What's Wrong with Having a Mixed Spiritual Root?

I really think this book is very interesting. I read it from beginning to end, and there is nothing particularly annoying about it. I think the character of the protagonist Qi Chuan is just right. He is not very holy, nor is he very vicious. However, it is very easy to write off other people in the book, which is quite painful. Every time I feel that the protagonist can be friends with someone in the future. By the time, this person was gone, and seeing the Huang Orion family being wiped out in Hongyang Town made me feel quite uncomfortable. To be honest, I hope the author would not kill for the sake of the sword. The other three confidants that the protagonist made in the Calabash Sect at the beginning were gone, and the Huang Orion family who had just come to this world were gone. I think if you can finally achieve enlightenment on the road to immortality, you will be successful. If you look back and see that all your confidants and family are gone, is it really okay? I hope the author can add more bonds to the protagonist Qi Chuan and not write it to death. A protagonist who is humane and has confidants around him is still more three-dimensional than a cold-blooded and ruthless protagonist who is alone. But to be honest, this book is really good-looking, at least from what I saw. This is one of the books about cultivating immortals that I am most eager to read. The protagonist's golden finger is also relatively novel. It is neither too strong to destroy the combat power nor too weak to make people feel frustrated. This is the only long review I have written since reading Tomato for so long. I didn't want to write it at first, but the popularity of this book is so low, so I decided to write a long review to support the author. Come on!

It took me a few days to read the last chapter. The reason for the low score of this book was also discovered. The positive reviews are given 5 points, and the negative reviews are given one point. This kind of book is a bit extreme. The style feels a bit similar to the apocalyptic novel "Dark Blood Age". They are all quite depressing and sadistic, and then the protagonist will change into different identities. Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is good, the plot is coherent and there are no flaws in logic. Especially the worldview. The world view is grand and the foreshadowing is good. And I feel that the author has a foundation in the traditional Chinese Five Elements. The understanding of wood, fire, earth, metal, and water is ok. The author has explained that wood, fire, earth, metal, and water are actually adjectives, not nouns. Many people do not have this knowledge and do not understand what the author means. The bow is a weapon that mainly belongs to metal. The following five elements also correspond to the internal organs, liver, heart, spleen, lungs and kidneys one by one. It can be said to be coherent. Now let's talk about the shortcomings. The author probably wanted to write a slow-burn novel at the beginning. But the slow popularity was disliked by everyone. So the progress seemed to be accelerated in the middle and later stages. This leads to confusion in settings. He was supposed to be a Gou person. Later, he acted blatantly and wantonly. It's just the realm of golden elixir. He had to go back to the Calabash Sect to take revenge in a big way. It seems that in order to speed up the pace, the protagonist's cultivation level has increased and his brain has declined. It seemed very enjoyable, but later on he was chased, beaten and abused. There is no transition in the middle. There are many excellent works that often allow the protagonist to go to the mortal world or elsewhere as a transition after a certain level. Temper your xinxing, or get other opportunities. The following are my personal opinions and suggestions. When writing articles, you should be good and follow the flow. However, the style and settings of your own subject cannot be changed at will. Don't let some random comments ruin your Taoism. Especially comments from people who have just read a few chapters or don't even understand the setting. These people are not the author's target group. On the other hand, in terms of transition, I suggest slowing down the pace. It seems that not many of these well-known and decent people have any brains. Since there is suppression, there must be co-optation. Especially for such a genius. But before that, the writing was a bit broken. Fortunately, there is a hidden line in Buddhism. Later, you can also change your identity and return to the world through this line. In terms of settings, I also hope to make some additions and enhancements based on the original ones. For example, true qi and demonic qi are completely the positive and negative aspects of things, that is, the two aspects of yin and yang. Why the Age of Dharma End? It is precisely because of the war between immortals and demons that the true energy and the evil energy are completely separated, and Yin and Yang are separated. If only the sun does not grow, it will not grow. The full name of Five Elements Cultivation should be Yin Yang and Five Elements Dharma, since the protagonist's true energy and demonic energy coexist. So will there be any new changes after the completion of Yin and Yang? The so-called decent people from well-known families may not necessarily be good people. People in the demon world are not necessarily bad people. Will there be new understandings and discoveries during the trip to the devil world? I hope the author can maintain his original intention. I can write the novel well.

