I Will Go to Kunlun to Become an Immortal

How can I put it this way? I really like this novel, but it's too slow. Is the heroine the protagonist's confession partner?

To be honest, I think it's okay. The one thing that's a little bit annoying is that pig's feet are always touched by people, especially during the beginning of school. In other aspects, it's a single female protagonist. I suggest the author greatly reduce these conflicts. Anyway, I can't say for sure. It's the kind of feeling that wherever a pig's feet go, something will happen. You can write about daily life, like where a pig's feet go. It's about the same time when I was studying here, and I think I can fix the loopholes in the pig's trotters that can cool down wherever they go. Normal people feel that this person has a problem and give pig's trotters a breath-condensing technique or something. Well, these are pretty good. Anyway, I can't find an urban cultivation novel that's more to my taste. If you guys have any, I'd recommend it [shy]

I think you can start reading from chapter 4. This novel is relatively slow to pick up.

Very nice, quite interesting

It's ok, can I take a look?

Really good, highly recommended

It's rare to find a good book,

It's been a long time since I've seen traditional urban immortality writing. I miss it. It's well written. I'd like to give it a good review.

I haven't read such a good book in a long time, the plot is vivid

It feels very immersive, and the characters could be enriched a little more

It's okay, it's good-looking, it's different from the previous urban immortality cultivation, and the subject matter is novel. Like 👍👍👍.

It would be nice if there were more.

Okay, okay, I hope the author can complete it perfectly

There is no need for so much ambiguity, and there can also be less fighting and planning [smile]

It's beautiful and well written.

It's still okay

Look great, come on Haki It looks good, but why is it only 6.6? [Notice]

It's pretty good. I hope it doesn't end badly.

This novel is very beautiful. 👍👍👍👍👍👍

I don't know how to look good This book has a "life" flavor There is no formulaic main line set at the beginning But it advances the plot in an orderly manner It looks very comfortable. Come on, author.

The plot is good and the characters are interesting. This is the first book reviewed by Tomato. Please update quickly and don't let people send you razor blades.

It's relaxing, I hope it stays the same in the future and there won't be any drama about bitterness, hatred and hatred [laughs]

Nice. It just ended too quickly, and I lost it after watching it.

It's good-looking, the system is clear, and the protagonist is not brainless.

It's quite interesting, but the author just can't update it twice a day (one update a day is not impossible with a page of 3,000 words) [grievance]