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So far it looks pretty good, although the setting is borrowed from Long Aotian's book.

It is a unique campus novel that flows easily and daily. It describes some of the psychology of high school students and men very interestingly, including the teasing between boys, the ignorant feelings between men and women, and the little thoughts between girls. Although they are mostly funny jokes, they are also moderate. The three views of the main character are correct (if there is only one female protagonist, there is no need to refute it), and the male protagonist with the unique ability to cultivate immortality also guarantees a sense of satisfaction. If the relaxed style can be maintained in the future, the cultivation of immortality and career are well balanced, and the emotional drama is also written, then it can be said to be a masterpiece.

The first time I tried their food, it tasted good. The ingredients were abundant, the boss was very attentive, and the packaging box was very clean and hygienic, which made me feel very comfortable eating. ✨

It's a very interesting book, with strong logic and no big black spots. I have something to say, I am a pure lover of whether the party can be the first female protagonist, or whether it should be marked with multiple female protagonists or single. I personally prefer An Qing, can you decide on a female lead? [Crying]

The book is quite good, (warm reminder, there may be some suspicions of spoilers), but the single female protagonist in the beginning is very good, but later on it starts to be ambiguous with multiple women, mainly because I don't like the central air-conditioning character of the male protagonist... Aside from these, it is very good. Oh, actually the most uncomfortable thing is that the title of the novel is aimed at the single female protagonist. When I read the later part, I felt like I was cheated...[Rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

It's very good. It's more daily life. The male protagonist is okay. But I hope that other female classmates will like the male protagonist. It's fine if the male protagonist continues to maintain the status quo. If the male protagonist doesn't maintain the status quo, it will easily collapse [please update]

It's good. If you want to write about multiple girls, I think you can have multiple girls, but I really don't want it to be the kind of pseudo-harem that only flirts with but never accepts. This is not reality. I hope everyone should have their happy ending, because I read this novel just to find some warmth from the skinny reality. In the end, it was really uncomfortable to show everyone the knife.

The emotional aspect is very clear, and the way of transition is also very good. Although the transition to immortality is a little slow, the things written before are indeed OK. After all, the first part should be a transitional stage, and cultivation will be slowly mentioned later. If this transitional stage involves too much practice, the foundation of the relationship with the heroine will not be stable, so the first half of the time is to lay the foundation, and the second half is to write about the cultivation of immortality. Although I have seen it thoroughly, the key point is that I feel that this process should occasionally be mixed with a little bit of cultivation of immortality. After all, if it is always about relationships, it always feels like it is missing a bit of flavor. After all, it is said to be cultivation of immortality. If it is a one-sided relationship, the cultivation of immortality feels less good. I doubt the author, do you want the female protagonist to sleep with the male protagonist? Will formal cultivation of immortality begin after this is finished? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's a very good read, a novel that really suits my taste. There are not many novels that I can read to the end in one sitting on Tomato, and this is one of them. The male protagonist is in line with my ideal image of a perfect male protagonist. He is gentle to his friends and cruel to his enemies. He is decisive and has good emotional control. He is calm and calm in any situation and can deal with it easily. He is not like a dick-like pig brother who can't walk at the sight of a woman, nor is he as cold as absolutely rational. She has human emotions but is omnipotent. She is a succubus in human form. Many girls have a crush on the male protagonist. The other characters are also very vivid and interesting to read. It just feels like the emotional line is a bit like stock trading. An Qing is definitely the first female protagonist, but the male protagonist also has some ambiguous relationships with other girls, which is unclear. It's said to be a harem, but An Qing's presence is stronger and she has the closest relationship with the male protagonist. It's said to be a single female protagonist, but the male protagonist is having an affair with another girl. I was really flustered when I saw this neither good nor bad plot. I personally think that either the single heroine should be written carefully and not be ambiguous with other girls, or other heroines should be accepted, and no girls should be left out, and no stock speculation should be made. It would be really unfair to write a lot of heroines but only accept one. It is indeed difficult to write multiple female protagonists in the real world because there are constraints from the system and the idea of ​​monogamy. But the male protagonist is a cultivator, and he is afraid of nothing. No matter how many women he has, no one will say anything about him because he is worthy. As for the relationship between the female protagonists, the male protagonist's extraordinary abilities are enough to make them slowly let go of their grudges.

It's well written, but the author can't make it so awesome. In 2018, you can be as black as you want. This is China, not Japan. The underworld is illegal Where are you, the author? Where are you? Are you still there, the author?

I saw the chapter about celebrating uncle's birthday Various roles with Yin Tian 1. The first is Laoqing. This little thing is very fun and can be held in your hand. Lao Xia can also be plated. This is the Joan of Arc dish, which is made into a round and flat dish. The monitor is intellectual and rational, a typical academic master Dong Zhuoxin is a lively, cute and nervous little girl Miss Mafia, it's hard to describe this, I've never experienced it 2. Yin Tian's father is an arrogant person, a very typical Chinese father. He won't tell you that he loves you, but talks about his disdain. He will pay for your living expenses as usual, and he will occasionally care about your life, but he won't interfere too much. I have pride in my heart, so I don't want to see my elder brother, and I want to maintain my face. 3. There are also those two who are also very classic refined egoists. I won't go into details on these. They are just for comparison. As the saying goes, there are differences only when there is comparison. Comparing them with the previous ones highlights their beauty even more. I don't really understand. These are all personal opinions. If you have different opinions, you can discuss them.

