The Light of Days Gone By

Dear book friends, hello everyone, I wonder if the science fiction novels I write are in line with your taste? I am a newbie writing books in the third grade of junior high school. I work hard to update every day. I don't ask for a big reward. I just ask for some suggestions, good reviews and support. Thank you🥰

How can I put it, the paragraphs are not divided well, there are many long paragraphs, and they are verbose, such as the introduction of races, which are introduced repeatedly. The plot content in the middle is roughly oppression, resistance, oppression, resistance again, it is a bit circular, although the object has been changed. In addition, an interstellar civilization that has developed for tens of thousands of years is actually just The 20G anti-German suit, I think this is a bit inappropriate, but it can also be seen that the author really put his heart into it and checked a lot of things, such as general relativity and quantum tunneling effect. The author can also expand his imagination and not be limited to energy cannons, star battleships, etc. Finally, I wish the author good luck in his writing and his works will become popular.

The first few chapters are very hard science fiction, and then chapters 3 to 9 become soft science fiction. Then the following chapters are also soft science fiction, but with a lot of fantasy content added. Overall, it is good. It is a very good soft science fiction novel. I support the author and hope that the author will continue to update it.