Immortality from Primitive Society

It's good-looking. Some of these original novels always say that the female characters are so good-looking. How can there be anything in the primitive era that meets modern people's aesthetics? The author is so realistic.

It looks good. I think the protagonist has the same advanced thinking as the Emperor in Warhammer 40K except that he has no psychic powers. He has an immortal physique and a lover's soul. He silently guides the development and evolution of mankind and loves mankind as a whole.

Real gold has been struck. There is no top-level farming article without any meal replacement. Immortals from ancient times have pulled savages into civilization. There are almost no golden fingers except immortality. Every step of development is down-to-earth. It is really the top of the top. There are no poisonous points (basically every potential irrationality is explained). Compared with other top-level farming articles (similar to I Don't Care for Humans), it has a more pragmatic and down-to-earth sense of stability. It also has my favorite part about the pain of immortality. I highly recommend reading it.

Reduce the psychological activities of primitive people and write more about the main line of developing technology. A book with potential, I like this subject matter

Nice! It's not as bad as the low score said. I doubted the score at first. After reading it, I thought it was pretty good. It's more realistic. There is no harem and no CP. The writing style is also good. Those who think there are too many psychological descriptions of primitive people can't feel it. It depends on whether you read it casually or carefully. I read it at a glance and ten lines. It's not bad. I recommend it. It's not as bad as I said. The reason for the low rating is because it just came out. I recommend everyone to come and take a look. Anyway, I think it's really good, but it's a little slow. I feel like it will take at least a few thousand chapters to finish [Eating Melon]

The subject matter is quite novel. I have read a lot of time travel stories. This one has no system and goes directly to the primitive period. However, it is not broken so far. It is quite realistic. The update speed and chapter word count are both average. Keep up the hard work.

It's a very real survival in the primitive era. The author is very careful in some settings, and the protagonist is not brainless, and he doesn't hang around every second. The characters have distinct personalities, including the supporting roles. In Tomato, it is definitely a good deal. Compared with the primitive era written by other authors, I can only say that there is no harm without comparison. The ones written by other books are more like ancient times, the kind of ancient times before the Xia Dynasty [facepalm] This author writes about the serious primitive era.

I am a military commander and not good at words. There are more than 100 chapters so far. There are occasional failures, but I can't tell them. But among 🍅, it is really first-rate. With my shallow eyes, it is second only to Zhen 🍅's work. Rhythm: A bit fast (for my personal taste), but well controlled ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Characters: The stories of each character are excellent and complete. In the future, it is expected to be more group portraits⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Plot: Relatively bland and comfortable, but not a flaw in this genre⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I search for gold in foreign persimmons every day, refreshed the recommendation list dozens of times, and finally came up with a high-quality product. It is super beautiful and worth recommending.

The first generation wrote really well. It is impeccable in every aspect, and the longevity is enough to whet your appetite. Later, when it changed to a group portrait, the immersion was reduced and I changed from the male protagonist to a God's perspective. The first generation has distinct personalities and has stories with the protagonist. After their death, although it can be felt that the author who wrote the follow-up still arranged the story, it is not at all as exciting as the first generation. Probably because those stories have nothing to do with the male protagonist. Anyway, I saw that the bridge had just been built, and these characters were so unfamiliar. Overall, it feels a bit lonely and lonely as time goes by. The male protagonist has not touched a woman in 40 years, has no emotional connection, has no relatives, no friends, and no love. I really can't accept it. Too cold

The first volume revolves around the protagonist, and the latter part focuses on group portraits. It can be seen that the author has really worked hard to depict a story that promotes the development of civilization from scratch. There are some small problems, but overall it is very strong. I support the author. It is a great book with potential [please update] [like] [love]

It looks great. I hope to start increasing the time span. After all, civilization cannot be developed in one or two generations. The birth of religion can well control the stability of primitive society, especially a stable religious leader who also serves as a leader [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The writing is very good. As the plot develops, the protagonist's divinity seems to be getting more and more important. There are fewer and fewer people around him. The secretary only has a superior relationship. Only the guy with a broad vision and immortality like Silly Bird can be considered a friend.

It's brainy, and the content is quite scientific. It's already very good in Tomato. I like the idea of ​​slowly developing civilization and not engaging in Long Aotian. It's ridiculous that the protagonist has become a poisonous point among some people because he doesn't kill indiscriminately. [Eat Melon] I like the protagonist who doesn't have brains and uses violence to solve all problems. People who just like to kill can stay away.

Tomato is a pretty good book. In the future, I hope that the protagonist can maintain his position as a "god" and always be the leader of human civilization and not take the initiative to lower himself to reproduce future generations. Then I'm more inclined to focus on farming and developing technology!