The writing is very detailed and real. It feels like the author's personal high school experience. Each character has his or her own characteristics.

The emotional descriptions in this book are really good for me. It's not toxic at the moment. As I read it, I couldn't help but think of my own high school days. Fine. If there is some slight poison in the back, I still have to abandon it, but the five stars will remain unchanged, because it is the first emotional description of campus points that reminds me of what happened in high school. Maybe the experience is a bit similar to mine (cliques, bullying, etc.) The poisonous point is that there is no need to deliberately lower the IQ of accessories in order to highlight the protagonist. How could anyone think like this in reality? At most, I think he was lucky enough to meet this one. How could it be possible to copy the questions you took yourself, and how could someone know in advance how to copy them, and who copied them, so they were better than the one who came first? Abandoned. If it focuses on campus style, there is no need to give the supporting characters such a narrow mentality. Anyway, normally speaking, the person who is number one in the class will not be explained clearly by the person who is number one from last. Then I definitely wouldn't think of people like that. (This guy can actually do it. This is what a normal high school student would think, in my personal opinion) Abandoned. Author of Gift Crab. You can still watch it if it's around 100, but you can't watch it if it's 100 or so. It can be said that the protagonist protects her out of regret or inner demons. But why do you like her? Love for a long time? I didn't like her in my previous life. Having experienced hundreds of years of fantasy and cultivating immortality, the love between children should be even less in my heart. Why do you like her? What's even more disgusting is that the protagonist clearly knows that she likes the protagonist. I give you five stars because you wrote the school drama well. There is nothing wrong with others giving you seven stars.

Okay, Ye Bufan. Congratulations on having past life memory + underworld force value. So congratulations, what is about to appear is the rebirth of an immortal that trembles in the world of immortality. You are being matched with well-matched opponents

The writing is so good, why was it blocked? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Come on, author! !

As far as the content is concerned, it is quite to my liking, and it is quite interesting to read later. The emotional line is quite obvious, and the cultivation is not too prominent, but it is quite comfortable to watch. The two characters An Qing and Xiao Qianqian are also very interesting. The author, please keep writing.

Not bad, relaxed and enjoyable, without any inexplicable pretentiousness. The character of the protagonist is also in line with my yearning for cultivating immortality. It is not inexplicable or preconceived. It's just that this looks like a single heroine. Are they planning to flirt with her without marrying her? . I'll wait and see

Author, I believe you can be popular, and your writing is good. I like this kind of ordinary life of authentic immortal cultivators. I have read too many novels about fighting and killing. This kind of urban immortal cultivator's simple novels can calm people's anger. It's not bad and can make people happy😁😁😁😁 Not bad, not bad, you can cultivate immortality in an ordinary way

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Dear author, I just hope that all the heroines in this novel will always love the protagonist, care about the protagonist, and treat the protagonist as the most important person in their hearts. Don't be like Long Aotian's novel where the three heroines became three signs.

This is a sweet story about life. It is full of a strong flavor of life. Each character has his or her own outstanding personality. As long as you taste it carefully, you can find many details that will make you smile and make you feel very happy.

It's pretty good. I'm also following Long Aotian's book. I feel that there are still many differences. However, it is still difficult to deal with the emotional lines of the three female protagonists. It depends on how the author writes it.

I remember that when I clicked on it, there seemed to be a label with a single female protagonist. I always watched it with An Qing as the female protagonist. It was very interesting. I really liked the portrayal of the female protagonist. After watching it, I discovered that there is no label for a single female protagonist, so there may be multiple female protagonists. This leads to the misunderstanding that even if the protagonist is a woman, I feel like I have to take a bite out of it. If it were a single female protagonist, it would feel like she was in contact with so many women, which meant she was a little more measured than An Qing's handling of the other women. I really like the portrayal of An Qing as the heroine, and I don't know if the others are heroines. 8.8 Points

It's awesome. It's said that the male protagonist is cultivating immortality, but in fact there isn't much change. Compared with cultivating immortality, it's more like a romance novel. The male protagonist is more like an ordinary person with extremely high values. This is my current feeling. Many people should be here for cultivating immortality like me, but there are actually quite few elements of cultivating immortality.

It really fits the otaku fantasy, and the male protagonist is also very good, without the kind of mature writing but greasy behavior. I hope the author won't lie to people, and will have a single female protagonist as promised at the time.

The new type is quite nice

It's really beautifully written. I still like to watch Xiao Anqing and Yin Tian. The author should resurrect them quickly [crying]

It's very beautiful, the daily life is very sweet, the author is great, I have a question, if the male protagonist is an immortal, will there be a life-span theory between the male and female protagonists? Don't do it in this situation @Ling's Bird

I hope I can finish it with daily stories in the later stages. I have read more than a hundred chapters, and it is the best rebirth sweet story I have read in Little Tomato. The urban stories I read before started to engage in superficial stories such as cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts in the middle and late stages. The impression is very bad. Anyway, cheers, author [blowing kiss]

It's a daily light-hearted article, with invincible fighting power, but I don't know when the heroine will be able to eat it. The plot content has been written for more than 200 chapters in just two months, which is very impressive. I can't imagine how many more chapters there will be after the third year of high school and college. It's really within my lifetime.