Ashes of the Mountains and Rivers: The Wandering Doctor's Era of Time and Ruin

Tomato, there are also a lot of talented people, pretending to be surnamed Langya, and you, if you dare to write about the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, you have to be good at it.

Color! The wording and sentences are really gorgeous and eye-catching. In my humble opinion, it would be better if the plot was more narrative and clearer. It will be much better after Chapter 20. The front part is a bit confusing, and many things are passed over briefly, giving people the illusion that things are completed with just one mouthful. Of course, it may also be that I missed it while listening to the book while sleeping🤭 Overall good and in-depth!!! Supplement: It would be better if the story, plot, and (characters) were clearer and clearer. These elements are almost overtaken by the gorgeous words! Still Asami.

When I saw that the scope of this book fell into the apocalyptic category, I felt a little strange. After all, there were no zombies or alien civilizations in it. However, after reading it carefully, I realized that although this is not the end of the entire human race, it is more distressing than what has been described in various apocalyptic books in the past, because no matter how powerful the imagination is, it can't compare to one sentence: adapted from real events - "Five Husty Chaos", which was an era when the Han people were livestock and aliens ate them. From then on, the hearts of people who are not my race must be different.

The opening chapter is amazing and the author's writing is very good. But the storytelling ability is a bit lacking. The author is immersed in his own works and is self-absorbed, leaving too much blank space... Not very friendly to readers. I think the author can learn from the well-dressed people. The style is almost the same... It changes from beginning to end. Personally, I think Sanjie's first-class official residence is very good at telling stories. I personally think it is a good book. It should be an irregular wavy line. The small climaxes must be pushed forward layer by layer to form a wave crest. Until it covers the sky and the sun. Snap! Shoot it directly in the reader's face… In the end, novels still have to tell stories. The story is well told, and even if the writing is poor, it can still be a god (don't read it, I'm talking about you - "Infinite Horror"). It's the first time I write such a long book review. I just feel that the author has the ability to write a good book to satisfy readers... Also, the fake surname Langya next door is really good, so I updated it and it is touching 😭

The writing style is really good, but it is not popular purely because the audience of Tomato is generally younger and likes to read cool articles.

The rhetoric is too gorgeous and affects the progression of the plot. After reading the first few pictures, I felt that the heroine is the main thread of this book. So the previous portrayal of this female character was too overwhelming. But it can be seen that the author wanted to write in depth. . Cheers for 5 stars.

It looks pretty good. By the way, does this book have a female protagonist? 🤔

Recommended by a friend, I have read nearly a hundred chapters. It is an excellent work. The descriptions are very good, but the vernacular is sparse. I hope more vernacular is added. At the same time, the plot moves slower and more ordinary daily life is added to better complement it. The push is too fast, and the amount of information received is too large, making it difficult to read. Overall, I wish the author good luck! The book became an instant hit.

It's been four hours since I watched it. So far, the writing in the two Jin articles is quite good, but it requires literary skills to understand. For a high school history student like me, some parts are really difficult to understand, overall. It is of excellent quality, but I wish the author would add more vernacular, as the classical Chinese is a bit obscure. At the same time, I hope the author will work hard

If you just watch the plot alone, it's still very interesting. However, there are some problems with the writing style. There are too many repetitive techniques that hinder the reading experience, and the portrayal of characters and plots is a bit deliberate. Overall, it's still very good. It feels like the author put his heart into it.