This is the most comfortable original novel I have ever read. There are some hooks, but not many. You can see the hardships of the protagonist. It is not easy to make something. It is not like other novels where success is achieved instantly. It is achieved through constant exploration and failure. [Like][Like][Like]

See the latest 94 chapters Very pretty At first I thought it would be bad because of the low rating. But it's actually quite well written. Hanging naked from the beginning Develop like crazy with the buff of not dying Conquer the primitive people picking Try various grasses burn pottery bear hunt Develop tribe Still feeling full of gains It feels a bit like surviving in the wilderness Develop modern civilization from scratch Very pretty I just don't know if the protagonist will have a baby with Lian in the future. Although he is a savage But the character Lian is quite smart and lovable. I hope the protagonist can reward her with a happy life It's just that after the cub is born, the status of the cub is not easy to describe. I still hope I can have a baby with Lian A development tribe that loves each other Waiting for the life of lotus to come to an end The protagonist is depressed for a while He regained his strength and led the tribe to continue to develop. Pretty good too

Tomato is one of the best original social texts, currently. The logic is relatively rigorous and self-consistent, and the writing and plot arrangements have basic common sense. The characterizations are delicate and profound, the rhythm of the plot is just right, and the protagonist has some problems, but he doesn't just win the game. Although it is infinite resurrection, it is only infinite resurrection. It is not the kind of brainless design that makes you feel that the values ​​​​collapse after just one glance at the beginning. [Like] I hope the back part will be as beautiful as this.

It's really good, the material selection is also good, the writing style is okay, but the story is not. I hope the author can find the right direction next time. It can be said that this is a farming article that is slow to gain popularity, but the author's slow pace is wrong because he spends pen and ink on unimportant things. The pace is a flaw! You must know your own selling points, primitive people have the survival wisdom of primitive people, and don't think about changing everything! I thought the expulsion of men was an attempt to create a confrontation! Men go to other tribes. If contact between tribes is lost, then the tribe will naturally become extinct! It's not like being driven directly into the wild like animals!

You can see the traces of useful AI, but the plot design is not bad, and it can be watched. If the plot design does not collapse in the future, it will become a book worth reading.

It's very interesting to watch. It's generally a slow-paced story, which is more suitable for a story without being substituted. Although there is a plug-in called immortality, it can't really be used as a fun story. Bring yourself into it and read it. Immortality is essentially just a better way to advance the plot and make it easier to be a magic stick. The logic of the article can withstand scrutiny. As long as you have a little brain, it is still very comfortable to listen to the book. However, some descriptions are out of date. However, according to the author, in order to ensure updates, a certain amount of AI assistance is used. It can be understood and the author can review and delete it appropriately after use. This book is currently generally in a slow-paced and slow-burn mode, suitable for listening to when you are bored : D

This is a story from one person to a group of people. Except for the protagonist, all the humans here are humanoid creatures, Yuanmou Man. The protagonist relies on the wisdom liberated from heavy survival pressure and labor to lead primitive people from cave living to the tribal era (more than 100 chapters).

It's not bad, the writing is smooth, the characters are not broken, the plot is natural, and the emotions are full of emotions. Of course, there is also a little ingenuity from the author. In short, it is a good book. Of course, if it breaks down later, I don't know. Anyway, it's good to read now [laughter]

I have read four chapters so far, and I feel comfortable reading it. The writing style doesn't look like AI at first glance, and it's not very Internet-based. Although it's not very impressive, it at least feels like it was coded bit by bit by humans. Give it four points first to confirm, and then add five points later.

Judging from my name, the primitive tribe is top-notch, but its only shortcomings are too few. One month for bronze, half a year for iron, one year for the founding of the People's Republic of China, and two years for the Industrial Revolution. It gives me a headache to read it😩 It's still done slowly, but it looks very normal. It's considered a normal primitive tribal leisure story.

It's still good. The update so far is a bit like a survival type, teaching primitive people to learn various knowledge. Since there is really nothing to write about in this type of article, I don't mind a small amount of AI techniques used in rhetoric, which is normal.

Now that I have read the 60 chapter of the farming chapter, I checked the score on a whim and saw why it was so low, so I wrote a review in the hope that more people can click in and take a look. So far, I have not seen any very unbearable poisonous points. The logic and coherence of the plot are very good, and the description of the scenes is also relatively detailed. Except for the exchanges with primitive people, which may have some issues with the span of the era, everything else is very good. I just don't know what the author plans to write next? After all, if you are immortal, you can't end it after writing the paragraph between Thorn and Lu [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The subject matter is more to my liking, but the traces of AI are still too obvious... Some places are basically pieces of AI, and the boundary between AI and human modification is very obvious. Deepseek's smell of dialogue will come out later. I hope the author can reduce the amount of direct AI generation. I am not opposed to using AI assistance, but you can add human processing and ingenuity on the basis of AI, and don't have too much AI flavor. This is good.

Time-travel novels are not brainless or systematic, and rely entirely on the protagonist's personal wisdom and ability. Personally, I think the score should be above 9.0. The protagonist's only ability: immortality. But the book is about farming, not about fighting. Rely on the immortal [Nong tastes hundreds of herbs] to explore the surrounding things. Create "World Truth" by reviewing past life knowledge. Create the "Illustrated Book of All Things" based on the experience gained one life at a time. Start with a book called "Tiangong Kaiwu" and a knife that can be used to commit suicide and reopen, and light up the technology tree of primitive tribes step by step.

The original person of this book can be understood as Friday in Robinson Crusoe, who can accept learning and other things. So far, there aren't any bad points. Later, it will mainly focus on group appearances. It's pretty good, but the rating is a bit low. I hope the author can keep it up in the future.