A Great Voyage for All the People, the One Chosen by the Flames

I would like to give some suggestions for this book (for reference only) 1. It can revolve around the events experienced by the original protagonist (Lao Yang) without participating directly. For example, on the Tinder Island of the Limb Spider Queen, the current protagonist can go to the island to explore again after Lao Yang leaves, or he can learn about it and start planning. 2. The protagonist's basic attributes improve too quickly in the early stage. It is recommended to refer to the approximate experience gained in the original work (the original work probably can reach a hundred to several hundred points in one day without any other means) to avoid the protagonist upgrading too quickly, and it is written that the protagonist will definitely not be on the list in the selection of the strongest players of the year in the later period (it fits the plot, maybe because he is not famous or his strength is still lacking) 3. The early plot is slightly unreasonable. According to the original starting situation, the situation of the players at the beginning is generally balanced (the starting materials are as good as the weird ones). Moreover, the players that the protagonist met three days after the beginning actually knew about the Spider Order. It was very funny. Even the protagonist only found out after experiencing the Stormy Sea. Why did the doctor know so clearly? And how could someone be so heartless and just replace most of the limbs, lift a hand, or add a small number of limbs only three days into the game. In summary, there are a lot of pitfalls, the logic is not particularly strong, and the rationality is not good, but the ideas are excellent. Maybe it is because the author does not have rich experience (personal guessing is not to blame). I hope the author can improve his writing style and think more. I also hope that the author will be newer and better.

The fan writing is very good.

I hope one day I can see Xiao Gui make a cameo in "The Voyage of Horror" [Note][Note][Note]

I hope that the protagonists from "A Day of Horror" will come to visit. I hope that the protagonists from "A Day of Horror" will come to visit.

The content is good, but the emotional scenes are too difficult to break down

As long as you are willing to write, I will give you praise

Very good fan, makes my Star Night Wish spin

Are you sure this doesn't coincide with the Age of Discovery?

666 Forest Ice and Fire Man, but the language is a bit stiff, please keep up the good work

A very wonderful book

The writing is good. I can slow down the progress a little and hope to add the relic Heart Fire Scale. Appearance: A huge scale with ice on the left pan and fire on the right pan. There is no pallet, the flame holds the weight in the void. Function: A magical weapon that determines whether the "Flame Chosen" is qualified. It measures "how much calories (price) you are willing to pay for your choice."

Very well written, keep it up

I will definitely give you rave reviews [like][like][like][like][like]

Praise the disrespectful

Better among the fans

Very well written, author, come on

Beautiful, very innovative

May this book be your beacon of wisdom and lead you to ride the waves in the ocean of knowledge. (✧∀✧)/ I just bought a new book that I really like🎒, it couldn't be better👍! Friends, come and take a look at this book, it is definitely worth reading~😌🌟#GoodBookRecommendation#

The writing is pretty good, nothing bad about it.

A very good fan, come on