Immortality: Start with a Grave, Bury the Corpse and I Will Be Invincible

The portrayal of the mentality of immortals is very close to imagination. On the one hand, everyone is not an immortal, and on the other hand, they all want to know what it feels like to be immortal. The protagonist's mentality changes very naturally, and the writing is also very good. The contrast between the depiction of the struggle between various forces and the protagonist's only taking a spoonful of troubled times is very in-depth. The logic is reasonable and natural. It takes into account the influence of extraordinary martial arts on the political power, which is deeper than most works. At the same time, the growth of the protagonist has also been arranged. On the surface, he is a martial arts practitioner, but he is actually practicing ancient martial arts. After a brief setback, the plot explodes, which does not overwhelm his fighting power.

Immortality is invincible (not invincible in the world, but invincible relative to the enemy, and the strength is constantly rising). Overall, I don't see any bad points, but the content does not match the title of the book. There is no heroine, but it seems to have written a lot of plots between people [Eating Melon], which is a bit group-like, which is quite good.

There is gold in shit, and you have found real gold. The writing is really good, and it can be recommended on the starting point.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. The protagonist is indeed invincible, but not from the beginning. However, he is in a high position and the characters and plot are well drawn. What I have seen so far is that there is no heroine and an adopted daughter. The score shouldn't be so low, it feels like I was outscored.

The book is pretty good, but I can't give it high marks. There is a knife, there is thinking, it is more delicate, and it is more feminine. The combat power is set to be invincible in stages. If you just read Shuang's article about persuading people to quit, adding a knife and feelings to the adopted daughter, it would be very uncomfortable to read. But those who just like to watch movies with a bit of knives, environmental descriptions and female characters, lamenting the complexity of human nature, and lamenting the changes in the situation may like it very much. Personal evaluation: I just came to read Shuangwen to be happy. Life is not what I want. I was not happy after reading this book. To put it bluntly, it is like a person who is knowledgeable about life in the secular world is describing the joys, sorrows and joys of the lives of all kinds of people. But this is a novel about high-level martial arts practice and a novel about immortality, so the reading is very fragmented. When I open the Tomato novel, it is definitely to abandon my mind and read a refreshing article that makes me feel happy. If I pursue logic and artistry, I would choose to read classics rather than online novels. Of course, the author's writing ability exceeds 80% of Tomato novels in my opinion. But this novel not only failed to bring me happiness, but even the death of Lin Zhimin (the characters are very real and the foreshadowing is very good, but I don't want to see this in what I consider to be a novice, Changshengliu Shuangwen novel), which brought me negative emotions and made me unhappy.

Anyway, I didn't pay attention to the rating when I clicked in, but this folk remedy can't be so low. I think it's quite good. I stayed up all night and finished reading it. Although I may not be serious about it, I can't blame it for being sleepy. Now I'm going to work and I'll blame the author. More updates.

Worth a look, Even if it's a bad book, you still have to understand where it's bad. Not to mention a good book, The logic is clear, the main line is clear, and the writing is careful... A rare masterpiece, but not a masterpiece. The problem may lie in the choice of the main plot. The above, my humble opinion

It's a pretty good longevity novel. It doesn't have a heroine. The protagonist is top-notch talented. He's more emotional. He doesn't play the ruthless style. He can basically crush the enemies when fighting against them. It's different from other longevity novels where the talent is poor.

This is a very beautiful fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. The plot has reached the realms of heaven and earth. It is the brightest pearl I have found in the past few months. The writing and plot are very good, and the author is very good at portraying the characters' psychology. The writing is delicate, deeply describing the characters' complex and subtle inner worlds, emotional ups and downs, emotional struggles and spiritual dilemmas. Many characters have their own stories and pursuits. The characters of the protagonists Mu An and Mu Ling'er are substantial and three-dimensional. Overall, (1.12 Million words), although the plot is smaller than other novels, it is fascinating. And as an immortality novel in a superficial sense, this book focuses on the emotional expression between characters (probably). It is not like other novels that sit back and watch the vicissitudes of the world, things change and people change. (Bro can't write anymore)

A quite appetizing novel. It's not only about fighting and killing, but also about worldly relationships and the pull between family, humanity and divinity. Personally, I feel that the plot is well-drawn. But you need to calm down and watch it. If you want to watch the battles all the way, it may not necessarily meet your requirements. This is more for daily life. [Think]

This book is not an immortal novel in the traditional sense. It uses a lot of pen and ink to describe how the protagonist becomes an immortal in the true sense. This article is not a short article, but rather a group portrait, so it will not only shape the story of the protagonist. The actions of supporting characters will also be more in line with their own character settings, rather than simply being beneficial or harmful to the protagonist, or acting according to the protagonist's ideas. I hope book friends can use their brains and think a little bit. You may feel confused in the first few dozen chapters, thinking that this is just a routine article, and just give it up, but you might as well take a look at it later, as the previous content is mostly foreshadowing and laying down clues. The author promises that this is not a routine article. When you read about a hundred or two hundred and twenty-three chapters, you will have some different ideas.