I give the author good reviews because I love reading it. The good points of this book are that the plot is well written! However, the shortcomings are too obvious, the main plot transition is too blunt, and sometimes the protagonist's personality is portrayed differently. The most important point is that the protagonist does things to fit the plot or the direction of the story, not at all based on his own heart or interests. This feels upside down to me, and I think this is one of the reasons why this book does not have high ratings! However, I think the author is still very capable, but there are some problems with the advancement of the story. He will definitely write better and better in the future!

Not bad, there's nothing poisonous about it at the moment [laughs evilly] There is an unreasonable point. When the protagonist is mortal, the white mental power absorbs ten times the cyan points. After getting started with Qi training, it is unreasonable to absorb cyan points ten times. After all, one's own mental power is already a cyan entry. There is definitely a quality difference between a cultivator's 100 points of mental power and a mortal's 100 points of mental power. Also, since you can absorb the essence of plants, Why can't we absorb the monk's essence? After all, monks also have numerical values. Can't the system just show the health bar and suck it? 😏 😏 The immortal version of the star-absorbing method. It absorbs the essence of the monks. Wouldn't it be nice to add some to yourself 😏 The enemy monks killed in this way will not be wasted at all [laughter] If there is no shortage of body-training elixir, it would be good to get a body-training method in the library to practice. You can also directly absorb the essence of monsters to strengthen your body. I have been in the sect for more than ten years and I know that sucking plant essences seems a bit stupid. If you don't train your physical and mental strength to the peak of your Qi training period, you just want to rely on Ganoderma lucidum to improve your magic power and buy some good equipment, then go to a dangerous secret realm to find treasures that are extremely important to you. This is a bit unsound [laughter]

We share hardships, we share hardships, it's beautiful, very beautiful [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It was a little slow in the early stage, but it can still stand up to scrutiny. Different from the mainstream rhythm of Tomato, the slow-burning style of Mortal Flow also has a unique flavor. I hope the author can strike a good balance and have just the right amount of depression and excitement to attract people. Five stars presented.

I saw the current updated paragraph in two days. To be honest, it suits my taste. The writing is also good and my favorite style. The plot develops at a moderate speed. It's a pity that it is not finished. Alas, I hope that the reason for the protagonist's time travel and the origin of the golden finger can be explained later. It is better not to appear out of thin air but to have existed in the world. It is better to have a beginning and an end. Then I hope the author will write faster. I want to see the protagonist succeed in cultivation and return to the Calabash Sect to slap those hypocrites in the face. Come on haha

I have read Chapter 190. The overall evaluation of the book is great. It is one of the few good books. Although the protagonist has a hang-up, he is not particularly dependent on the hang-up. He is unable to walk without the hang-up. There are almost no poisonous points at the moment. Although there are some flaws in the connection between Hongyang Town and the world of immortality at the beginning, the overall flaws are not concealed. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The humble character of the minor character, the cautiousness of the two lives, the details are very well drawn, and the number of words that I read a lot in Shuangwen is said to be low, ╮(╯▽╰)╭. So far this is not a Shuangwen. I would say that without these descriptions, the things to be expressed cannot be reflected at all. It can be seen that the author is very careful, I hope you can work harder

It's not a particularly amazing fairy grass, but it doesn't seem to be a big problem when there is no food. It's better than mindless routines and counter-routines The effect of Golden Finger is not particularly obvious, and the plot does have the problem of dragging on, but it would be better if it were viewed as a slow-paced development.