[Two Male Protagonists] Others take on the role of protagonist in the book, but Xie Yunchu wants to raise the villain.
He worked hard to make the sick little villain grow up.
The system suddenly released a new task, asking him to help the villain abandon the fairy gate and become a demon.
Xie Yunchu, who had spent a lot of effort to correct his apprentice's three views and train him into a pillar of the immortal family, threw the table in anger:
Why didn't you tell me earlier? (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻
Xie Yunchu was reluctant in every possible way, but he couldn't resist the torrent of the plot.
He could only watch helplessly as his apprentice went from being a famous genius in the immortal sect to becoming the weakest demon in the demon world.
Xie Yunchu started to feel restless again.
I am worried that my apprentice will be bullied in the demon world.
While the system was away, he secretly found the ancient magic sword, disguised it as a rusty iron sword, and threw it at his apprentice's feet.
Pull out the weeds in the apprentice's courtyard at night and plant elixirs that are beneficial to spiritual practice.
After a lot of hard work, he found a secret book suitable for demon cultivation and stuffed it into the crack of his apprentice's door...
One operation is as fierce as a tiger.
After the system came back: The sky is falling!
The protagonist is still playing in the mud in the ravine, but the villain is about to become a demon!
Xie Yunchu, who was driven back to Xianmen by the system overnight with a forklift, rubbed his nose: I didn't expect my apprentice to be so promising.
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After successfully becoming the Demon Lord, He Beixing felt disappointed.
When he first arrived in the demon world, he was ostracized and found it difficult to move forward.
Only a mysterious man who never showed up silently helped him and asked him about his welfare.
He made an agreement with that man that when he became the Demon Lord, that would be the time when the two of them would meet.
But the man broke his promise...
Later, he set up layers of traps and vowed that as long as that person appeared, no matter who he was, he would never let him go.
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Xie Yunchu stepped into the trap:... Is there something wrong?
Reader comments
So pretty, so pretty! I will give you my highest praise: normal people! ! ! I haven't seen such a normal master and apprentice for a long time. Both of them have brains, and the apprentice suddenly has ulterior thoughts about the master, and an inexplicable and extremely strong desire for exclusivity [laughs]. He's character and psychology really show that he has been loved. He will not push too hard, thinking that he is and must be the only master, and he really respects his master. Wow, how pitiful, God's system has actually created so much suffering for He and Xie. Xie is really gentle, and sometimes I am surprised by his ruthless way (not a very stereotypical three-no product!). Xie in the demon world is like the golden-fingered grandfather of the hero in The Beginning. He tries his best to give away secrets, treasures, and more delicious food. Jpg It's so funny
At present, it seems that the relationship between the two of them is more like father and son and master and apprentice. In order to get more attention, He will show weakness and look forward to Xie's praise. When he hears someone spreading rumors about their relationship, he will take action to protect the reputation of his master. (Before seeing this, I was really afraid that his eyes would darken with a dark smile.) The distance between the two of them is well controlled. They are not overly possessive and no one owes the other.
And! He Zhen is the kind of standard starting male protagonist I have seen before. He will not force himself to get something, but strive for it himself! Men who love to fight are the best.
Oh... He is such a rare and normal character that all I can think about is praising him. Xie's story doesn't have much plot so far, but it's still very interesting and won't make you feel like a tool.
The writing is pretty good, the plot is compact, and it won't make people feel bored. [Sending my heart] I hope there won't be forced love. This setting of forced love is a bit vulgar.
I give five stars for support, but based on my years of experience watching, I still want to talk more.
First of all, because of this persona, sometimes he is cold and distant, and sometimes he is not serious? This character design is a bit contradictory, because the book wants to highlight his ruthless nature, but it does not
Then there is the issue of emotional lines, which is the biggest problem. (Maybe the author hasn't written enough yet, so I'll follow up later)
Take the point of being damaged by the ruthless Taoist heart as an example. Let's just say that if you accept a person with such a high status and high level of cultivation, isn't his Taoist heart a little fragile? Because the author's writing gave me the feeling that Shou felt guilty for not taking good care of his husband, and then it was out of the sense of responsibility of the master. However, this is not suitable for the broken heart of the Tao, or there should be a little heartbeat description interspersed in it. Gong's feelings are still justified in my heart, there's no problem with that
And there is that senior brother. The writing of senior brother is really a bit too much. I have read more than 50 chapters, and I just want to criticize him and accept it. Therefore, this emotional line was not placed at the center of the official match.
