Cultivation: I Took You on as a Lackey, but You Want to Take My Place?

So far it looks pretty good, although the setting is borrowed from Long Aotian's book.

It is a unique campus novel that flows easily and daily. It describes some of the psychology of high school students and men very interestingly, including the teasing between boys, the ignorant feelings between men and women, and the little thoughts between girls. Although they are mostly funny jokes, they are also moderate. The three views of the main character are correct (if there is only one female protagonist, there is no need to refute it), and the male protagonist with the unique ability to cultivate immortality also guarantees a sense of satisfaction. If the relaxed style can be maintained in the future, the cultivation of immortality and career are well balanced, and the emotional drama is also written, then it can be said to be a masterpiece.

The first time I tried their food, it tasted good. The ingredients were abundant, the boss was very attentive, and the packaging box was very clean and hygienic, which made me feel very comfortable eating. ✨

It's a very interesting book, with strong logic and no big black spots. I have something to say, I am a pure lover of whether the party can be the first female protagonist, or whether it should be marked with multiple female protagonists or single. I personally prefer An Qing, can you decide on a female lead? [Crying]

The book is quite good, (warm reminder, there may be some suspicions of spoilers), but the single female protagonist in the beginning is very good, but later on it starts to be ambiguous with multiple women, mainly because I don't like the central air-conditioning character of the male protagonist... Aside from these, it is very good. Oh, actually the most uncomfortable thing is that the title of the novel is aimed at the single female protagonist. When I read the later part, I felt like I was cheated...[Rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

It's very good. It's more daily life. The male protagonist is okay. But I hope that other female classmates will like the male protagonist. It's fine if the male protagonist continues to maintain the status quo. If the male protagonist doesn't maintain the status quo, it will easily collapse [please update]

Grave-sweeping on January 1, 2026, Happy New Year to all my book friends

It's good. If you want to write about multiple girls, I think you can have multiple girls, but I really don't want it to be the kind of pseudo-harem that only flirts with but never accepts. This is not reality. I hope everyone should have their happy ending, because I read this novel just to find some warmth from the skinny reality. In the end, it was really uncomfortable to show everyone the knife.

The emotional aspect is very clear, and the way of transition is also very good. Although the transition to immortality is a little slow, the things written before are indeed OK. After all, the first part should be a transitional stage, and cultivation will be slowly mentioned later. If this transitional stage involves too much practice, the foundation of the relationship with the heroine will not be stable, so the first half of the time is to lay the foundation, and the second half is to write about the cultivation of immortality. Although I have seen it thoroughly, the key point is that I feel that this process should occasionally be mixed with a little bit of cultivation of immortality. After all, if it is always about relationships, it always feels like it is missing a bit of flavor. After all, it is said to be cultivation of immortality. If it is a one-sided relationship, the cultivation of immortality feels less good. I doubt the author, do you want the female protagonist to sleep with the male protagonist? Will formal cultivation of immortality begin after this is finished? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's a very good read, a novel that really suits my taste. There are not many novels that I can read to the end in one sitting on Tomato, and this is one of them. The male protagonist is in line with my ideal image of a perfect male protagonist. He is gentle to his friends and cruel to his enemies. He is decisive and has good emotional control. He is calm and calm in any situation and can deal with it easily. He is not like a dick-like pig brother who can't walk at the sight of a woman, nor is he as cold as absolutely rational. She has human emotions but is omnipotent. She is a succubus in human form. Many girls have a crush on the male protagonist. The other characters are also very vivid and interesting to read. It just feels like the emotional line is a bit like stock trading. An Qing is definitely the first female protagonist, but the male protagonist also has some ambiguous relationships with other girls, which is unclear. It's said to be a harem, but An Qing's presence is stronger and she has the closest relationship with the male protagonist. It's said to be a single female protagonist, but the male protagonist is having an affair with another girl. I was really flustered when I saw this neither good nor bad plot. I personally think that either the single heroine should be written carefully and not be ambiguous with other girls, or other heroines should be accepted, and no girls should be left out, and no stock speculation should be made. It would be really unfair to write a lot of heroines but only accept one. It is indeed difficult to write multiple female protagonists in the real world because there are constraints from the system and the idea of ​​monogamy. But the male protagonist is a cultivator, and he is afraid of nothing. No matter how many women he has, no one will say anything about him because he is worthy. As for the relationship between the female protagonists, the male protagonist's extraordinary abilities are enough to make them slowly let go of their grudges.