Superpower World Rescue Plan

Humph~ I may be the first to leave a long comment~ Regarding this article, I haven't read the detailed explanation of the settings in Chapter 0, as I'm worried that it will affect the subsequent viewing experience, but based on the previous article, I can still make some suggestions~ 1. The character of the protagonist is good, but there are too few roles, and sometimes it is not very distinctive. Even if you are doing a group portrait, don't ignore the smart baby of the protagonist - (crying) The protagonist also needs to have a major role! By the way, the setting of "money can make you grind" is a bit unnatural, or it is not really integrated into the plot and the character, it is like a setting that appears only when it should appear (it feels a bit pity to think about it this way), and the cost and effect of this ability are actually a bit unequal. In other words, the protagonist may need a clear "cost" as an alternative medium (of course, if the author has an explanation, just pretend he didn't see it~). 2. The rhythm of the plot can be a little faster, or you can try using forums and comics as side narrative perspectives to avoid repeated narratives (the author can also refer to the narrative techniques of similar works. I survive in the comics world by highlighting (it seems to be called this), which is good~) 3. You can optimize the character design to make the protagonist group more distinct. It is also a necessary task to highlight the main characters! Finally, let me praise you~ It's amazing that you can write so much. After all, typing is really tiring, and you also take good care of the characters you write. I feel like you are really a very good and gentle "mother"! I sincerely hope that the author will have a happy time in the future. If possible, I can add more chapters. But I also sincerely hope that coding will not become a psychological burden for you. Then, you must be happy tomorrow~

I don't know why, after tossing and turning, I still choose to come back. I always feel that if I don't comment, it will be like I have some regrets. It is really well written. I may never find another book that makes me feel the same as this one. I just feel a little regretful that I can't see more of them.

Come on, author, the characters and plot are pretty good. I like this subject very much.

It looks so good! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very interesting and the subject matter is good🌹

Not bad, I just wrote 50 chapters for one competition

It feels quite interesting, I'm looking forward to it

It looks pretty good so far, and I hope the author will continue to do so. Also, does our protagonist have a mysterious identity? Arrange a few more if you can, it will look really cool. ⌓‿⌓

Very interesting, the main character is well designed