New works are released. Welcome to Tomato Novel to read my works. I hope you all like them. Your attention is the motivation for my writing. I will try my best to tell every story!
Reader comments
The first few plots are not detailed enough, such as what type of store the protagonist opens, and how the Pokémon in the store come to the store. The transition is a bit stiff, and sometimes it makes people feel confused. Why did it suddenly change to this place?
The plot is incoherent and too bland, making it tiring to read.
The first few plots are not detailed enough, such as what type of store the protagonist opens, and how the Pokémon in the store come to the store. The transition is a bit stiff, and sometimes it makes people feel confused. Why did it suddenly change to this place?
The plot is incoherent and too bland, making it tiring to read.