The above is just my current personal opinion, because this novel is still very little written, and the focus of the introduction should be that the part in the demon world is their emotional line, so it is understandable if it is slow to warm up. But I think the senior brother's scenes in the early stage can be deleted. If it doesn't work, I'll see if they can be moved to the later stages to show the memories.
In fact, I have always liked this character. Gong is the kind of person who is a proud man but has fallen into the dust. He is also a very young person with a young heart. He is not just a sweetheart at the beginning. He has also experienced many hardships to grow up. Shou is one of those unreliable masters. The good thing I can understand is that although he is ruthless and feels ordinary, he has always been cold and sorted out in his heart (I guess this is what the author wants to express, but the character creation is still not three-dimensional enough)
Finally, this is what I really want to comment on! ! ! This fucking system is really awesome. I need to either strengthen Shou or weaken the system as soon as possible, because I feel that the frustration is partly with Shou. I don't really want to wait until the attack is strong before I can clean up the system.
Really really super super super super super super super beautiful
（🐒）（🌳）（(´∇ﾉ｀*)ノ）
(Jump down) (Randomly grab a lucky spectator) (Roaring) (Crawling on the ground in the dark) Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe) (Cut off the head of a passer-by in excitement) (take out the brain) (click, click, click, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew.
It's really good to watch, very, very good to watch, I watched it all in one go. Author, please update quickly. It's very beautiful, I like it very much.
The characters are all well created, how could they be so to my liking. Master, Master, we love you [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Author, why did you only write one book? How come you only have one unfinished book to read? With such good writing style, I don't believe you only wrote one book. I read it in one sitting without even reviewing for the exam. How come you are so careless about it? Why is this book so beautiful? What should I do if I can't read the new chapter and feel like there are countless bugs crawling on my body? I beg you, please write some more.
Nice! But I want to ask, will the protagonist's cultivation level be completely lost due to ruthlessness? Don't wow. . . .
It's OK, but I was a little angry when I was controlled by the system╰_╯. Beixing will continue to suffer in the future, and Yun Chu will also have a hard time. I hope he can get better soon and reconcile soon (I won't become a demon king and imprison Yun Chu because of being kicked out of the sect before (*^_^*))
It looks good. I think Bei Xing and Yun Chu's happy daily life is good to watch, but there are not many such warm scenes, the plot is not procrastinating, and the characters are vividly created. Yun Chu's heart is broken, and Bei Xing is missing half of his ear. This makes me feel that these two are really miserable. When will Bei Xing become stronger? Come on, (I want to see Bei Xing go to Yun Chu to resolve the misunderstanding, or Yun Chu helps Bei Xing in obscurity, and then dies. When Bei Xing decides to go to Yun Chu, he is told that Yun Chu is dead, and the misunderstanding is resolved. When Bei Xing is sad, Yun Chu is resurrected. I really want to see this kind of thing. Is there any boss who goes to the book circle to cook)
Very good looking. Finally there is a villain who is not a reborn master and apprentice.
It looks good, but it updates very slowly. There is no poison at the moment, you can eat it with confidence
The foreign objects in the system are too big
Why is it gone? . . TT is really new to my eyes, the plot is not sluggish at all. The emotional line was a bit confusing at first, 🌚I didn't quite understand it, but the writing is very good! ! ! Like 🥰
How dare the author suddenly keep updating every day, updating three chapters a day, it scares me to death [rolls eyes]
It's very interesting and not laggy at all. Although the misunderstanding is not solved, it is not a relationship that lasts until death. It's too little if it doesn't make people feel frustrated. The author will update soon😡🐛🐛🐛🐛
Please stop delaying, I want to eat! 😭
Great, great, I really like this kind of book. I hope the author can produce more of this kind of food [Love][Love]
Boss (kneel down gently) I still want to watch (cry)
Mi [crying] I've been waiting for so many days, I'm hungry
Why is no one watching? Very nice, please update slowly! I originally wanted to come to Tunwen
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
It's good to read, but the number of chapters is so few, not enough to read [crying][crying][crying]
It looks good, but it's a bit sharp. I [cry][cry][cry]
Still very good
It looks good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the plot is interesting, but the attack and control will make you feel a little distressed.
