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Secretly give yourself a five-star [blow a kiss]

I read it in one go and I feel it is well written. It would be better if the world view is established more clearly. The plot is compact and can make me very interested in reading. This is something I cannot see in many new authors. I hope the author can have better traffic.

There are obvious problems with the logic. The wolf next to the lamb thinks that the protagonist is cute and wants it. This is the fundamental reason why the protagonist is won. Up to this point, I thought it was some kind of heartthrob novel. But when I was rushing back, the wolf actually wanted to kill the protagonist. The reason why he didn't dare to kill him was because of the lamb. The contrast between before and after was a bit big. The protagonist is just a meteorite, but the depiction is too crude, and when I read this, I thought the protagonist was finally going to become invincible, but it turns out that the meteorite is just average, and some scenes are a bit crude. Summary: The logic is a bit problematic and the battle scenes are a bit crude. Suggestions: The battle scenes can be expanded with AI, and then the redundant rhetoric can be removed. I think the logic problem mainly lies in the shaping of the characters of some supporting characters. For example, the wolf at the beginning. Since he thinks the protagonist is cute and likes it, he should be shy when facing the protagonist, or psychologically happy, just like normal people want to masturbate when they see cats and dogs, but the wolf actually wants to kill the protagonist. What is the role of foreshadowing that the wolf thinks the author is cute? But as the third novel read by more than 5,000 people in Free, the author is still great, and the number of readers of this novel in Free is considered T0 level. Compared with many free authors, including me, who update intermittently, it can be seen that the author really put his body and mind into the novel. So I give five stars

It's a very appetizing novel Why do you stop updating when you are writing well😭😭😭😭😭😭

A very good story with a big world view, which is my favorite type This book is one of Tomato's few furry-themed books with a grand world view, attractive content, strong narrative logic, and a loving narrative style (personally, I think it surpasses "The Holy Sword Reborn"). The author's thinking about the world and society can be faintly seen between the lines. It can also reflect the values formed by the youth of the new era, as well as the author's expectation and love for a peaceful, happy and beautiful world. To a certain extent, it shows the potential of Tomato's new generation of creators.

This is the best book I've ever seen written by Fury The ingredients are very complex. The game contains thoughts and questions about life. It also covers the bottlenecks and problems encountered in the development of the entire human society. The writing style is a bit like Lord of Mysteries, but the plot is incoherent, and I often thought I skipped a chapter.

Protagonist: I heard the echo of "strong luck"

I don't know what to say but 5 stars

Although I don't know what I wrote, but it's good

It's really well written. It's my favorite book after listening to it for more than a year. You must keep writing! !

The protagonist is a bit too miserable [crying]

This book is really good. I have never read this type of book before. Occasionally I find it interesting, so keep up the good work, author!

Good-looking, before watching: Beast? Awesome After watching: I heard the echo of "karma"

I like it, hehehe [laughs]

Use your abilities more often [angry]

Haokan! Titanium Hao talked

It's so fast (updated) I can't bear it anymore (my eyes are almost broken)

It feels okay, looks okay

No matter what, I really like listening to it anyway. [Love][love]