Beng Tie: Is He Your Husband? My Husband!

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It's pretty good. The main character is a lolicon, and the ones I like are all about 1.4 Meters tall. But it feels a bit missing if I don't include Aojiao. Maybe it's because I like Black Tower, Fu Xuan, Silver Wolf, Hanabi, and Aoqiao. Also, I'm not a lolicon, but the person I like happens to be a lolita!

I am a half-old fan. I just say that the plot is very enjoyable and brilliant. The author's writing style is also improving. However, the current simulation does not make people have a lot of emotional fluctuations. The author's knife skills need to be strengthened [sneaky smile]. The second point is that it is not enough to understand this shortcoming. Author, you know what I mean [please taste it carefully]. Overall, the writing is good. If it is not toxic at present, the author will change it. Come on [please update]

Because An Yue died -1 star My childhood sweetheart, you let her die again. She is not the heroine but also my childhood sweetheart. You are making it difficult for me. Overall: rich in emotions and logic, but the emotions are a bit abrupt, there is no cuckold (yet) and the protagonist has the strength and will not be manipulated (it is not a yandere VS Fei Wu male protagonist, there is a Shura field but it does not embarrass the protagonist)

It's very interesting to read, the plot is more delicate, the writing is good, and I can't continue editing it. All in all it looks good, mainly to my taste. The simulation is very nice, especially the black tower chapter, which is really good.

Huangshu, the plot is quite good, the writing style is also top-notch among foreign persimmons, it is not very sharp, and the straight-line writing method makes the progress very comfortable, unlike some novels, which drag on for a long time. The main character is not impotent. Looking forward to the next plot. (ꄱੈˍꄱੈ)

The author's writing style is very good, and the main plot is very sweet, very disturbing, and very joyful. The knife of memories is also very delicious [face covering] [face covering]. It also gave me a deeper understanding of happiness. I would like to invite you to share this book. Here is a small suggestion to the author. Don't rush to write about Ompharos. Although MiHoYo and some big players have revealed and guessed some truths, I feel that it is still particularly easy to be backstabbed by MiHoYo. The author can write one or two flashbacks first, or let the protagonist go to Origami University to have fun with Ranpo. Wait a minute, what is the plot content of 3.3 Or 3.4? If you write it this way, you won't be backstabbed too much. I would also like to give my last sincere suggestion. The author really sincerely recommends that if the author's main plot is sweet, can't he really resurrect Xiao Qingmei and the others? I still react to Pinoconi's old friend's knife.

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! Update soon! ! ! [Sinister smile]

It's well written, and the emotions of each character are on point. In terms of universal rationality, there is no poisonous point and no fighting power. It's a good medicine, it's a little bitter at the beginning (knife) but not bitter at the end (the author made a side story of the simulated plot) Hey, I like it very much.

It's okay, I hope the heroine doesn't write too much.

You are a writer in the Happy Tavern [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Emmm, it's a harem story, it has a private setting, which is a lot more fun, but it also has some frustrations (the part where Pinocchio was fooled by Ah Ha), but it doesn't matter, I have the Crimson King and I'm defenseless! (Won't be stink)

You can believe me. If you have any suggestions, feel free to send them [love]

It's beautiful. How can I put it? The author writes very well. I like this kind of thing.

It's pretty good to watch (I just don't like the cameo [Chigua])

The emotions are delicate, there are some small details, and the simulation chapters so far are not as long as most simulation articles. It is a masterpiece, no need to say more!

Very good. I like it very much. I like it very much.

Great, no need to say more

Very beautiful, highly recommended

Pretty good so far

Okay, okay, like, like, like

Hey, hey, hey, here you go [eating melon]

I almost forgot to give a good review

Author, please don't stop updating, I'm really convinced. Why haven't you updated for so many days? I miss you so much.

It looks good, but sometimes the speed is a bit fast

It's pretty good, but the author should consider letting Yu Xiuwen or Qingchen make a cameo [thoughts]

It's beautiful. I also read it from the previous book.

I watched it from the first one in the morning, how awesome it is!

I can't explain the feeling. Why do I always feel that it is worse than the original? When I think about it carefully, it turns out that they are people I interact with on a daily basis, not as much as Uemoto [Thinking]

Nice! ! ! I hope there will be more stories about Hanabi and Firefly [Sending my heart] Come on, author! [Please update]