Nice! I hope we can get to know each other soon and resolve the misunderstanding [crying] Please update soon.
It's so beautiful. Please update the author more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
Oh my god, I have never read a new book that is better than this one [Adoration], the author ~ update soon
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Looks great, cheers!
Oh my god, it's really beautiful\(//∇//)\
It's cool, but too short. Woohoo.
The author, hungry for food [crying][crying]
Big, hungry, rice, eat, eat
When will the update be updated? It's so beautiful. Can you please stop updating it?
So pretty, so pretty! I will give you my highest praise: normal people! ! ! I haven't seen such a normal master and apprentice for a long time. Both of them have brains, and the apprentice suddenly has ulterior thoughts about the master, and an inexplicable and extremely strong desire for exclusivity [laughs]. He's character and psychology really show that he has been loved. He will not push too hard, thinking that he is and must be the only master, and he really respects his master. Wow, how pitiful, God's system has actually created so much suffering for He and Xie. Xie is really gentle, and sometimes I am surprised by his ruthless way (not a very stereotypical three-no product!). Xie in the demon world is like the golden-fingered grandfather of the hero in The Beginning. He tries his best to give away secrets, treasures, and more delicious food. Jpg It's so funny At present, it seems that the relationship between the two of them is more like father and son and master and apprentice. In order to get more attention, He will show weakness and look forward to Xie's praise. When he hears someone spreading rumors about their relationship, he will take action to protect the reputation of his master. (Before seeing this, I was really afraid that his eyes would darken with a dark smile.) The distance between the two of them is well controlled. They are not overly possessive and no one owes the other. And! He Zhen is the kind of standard starting male protagonist I have seen before. He will not force himself to get something, but strive for it himself! Men who love to fight are the best. Oh... He is such a rare and normal character that all I can think about is praising him. Xie's story doesn't have much plot so far, but it's still very interesting and won't make you feel like a tool. The writing is pretty good, the plot is compact, and it won't make people feel bored. [Sending my heart] I hope there won't be forced love. This setting of forced love is a bit vulgar.
I give five stars for support, but based on my years of experience watching, I still want to talk more. First of all, because of this persona, sometimes he is cold and distant, and sometimes he is not serious? This character design is a bit contradictory, because the book wants to highlight his ruthless nature, but it does not Then there is the issue of emotional lines, which is the biggest problem. (Maybe the author hasn't written enough yet, so I'll follow up later) Take the point of being damaged by the ruthless Taoist heart as an example. Let's just say that if you accept a person with such a high status and high level of cultivation, isn't his Taoist heart a little fragile? Because the author's writing gave me the feeling that Shou felt guilty for not taking good care of his husband, and then it was out of the sense of responsibility of the master. However, this is not suitable for the broken heart of the Tao, or there should be a little heartbeat description interspersed in it. Gong's feelings are still justified in my heart, there's no problem with that And there is that senior brother. The writing of senior brother is really a bit too much. I have read more than 50 chapters, and I just want to criticize him and accept it. Therefore, this emotional line was not placed at the center of the official match. The above is just my current personal opinion, because this novel is still very little written, and the focus of the introduction should be that the part in the demon world is their emotional line, so it is understandable if it is slow to warm up. But I think the senior brother's scenes in the early stage can be deleted. If it doesn't work, I'll see if they can be moved to the later stages to show the memories. In fact, I have always liked this character. Gong is the kind of person who is a proud man but has fallen into the dust. He is also a very young person with a young heart. He is not just a sweetheart at the beginning. He has also experienced many hardships to grow up. Shou is one of those unreliable masters. The good thing I can understand is that although he is ruthless and feels ordinary, he has always been cold and sorted out in his heart (I guess this is what the author wants to express, but the character creation is still not three-dimensional enough) Finally, this is what I really want to comment on! ! ! This fucking system is really awesome. I need to either strengthen Shou or weaken the system as soon as possible, because I feel that the frustration is partly with Shou. I don't really want to wait until the attack is strong before I can clean up the system.
