”
I feel that the protagonist is a bit useless. In fact, after watching Lord of Mysteries, I should be wary of the inexplicable extra things about me. Sometimes I feel that the protagonist wants to be behind the scenes but does not have the scheming feeling. The purpose is too strong and jerky, and people can see through it at a glance. He wants to be the leader of the Fool, but lacks the sense of mystery. As an investor, he does not have the reliable feeling of a businessman. When meeting the protagonist group, he feels panicked, and always emphasizes on protecting his sister. In fact, he has just traveled through time and has not had much contact with her and has no memory. It feels weird to protect the protagonist based on his love for the protagonist in the book.
Watching fan fiction is about watching a plot that is interesting, but to be honest, whether it is Goldfinger, the protagonist's personality, the attitude towards the original characters, and the development of the story, they are all very old-fashioned and bland. The only thing worthy of praise is the writing style. But this is a shortcoming that cannot be ignored for me. Maybe I have read too many articles and feel that they are too much like the assembly line products that are heavily polished by AI. They are featureless and have a strong sense of déjà vu. Sometimes they also have repetitive semantics and describe things that don't make much sense. They are piled together and make people uncomfortable when reading them.
The book is just starting out, so it's not bad 👍 But some settings are not explained very clearly 👍 (For example, what is the age of the protagonist) (Who is the son of Earl Hall) (The character of the protagonist will definitely be somewhat different from the original owner, and the family members who get along day and night will not notice anything wrong. The family accepts it too quickly, and is determined to protect the family without any psychological process. It seems that the protagonist and the original owner have a fusion of emotional memories before) (Alger's investment method is also a bit rough) At present, this book only has some minor flaws, and it's not a big problem 🤔 It's better to read and cherish it. This book is destined to not live long, and it is only a matter of time before it is killed 🤦 The author also put his heart into this book, and the setting is novel. Although it has some flaws, it is quite good as the first book for the author to practice his skills 👍
It's hard to evaluate. The self-created sequence doesn't have the sense of substitution of a fan novel. The title itself means that you are the boss behind the scenes, but in the end there is no hidden meaning. Another point about investment, mysterious world knowledge or intelligence is the best investment, but the key point is not written. The plot is arranged very abruptly.
The protagonist's character suddenly slipped away
Mysterious fan, I have to support you
It's okay. The book was good at the beginning. I hope it will be more exciting in the later stages. The author was a little too lazy in the early stage. I've said the same thing too many times😅 Anyway, it's pretty good, and I like the setting.
A mysterious fan with a very new angle 😏 😏 When the protagonist is with Klein, he reveals his identity as a time traveler; then when he is towards Audrey, he has a sweet feeling, as if he is not a time traveler but has really been living in secret for more than ten years. The logic and characters need to be polished, the author
There are some bugs, and the protagonist's actions at the beginning have insufficient reasons. There are also some errors such as the age of the characters.
Generally speaking, the writing is a bit strange