Traveling Through the Book: Starting from Coaxing the Yandere Villain

It's quite good-looking. The male protagonist Asasi is not the kind of person who only speaks big words. The male protagonist has a weak and tolerant personality but is not pretentious. I have read many similar stories before and the male protagonists are described as being more feminine. We weak-willed men just like to be passive and are usually normal. [I understand] Big sisters are the best! After reading this, there is basically no poisonous point. Friends who have reversed xp will be confused.

So far, it's very good. Su Qianmo's portrayal is very good, as well as Qin's brotherhood. I'm looking forward to the protagonist wearing women's clothing, haha, but the sister is really pitiful and hurt all the time [crying]. There are still a few shortcomings. There are a bit too many female characters. One sister, one younger sister, two outside the school, and a senior sister, as well as various assistants. It's a bit hard to remember, and I feel that the pace of this sister could be faster, and the plot of family quarrels is a bit redundant or poorly laid out. This novel is really good to read, without the procrastination in the early stages of other novels. It is very direct and straightforward, which is really comfortable, haha. 😊 Also, I hope those girls in the back will never get into fights! We need to get along well [crying] Please

The nine sons of a dragon are all different. I saw a lot of voices in the comment area. Ten thousand people will have ten thousand Hamlets in their hearts, but for me, this article is more in line with myself, so it's great! [Send heart][Send heart]

The writing is okay. For some people who like to see this kind of yandere sister and brother, it will feel good, but for some, it will feel weird. From the point of view of this article, for multi-female harem novels, there shouldn't be too many female protagonists. You can watch it.

It was very comfortable to read, there were no crazy elements, the correction system was not abrupt, and the protagonist's IQ was also on par with the character's personality. I personally thought it was quite three-dimensional. When I read it, I felt that the male protagonist was good to them not only to prevent bad endings, but also to show his attachment to their family and friendship. He also completely brought himself into this world. Moreover, after realizing that this was the world in the book, the first thing I thought about was not whether there was a system but how to prevent bad endings. Thank you. Come on! The author continues to maintain that there are currently no bad memes on the Internet that have not reduced readers' interest in reading.

The plot is compact and not deviant, but sometimes the protagonist's character is too weak, and I hope to create more crazy and gloomy moments. Mu tide and Gu Sheng fight secretly, and the psychological activities are well described, gloomy but not without enthusiasm, and lifelike. The character jumps smoothly and smoothly, "Su"'s psychological trajectory is followable and well-founded, the description method is brilliant, the plot is compact and ups and downs, and the changes in the character's personality are highlighted through room changes, which is concise and clear without losing the tone of the writing. Five stars are presented, and more will be posted on the wall in the future.

Good looking, this is the yandere novel, this is the yandere novel I want to read I didn't like it a little bit later

After reading it, I can actually write a few more chapters and add some male villain plots, etc. This book is not enough. Gu Sheng is the big winner. The novel has the most chapters written about Gu Sheng>Su Qianmo>Qiao Nanzhu>Mu tide. I feel like I want a happy ending and Xiaobai's share is just mentioned in one stroke, which is not enough to read. I think the last extra chapter can add more details. Su Qianmo's leg was injured before and she met the previous band. At that time, I felt too uncomfortable watching this episode and gave up music. It can be added that Mu Changge and Su Qianmo went to the band to sing together after they confirmed their relationship, so as to make up for their regrets and be true to themselves. Qiao Nanzhu... Let Mu Changge wear women's clothes more often and scold her more. Xiao Bai is my favorite character, maybe because of her bad background. In the extra story, I can add Xiao Bai to see her sister, visit Mu Changge's grandfather on Qingming Festival, and take him to the street to eat cakes and sweets. It's really uncomfortable that Xiao Bai's possession captivity ended in just a few chapters. The ending is good, it's great [send heart][OK][OK][OK]Xiaobai is mine[OK][OK][OK]

The writing is weak in some aspects, but overall it's okay. If you like watching yandere movies, or those who like fun, I recommend reading it. It's really fun. (I want to watch Super Shura Field!!! Oh my!)

It's good to watch. I like Gu Sheng, Xiao tide, Xiao Mo, Qiao Nanzhu... It's not bad, but is it a party fight at the end? I invest in sister stocks

Very good, um, the first dozen or 20? Most of it is the interaction between the protagonist and his sister. The description of the interaction is very good. If you like girls older than you, you can watch it.

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Objectively speaking, it's very good, and the ending is also very good. It makes the most sense to stay with Gu. It's just that my sister is miserable. Qiao and Su are both independent individuals. They came here on their own when they were growing up. They don't have any particularly long-term contact with the protagonist. They can live a good life even without the protagonist. It's just that the protagonist interferes. But my sister is different. From the moment she gradually realizes this, the protagonist occupies half of the world. In short, it is still very pitiful that Mu cannot be together in the end. Even if they finally take a step back and continue to live together, it is good. At least the protagonist can still take care of her.