Really really super super super super super super super beautiful （🐒）（🌳）（(´∇ﾉ｀*)ノ） (Jump down) (Randomly grab a lucky spectator) (Roaring) (Crawling on the ground in the dark) Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe) (Cut off the head of a passer-by in excitement) (take out the brain) (click, click, click, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew, chew.
It's really good to watch, very, very good to watch, I watched it all in one go. Author, please update quickly. It's very beautiful, I like it very much. The characters are all well created, how could they be so to my liking. Master, Master, we love you [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Author, why did you only write one book? How come you only have one unfinished book to read? With such good writing style, I don't believe you only wrote one book. I read it in one sitting without even reviewing for the exam. How come you are so careless about it? Why is this book so beautiful? What should I do if I can't read the new chapter and feel like there are countless bugs crawling on my body? I beg you, please write some more.
Nice! But I want to ask, will the protagonist's cultivation level be completely lost due to ruthlessness? Don't wow. . . .
It's OK, but I was a little angry when I was controlled by the system╰_╯. Beixing will continue to suffer in the future, and Yun Chu will also have a hard time. I hope he can get better soon and reconcile soon (I won't become a demon king and imprison Yun Chu because of being kicked out of the sect before (*^_^*))
It looks good. I think Bei Xing and Yun Chu's happy daily life is good to watch, but there are not many such warm scenes, the plot is not procrastinating, and the characters are vividly created. Yun Chu's heart is broken, and Bei Xing is missing half of his ear. This makes me feel that these two are really miserable. When will Bei Xing become stronger? Come on, (I want to see Bei Xing go to Yun Chu to resolve the misunderstanding, or Yun Chu helps Bei Xing in obscurity, and then dies. When Bei Xing decides to go to Yun Chu, he is told that Yun Chu is dead, and the misunderstanding is resolved. When Bei Xing is sad, Yun Chu is resurrected. I really want to see this kind of thing. Is there any boss who goes to the book circle to cook)
Very good looking. Finally there is a villain who is not a reborn master and apprentice.
It looks good, but it updates very slowly. There is no poison at the moment, you can eat it with confidence
The foreign objects in the system are too big
Why is it gone? . . TT is really new to my eyes, the plot is not sluggish at all. The emotional line was a bit confusing at first, 🌚I didn't quite understand it, but the writing is very good! ! ! Like 🥰
How dare the author suddenly keep updating every day, updating three chapters a day, it scares me to death [rolls eyes]
It's very interesting and not laggy at all. Although the misunderstanding is not solved, it is not a relationship that lasts until death. It's too little if it doesn't make people feel frustrated. The author will update soon😡🐛🐛🐛🐛 Please stop delaying, I want to eat! 😭
Great, great, I really like this kind of book. I hope the author can produce more of this kind of food [Love][Love]
Boss (kneel down gently) I still want to watch (cry) Mi [crying] I've been waiting for so many days, I'm hungry
Why is no one watching? Very nice, please update slowly! I originally wanted to come to Tunwen
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
It's good to read, but the number of chapters is so few, not enough to read [crying][crying][crying]
It looks good, but it's a bit sharp. I [cry][cry][cry] Still very good
It looks good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the plot is interesting, but the attack and control will make you feel a little distressed.
Nice! I hope we can get to know each other soon and resolve the misunderstanding [crying] Please update soon.
It's so beautiful. Please update the author more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
Oh my god, I have never read a new book that is better than this one [Adoration], the author ~ update soon
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Looks great, cheers!
Oh my god, it's really beautiful\(//∇//)\
It's cool, but too short. Woohoo.
The author, hungry for food [crying][crying]
Big, hungry, rice, eat, eat
When will the update be updated? It's so beautiful. Can you please stop updating it?