I started reading this book in the middle of the night, and it suddenly brought me back to the mood I had when I read the immortality novel (I read a story about a snake demon who lives forever, but the author always stopped updating). I got off track. Let me talk about this book. Just look at the plot of the protagonist. It is a pure and refreshing novel. It is very exciting, fighting and killing. The character of the protagonist is also very stand-alone, just like those Slytherins in Harry Potter. , Has such simple but not entirely fair moral values, is kind to the people around him, and will help most injustices, as long as no one close to him is involved, otherwise he will be protective of his shortcomings and not take care of himself (very suitable for this extraordinary feudal society), a very vivid character, but from the perspective of the supporting characters, this is Jianghu, most people They are all involuntarily, including a doctor who spends his life doing evil and doing good half his life, a naive princess and her housekeeper and maid, and an idealist Zhuang Sheng. These people are entangled openly and secretly, and have grudges against each other. Zhuang Sheng was not killed in the hands of the protagonist, but was saved. The plot may be a bit cliché, but it is really good. I really don't want to see the protagonist kill his own ideals with his own hands, although some The plot has dissuaded some book lovers, but from my point of view, the current plot of this book is the best and does not need to be modified. The endings of each character are almost very suitable. The princess who should have died prematurely was not brought back to life by blood. The doctor who had been evil for half his life was willing to die twice. The idealist saw the cliff ahead but still strode forward. The story of flesh and blood is really good to read.

The writing is okay. It is different from most immortality articles. It has a different angle and may be a little bit toxic. But when I read online articles, they can be said to be at a glance, so I didn't feel it. The portrayal of the characters is okay, and it feels like I'm back to the time I read The Water God five years ago. Disadvantages: A large amount of psychological description and thinking will make the article look watery, which is very watery, but those who are interested in radio waves will like this. And I remember that the prehistoric book is the end of the prehistoric chapter, which can be said to be the later part of the book, and it has a similar feeling. The first and middle stages are quite refreshing, but this book is a bit inhuman after ascending to immortality. Invincible is truly invincible, but it can be said that since the death of Xiao He and Xiao Lu, it has nothing to do with Shuangwen. My feeling is a bit depressing, which may be the reason why this book has a low score. I'm afraid it won't be updated if I give it a low rating, but I really like this book, so I leave a five-star review to support it.

Very good, one of the few longevity novels in Tomato that hasn't crashed. The world view is grand and the time span is long, but every major event is well written. The existence of Ling'er is the finishing touch. It is inevitable that Changsheng will lose interest in many things (for example, when I was 30, I no longer wanted to play games, but I used to be able to play for a day...), But the existence of Ling'er gave the protagonist a reason to pursue his former self. Otherwise, the protagonist becomes like an artificial intelligence, and there will be nothing to write in this book.

It's very beautiful, I don't have to choose. Like me, who is not very familiar with reading, I read it and said it was a good read. No, why do you need to press down on points? It's so beautiful, but why do you need to press down on it?

It felt like it was well written like this, more like an invincible plot. I remembered that a book written in the Mahayana period is also of the same type. It is not the kind of mindless and refreshing article about fighting monsters and upgrading. It is not a traditional immortality article. It is about entering the world of immortals rather than escaping from the world. Reading the comment section, I feel that the score of this book should be hurt by the title and introduction at the beginning. I also added some insights into this book, such as the intertwining of human nature and divinity. The land gods in this book treat all things as suckers. They no longer fight alone and have plans and fights. Or you can find other books in the same genre to recommend. Compared to other Shuangwen books, this book is a bit disadvantaged. In addition, I feel that Changshengliu is not as popular as before. However, there are advantages to having a small number of people, because it is easy for others to say that it is a nanny article. However, the author's writing style can also control the rhythm very well. If it is a novel written by a novice, it will easily go astray.

