Class B: Starting from Scratch, Striving to Get Stronger

It's okay. There really aren't many practical fans that I can read. The protagonist of this book is a normal person and not too OOC, so it's pretty good. I read the update after reading it and said that the protagonist's life experience is not that of a second-generation character. He really doesn't have a family background and is not qualified to be a Japanese protagonist, right?

From the first impression, it reads almost like the original work of Shijiao. There are no subtle points. It should be brief and detailed. It feels really good that there is no system. Knowing the direction of the plot is already a trump card. If you add some details, it will become the underworld. The protagonist has a clear position and self-awareness. There is no such thing as weakening the enemy characters (Nagumo Junrakuko). The settings of each character are also in line with the original work. The author himself is also quite rigorous. Many places are verified by the original work and the rules are not bad. What needs to be noted is that the harem must be mastered, and the emotional lines must be reasonable and delicate. Overall it's definitely a very good book, I don't understand why the rating is so low.

A very good book that captures the essence of light novels, with a touch of pretentiousness. The logic and understanding of the original text are all online, giving people a pure sense of pleasure when watching it, but those who have not read the original text may not be so happy. The integration with the plot of the original work is pretty good, but when it comes to writing my own original plot, it doesn't work. The heroine doesn't have much of a characterization, it's all based on people's imagination after watching the original work. Starting a harem means automatically throwing herself into the arms of a classmate after helping a classmate. The two together create the same look and feel as a hypnotic app. When the two people still like each other, the protagonist does something to increase their affection and then directly rises to the top. The heroine doesn't care that the protagonist has a harem and starts to say that she loves him. After that, the male protagonist patrols his territory like a lion.

The writing is really good. I have carefully read the original work to find loopholes in the rules, and the method of exploitation is also very reasonable. The only thing that makes me uneasy about the plot at the moment is that Sakayanagi may become one of the harem. As the future leader of the Sakayanagi family, it is unlikely that he will compete with a group of untouchables for the same man. Her family also She will not be allowed to become a laughing stock, unless the protagonist's family is arranged to control the only god in Japan. It is possible to accept Sakayanagi as a harem, but this is obviously impossible. I hope the author can consider more rationality when opening a harem, and look forward to the subsequent development of this book 🍉

There is no problem with the plot and logic, and it seems very comfortable so far. Although I know the plot, it is not the kind of story that does not change at all. I will think about my impact on the plot, and then lay out the plot. I feel that other teaching protagonists do not have a sense of wits. If the identity of the protagonist is older, the plot should be very interesting. Although Asuka Shiraishi has not appeared a few times in the original work, can the author attack her? He should have something to do with the White Witch, not the author. I believe you can do it without fear of being stabbed in the back. Also, can Chabashira give me a guide?

After reading the latest chapter, I would like to express my personal opinions. First of all, it's very good-looking, and it's an absolute powerhouse in fan fiction. The ratings derived from it teach you how to write… Sorry to be biased. The male protagonist has a great character. He knows his own limitations and has intelligence advantages, but he does not blindly provoke others, and his growth curve is also very good. Befriending strong people, saving defective people (mostly girls, and bringing them into the harem), and finding Lugo to train in fighting are my favorite protagonist templates. Some people say that the protagonist is very timid and does not dare to fight with strong people. Then why don't you try fighting with Brother Lu? Can you understand that before time travel, you were just an ordinary person, and your biggest advantage was intelligence, so why did you have to fight the original protagonist Lu Ge? Brother Lu just wants to live his own ordinary life, and the protagonist does a very good job. He signs a non-enemy pact with Brother Lu at the beginning, and slowly becomes friends with him. In addition, some people say that the love line is very poisonous. I think it is quite good, but the love line is indeed not as well written as the main line. However, in more than 100 chapters, the author also said that his emotional line was indeed mediocre. Please understand. As far as I am concerned, it is indeed a novel without any poisonous points. The characters in the novel are very consistent with the author's descriptions. There is no synchronization or deviation from the character's own personality. In addition, since the original text of the actual teaching has not yet been completed, the author added some of his own settings after the second grade of the novel. I feel that the progress of this fanfic will catch up with the original text in a few months. [Holds face] Good novels shouldn't be hidden away, I still hope everyone can read them.

This is my first time to review a real-life fanfic, because I feel that its rating shouldn't be so low. My current impression is very good: the protagonist is not heroic, brainless, and worthless. Completely relying on the time traveler's information advantage and age advantage to build himself into a person with high IQ. This setting is better than many values. The transitions of the plot are natural, and the contradictions between the characters are natural. It is rare to even use the original text to reduce the number of words. If it is water, it is natural and cannot be seen. A rare product! Also, I really like what other practical teaching book friends said: Is there not much practical teaching?

I want to give 1 star protection, but my conscience doesn't allow it. I can only say that the writing is indeed immature at the beginning, and also immature later on, but the plot is squeezed out of people's minds bit by bit, which is really interesting. It can be seen that the author is really very careful. Worth five stars.

The writing is quite good. From the perspective of adaptation, some people say that they stopped after opening the harem in more than a hundred chapters, but I think it is okay. Whether it is before opening the harem, getting rid of Nanyun Ya, or completely expelling him from school after the harem, it is the climax of the whole book. It is very interesting and can be read by people who have not read the original work. The adaptation is not detailed enough, but the fast pace is the advantage of this book. The main plot is very fast, from the beginning to the end of a unit, and all the key points are explained in one go without being sloppy. This is good. All in all, there is nothing to criticize. This book is an excellent work from the perspective of fan culture. Whether it is the handling of the harem plot, the adaptation and mastery of the main plot rhythm, and the shaping of the protagonist, there is nothing to criticize. It is worth reading. It would be better if the writing could be more detailed and the whole book could be written in a more detailed way. The emotional lines should not be mentioned in one stroke. Many plots should not be mentioned in one stroke. The main theme and meaning of these plots could be written in a more detailed way. That would be better. Just take a look at the duration

This practical teaching book is really super nice, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of m4 Shooting six times will kill you. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. , All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are in place! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan to win the spot for the Western Classic, Li Kui went to persuade him. On the way to Hedan, he was tempted by foreign persimmons, strayed into the depths of lotus flowers, and started a relationship with Xiao Longnutu in Huanshi Water Pavilion. However, he was seen by Sato Kazuma, so Sato Kazuma got angry and went to the different world picture to meet Doraemon...