After the White Moonlight Came Back to Life, My Best Friend Went Crazy Spoiling Me

Hee hee, I like the author's themes very much, but I would like to make some objective suggestions. In fact, I think the ending is a little rushed. I feel that the protagonists may need to go through more hardships together. Lan Zhi slowly discovers emotions in the process. This way, there may be more room for writing, and the book will be more complete and hopefully more popular. This aspect of the Ghost King feels that the emotional line is a bit inexplicable, and if Lanzhi can recover, then he will definitely recover as time goes by. Before Lanzhi, he had a righteous heart to sacrifice himself and maintain world peace. After he was reborn, he would overdraw his body and set up a barrier, but in the end he just eloped and got married? The ghost king also changed his ways because of the love between his children? It doesn't matter if they all died together before. So many people like Lanzhi, so he must have a dazzling personality. I think the world view should be made more grand and complete, the emotional development should be richer, and the other characters who like Lanzhi should be more three-dimensional and rich. Don't overly flatten or omit it, just to highlight the protagonist's heartthrob. This novel will have more prospects. I hope it will be helpful to the author! [Laugh]

It's so funny that not many people are watching [crying][crying][crying]

It's pretty good [blowing kiss], but Lin Miao, the ghost king, is a bit uncomfortable [smile]

Haha, not bad, a little sweet note

It feels like a short story, very interesting and beautiful.

A very good book

Not bad, I just finished watching it and the plot didn't drag on. Good story