Immortal Martial: The More My Girlfriend Spends, the Stronger I Get

It's okay, the female protagonist has more perspective, but the book in February 25 made me feel very worried.

First of all, this introduction is understandably eye-catching. Seeing that the author has picked up a book that he stopped publishing for 25 years and re-written it proves that the author himself cannot let go of his own creativity. Let's write briefly. After reading Chapter 14, I roughly know why the early data of this book is very poor and it needs to be cut. The first real-life interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is too illogical. The heroine received a package of wolf meat, so why didn't she wonder if it was a gift from a game company or a live-action variety show? She just gave it to her without any suspicion at all. The writing is indeed lacking here. If it could be more complete, add some psychological description, or add some appropriate suspicion. It's strange that the heroine directly defaults to the item given by the hero to the heroine. It seems too fragmented and too stiff. At the end of Chapter 13, there is an example of spending seven figures but not becoming a warrior. But the heroine went up after eating a piece of meat. Why didn't she immediately continue to invest or make money? Instead, it describes a few chapters of daily life. Although the timeline of several chapters is still on the same day, the heroine feels more like a robot following the script. If the description of the two people's first real-life interaction before and after could be overhauled, I think it will be much better. I will give it 4 stars for creativity. I will choose to rate it again when I see the update time and content later.

I read other people's book reviews saying that the heroine has issues with her outlook on life, so I went back to chapter 38 and read it again. I didn't feel that there was anything poisonous about it. There is nothing wrong with the heroine being cruel to people who treat her badly. Regardless of whether her relatives treat her badly or not, it is a fact. There are traces of AI, but I didn't notice it at all. I think it's quite interesting so far. But the heroine's mother hasn't picked her up yet. It's really too slow. The hero is not invincible in another world, so it can't be considered a surprise. The role of the heroine is highlighted, and he can't be invincible in the same realm. He just waits for the realm to be crushed. They are both mature male and female protagonists. Maybe if you like a fast pace, this book is not suitable for reading. It is a bit too tiring from the beginning to the end. Take it as you like🤔

I'm very curious about how long this book will last. Five stars to show encouragement. It's very interesting. The heroine's family is too much, I suggest you log off.

It's pretty good, and the subject matter is relatively new. I highly recommend it.

Half AI, you should ask the heroine to pick up her mother, you know how good you are every day

It's pretty good-looking, with a lot of perspectives from the heroine.

Did the author run away?

Well, well, well, well, well, well, think carefully

It looks good. I love watching it. It's really good. There are not so many bullshit things, let's support each other and become stronger together!