Jin Jin************

Tomato, there are also a lot of talented people, pretending to be surnamed Langya, and you, if you dare to write about the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, you have to be good at it.

Color! The wording and sentences are really gorgeous and eye-catching. In my humble opinion, it would be better if the plot was more narrative and clearer. It will be much better after Chapter 20. The front part is a bit confusing, and many things are passed over briefly, giving people the illusion that things are completed with just one mouthful. Of course, it may also be that I missed it while listening to the book while sleeping [laughing] Overall good and in-depth! ! ! Supplement: It would be better if the story, plot, and (characters) were clearer and clearer. These elements are almost overtaken by the gorgeous words! Still Asami.

When I saw that the scope of this book fell into the apocalyptic category, I felt a little strange. After all, there were no zombies or alien civilizations in it. However, after reading it carefully, I realized that although this is not the end of the entire human race, it is more distressing than what has been described in various apocalyptic books in the past, because no matter how powerful the imagination is, it can't compare to one sentence: adapted from real events - "Five Husty Chaos", which was an era when the Han people were livestock and aliens ate them. From then on, the hearts of people who are not my race must be different.

The opening chapter is amazing and the author's writing is very good. But the storytelling ability is a bit lacking. The author is immersed in his own works and is self-absorbed, leaving too much blank space... Not very friendly to readers. I think the author can learn from the well-dressed people. The style is almost the same... It changes from beginning to end. Personally, I think Sanjie's first-class official residence is very good at telling stories. I personally think it is a good book. It should be an irregular wavy line. The small climaxes must be pushed forward layer by layer to form a wave crest. Until it covers the sky and the sun. Snap! Shoot it directly in the reader's face… In the end, novels still have to tell stories. The story is well told, and even if the writing is poor, it can still be a god (don't read it, I'm talking about you - "Infinite Horror"). It's the first time I write such a long book review. I just feel that the author has the ability to write a good book to satisfy readers... Also, the fake surname Langya next door is really good, so I updated it and it is touching 😭

The writing style is really good, but it is not popular purely because the audience of Tomato is generally younger and likes to read cool articles.

The rhetoric is too gorgeous and affects the progression of the plot. After reading the first few pictures, I felt that the heroine is the main thread of this book. So the previous portrayal of this female character was too overwhelming. But it can be seen that the author wanted to write in depth. . Cheers for 5 stars.

It looks pretty good. By the way, does this book have a female protagonist? [Think]

The structure is clear, the logical reasoning is rigorous, the plot is vivid, and it is relatively real. It is one of the better historical romance novels among time-travel novels that describes the history of the fall of the Western Jin Dynasty from an alternative perspective. It is worth reading. Once you start reading it, you can't stop reading it, and you just want the author to finish it in one go. 5 Points

If you just watch the plot alone, it's still very interesting. However, there are some problems with the writing style. There are too many repetitive techniques that hinder the reading experience, and the portrayal of characters and plots is a bit deliberate. Overall, it's still very good. It feels like the author put his heart into it.

There are too few truly good historical novels nowadays, and most of them mistakenly take literary youth and fantasy as their main themes. History has always been considered a liberal arts, but it actually has the same romance as science as mathematics. It is a kind of simple beauty that comes from an insight into the laws of nature and reality, and it is also a kind of desire to change the world even after facing the bleakness of life. However, many books have fallen into the historical cycle of talking to themselves. So far, this book is in a bit of an awkward situation. The writing is indeed good but the historical beauty it creates is a bit thin. Come on!

Recommended by a friend, I have read nearly a hundred chapters. It is an excellent work. The descriptions are very good, but the vernacular is sparse. I hope more vernacular is added. At the same time, the plot moves slower and more ordinary daily life is added to better complement it. The push is too fast, and the amount of information received is too large, making it difficult to read. Overall, I wish the author good luck! The book became an instant hit.

This book is so well written that it doesn't look like a Tomato book at all. Of course, it's not suitable for quick reading, but only suitable for reading slowly, word by word.

Don't talk about the name, don't talk about the subject matter, don't talk about whether you are happy or not, just focus on the writing style, 5 stars.

It's well written, but will you die without a woman?

It's been four hours since I watched it. So far, the writing in the two Jin articles is quite good, but it requires literary skills to understand. For a high school history student like me, some parts are really difficult to understand, overall. It is of excellent quality, but I wish the author would add more vernacular, as the classical Chinese is a bit obscure. At the same time, I hope the author will work hard

The Five Huns disrupted China, China was destroyed, and the Han people were almost exterminated!

Very well written, keep up the good work

Not bad, but I think some places are a bit deliberately showy. The author is very good.

It's very well written, why hasn't anyone read it? The author's writing is so good. The level is not what Tomato should have. It beats the starting point by 90%.

The book has strong literary skills and is suitable for those who like to read carefully. The slow pace is inevitable and makes reading a bit difficult.

A bookworm who has been addicted to Internet literature for 20 years believes that this book is qualified to be rated as the best hard-core historical novel since 2024. The characters of the refugees are portrayed in a high-level way, very thin, not like human beings, but more like NPCs, and the protagonist is the protagonist of a stand-alone game set in the late Jin Dynasty. Chapter 39 is extremely poisonous and has too many logic bugs. A group of ancient people who were refugees were asked to go out to camp at night to prepare for war (half of them were missing because they knew how to walk, and the team was sparsely scattered for several miles), and the refugees were allowed to feign defeat after a head-on battle. High-difficulty tactics (normally speaking, the armored soldiers who have not yet surrendered will take out their bows and shoot them directly. Even if the armored soldiers are surrendered without a bow, they will be defeated from the front. The feigned defeat will turn into a real defeat. The refugees will scatter and flee, and the refugee leader who lost cover will be chased and killed by the armored soldiers). The protagonist also hopes to use bamboo arrows with poor armor-piercing capabilities to fight against the armored soldiers. Well, the refugees do not know how to use shields, and the armored soldiers will not be able to use shields... At present, the author's writing is good and he has read some ancient history, but he lacks life experience and is still a military novice.

What a good book, no need to be in a book shortage

The author has a solid writing skills and the writing is very beautiful!

Come on, author, keep writing, I look forward to finishing it!

The first chapter and the second chapter are completely different from the same person. There is a doctor in the front and the historical Liu Kun in the back. Although I have traveled a few years to Bingzhou in the back, I feel that there is a time traveler and a prophet, but there is no preparation and passiveness. It is impossible to survive in this era of cannibalism. I have a question. The protagonist traveled through time and replaced Liu Kun to guard Bingzhou. So where did the historical Liu Kun go? The author's writing is very good, 5 stars!

The author is very attentive. The details of these historical materials are all checked at a glance. Does the author have a group?

Really well written

That's great. Please support me.

It looks good, no need to say more

Wide to wide to wide to wide