Feeling lost ~ This is a unique fruit on the big tree of longevity novels. The difference is that unlike other longevity novels, the protagonist is mainly Gou Dao in the early stage. Instead, the protagonist is almost invincible throughout the whole story. The early accumulation process has almost no protagonist and no enemies. It has been very enjoyable. It is the same as other immortality novels in that the tone is still based on the theory of lifespan. The characters such as Mu Ling'er, Xiao He, and Zhuang Sheng are all described in a full and original way, and the interaction between the protagonist and them is also reasonable. According to various aspects of a book, this book is also qualified. In terms of world view, it is considered to be above average. Regarding the golden finger of the protagonist, the state of the world, world history, the strength has improved significantly, and the combat power has not collapsed. However, the diversity of species and landscapes in the world is not enough and needs to be polished. In terms of characters, the protagonist Mu An is very well described. The character changes process step by step, from the chaotic kindness of the initial killing and decisiveness to the later divinity occupying humanity, from the person "Mu An" to the supreme Tao of "good fortune", which makes people feel that although it is a bit sad, it is not boring, and the process is reasonable; as for Mu Ling'er, The character, her essence and personality changes, as well as her influence on the protagonist, even the slightly poisonous part of Mu Ling'er helping the protagonist regain his humanity became less poisonous after her identity was finally revealed; and Zhuang Sheng, the Heavenly Master, was also well described. The former is unswervingly pursuing the ideal of world unity, and the latter's determination in pursuing the Tao is touching. In terms of writing, the writing style is quite good. At least it doesn't feel awkward to read. It's pretty good. The descriptions of various scenes are also okay. Although the descriptions of battle scenes are not outstanding, they are not bad. After reading the whole book, what left the deepest impression on me were the characters, the innocent and lively child Mu Ling'er, Zhuang Sheng and the Lao Tianshi who are unswervingly pursuing the Tao. The author of this article can feel that his/her thoughts are in line with the common thinking of contemporary young people, so the text looks very comfortable. Finally, thank you to the author for your great devotion. Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer good Tomato books. I hope you can continue to work hard! I look forward to your progress!

I have now read Chapter 91. The details of the people and objects in the book are very well described. Every aspect of life has its own characteristics. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very solid. It is really a good book. The rating of 7.0 Is a bit low.

Very good. When the author used super martial arts elements, he noticed the development problem, and the male and female supporting characters appeared equally. No bigotry. It is in line with the social awareness of the gender gap that has been smoothed out by extraordinary factors. Logical and sound. Good

It's really good to read. The best longevity novel I read before was the one by Ancestor Chen Xun in Purple Spirit. How come the score is so low?

This book is really good to read, much better than some immortality books. Many of them say that he was an ordinary person in his previous life, and then traveled directly to become a holy mother, and directly built a utopia with his own strength. Moreover, their strength is not the top, and it feels like a mess. Although Xuannv is also an idealist, Mu An is indeed more realistic, with divinity but not a holy mother.

The writing is good and the emotions are delicate. I feel that the whole story is about the protagonist's struggle between human nature and divinity. It's rare to see no vulgar emotional lines. Family relationships are often very painful. It was very uncomfortable to read it in one go. After all, the old friend is not the same person as before. I shed tears.

Although there is no gorgeous literary talent, the story is not very fascinating. However, nowadays the novel is really full of monsters and ugly, and it seems that this book is a rare masterpiece. The protagonist is neither hypocritical nor intentionally evil. The supporting characters are not all eye-catching, and the overall plot is as indifferent as water, which is commendable. It is neither evil nor disgusting. In my humble opinion, this book can be a superior book. I give it 5 stars. I hope nothing will happen in the future.

It's good-looking (๑• . •๑) I love reading it. The overall process is very smooth. The author will update it quickly [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I basically give negative reviews. This one is really okay. It's just that there are too many scenes in the "Princess Without a Heroine" label. It's normal that some people don't like it, but I think it's okay. It's not toxic at the moment.

It's well written, and there's nothing to complain about. Why is the rating so low?

This book is enough for me to give a good evaluation. Even if it is placed at the starting point, it should be okay. Read it earlier as a cool article Later, it became routine to have a daughter, and then the protagonist also directly cheated, at the cost of becoming more and more divine. Behind it is the life-span knife that must be included in the longevity novel, but the daughter also works hard for the protagonist's humanity. But it's also a bit cumbersome: 1. The article is not pleasant (but it seems normal that this is an article about longevity) Second, there was a princess who was very awesome in the early stage, but she died in hundreds of chapters without seeing this princess (it is understandable that she is a group portrait, but it will still cause some people to dislike it)

It's good to watch😄 but I inevitably felt tired after reading it, so I started to skip chapters.

It's okay. It can be seen that the author wants to write a light and nonsensical article, but the writing skills are not interesting, but it is acceptable on Tomato [Send heart] I can't stand it anymore. An immortal does things every day. He doesn't make a fuss about his age. Instead, it is similar to other fantasy novels about cultivating immortals, and there are too many bonds. Sharp-edged belongs to yes.

I struck gold. It's good to read [like] but I don't know why the rating is so low. It's the same as a book on cultivating immortality in my bookshelf, which only got a rating of 7 points.