Among the many yandere novels I have read, this book is already very good. The plot is neither procrastinating nor abrupt, and the author's writing style is good. The descriptions are not too repetitive and you won't feel too tired. As a new author, he is really great! I hope the author will open a new book soon [love] [love] [love]

Emm, I just read Chapter 8, let me talk briefly about it. First of all, it is a novel written by a female author. It seems to have a slightly female flavor. I don't know what it means if it is placed in the male channel, but there is no problem. Then, the relationship develops too fast. The male and female protagonists seem to have become very good friends for some reason. This The language used by the two people is very Japanese anime, and there is a strong sense of separation from the background of the yandere metropolis. Then the whole chapters are basically driven by dialogue. There is a bit too much dialogue. The male protagonist is also the standard Asashi male protagonist ten years ago. A lot of chicken soup, I can only say that the four stars are encouraging, and the future is promising.

The overall completion of this book is very high. The author's gentle and considerate multi-faceted portrayal of the male protagonist, as well as the transformation process of the female protagonist and the three female supporting characters gradually turning into a yandere are very attractive. I almost read the entire novel in one sitting. The rhythm of the writing was well controlled and the reading experience was smooth. (Although the male protagonist seems a bit lacking in masculinity...) The only flaw is the splitting of the ending. The author focuses the main plot on the endings of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, while also using three branch lines to hastily wrap up the endings of the three female supporting characters. Although this arrangement can understand the author's consideration of the character's personality and narrative logic (after all, the harem ending does not conform to the character setting), the three branch lines are only hastily concluded in one or two chapters, which is more like a forced ending than a true multi-line ending, and fails to effectively enhance the depth of the work. If I were to reconstruct the ending, I would introduce the setting of "time back". For example, design a watch with a time-tracing function as a key prop. The specific operations are as follows: When the three female supporting characters failed to compete for the male lead, they failed through repeated attempts and finally obtained the watch in their twilight years. The female partner surnamed Su chose to restart time out of regret and regained the hero's sincerity at the initial meeting point; then the watch was transferred to the female partners surnamed Qiao and Mu, who also reached their ending with the male protagonist through time regression. In the end, the watch was transferred to the male protagonist. After recalling all the previous endings, he chose to secretly protect the female protagonist and female supporting characters from childhood, helping them solve their difficulties but keeping a distance, and finally allowing them to have a happy life. After adulthood, the male protagonist chooses to be single and wander (or secretly contribute to the harem ending/finally get married with the female protagonist). The advantages of this design are: 1. Naturally connect multiple endings through time retrieval mechanism 2. Each branch can be developed independently, and the narrative perspective can be changed to enhance the sense of immersion. 3. The protagonist keeps his memory blank during reincarnation, and the heroine's memory recovery can be designed to be instant awakening or delayed recall according to the needs of the plot. 4. The final ending not only retains the character arc, but also achieves an emotional closure, and the narrative structure will be more complete and smooth than the original ending.

There are 4 female protagonists, and 4 story lines are Gu Sheng, Su Qianmo, Mu tide, and Qiao Nanzhu. They are normal at the beginning, and then all the characters are yandere. There are also 4 perfect endings, which are not bad, at least they are satisfying. Writing about a harem may be a collapse, but it is also very good, [laughing]

Overall, it's not bad. In the later period, the male protagonist was like a puppet and couldn't say anything and was forced to accept it. He was always passive after being imprisoned by his sister. I always expected the plot of the male protagonist to overtake him, but it didn't happen, but it was quite sweet.

Author: I want to see the older sister and younger sister tearing each other apart at first, and then fighting for the male lead after the two protagonists have successfully developed. The older sister and the younger sister realize that they cannot defeat each other individually, and then work together to win the male lead back. The ending is that the two sisters and the male lead become a real family (≧∇≦)/

To be fair, this book is better than most of the books on the recommendation list.

After reading this, I really like this novel written by the author because this novel is not like other novels. The main focus of the male protagonist is to escape and resist. This makes the novel really exciting and very frequent. There are no poisonous points and the plot is not protracted. It ends when it needs to be finished. It is really the best yandere novel. I have not read the novel in a short time. This is simple ( ⁼̴̀ .̫ ⁼̴́ )✧

It's okay, the male protagonist is a typical Asashi male protagonist in Japanese comics. There is nothing particularly novel about the plot, nor is there any particularly bad points (the male protagonist is a bit feminine, which is not a big deal to me. I don't know what others think). Let's see what happens next [Chigua]

It's very interesting. I hope the author won't make it as bad as the first part. I like it very much. It's unfinished. The author has already finished it. I originally thought it was a harem. After reading it, it's just Sister Gu. The author doesn't know how to write long stories. It's too little and I feel uncomfortable. The author ended it too suddenly. I thought there would be a lot more plot after I rescued it. I didn't expect it to end immediately. I'm so disappointed.

Just try to be a good person for once, this book is very good, the author's writing style is very good, and he is rare and well-educated. Although it is said to have multiple female protagonists, uh, the overall main route is still the female protagonist route. It has everything it should have, and it's well written. Everything is very reasonable. It's not like those particularly bad ones. Well, the yandere novel is the kind of male-dominated one. This won't happen with the previous one. All the explanations and settings are quite reasonable. It's very good. I suggest everyone to read it.

The ending is good, and there are no major flaws except for the writing being a little off. I personally support Mu Changge and Gu Sheng being together the most, as they have the deepest emotional foundation, good financial resources, and the least resistance. Including other Mu Xi's coming from behind and Su Qianmo's branch plot, I like them all very much😍😍😍 @, love love love [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

The plot is very good, with ups and downs, and the writing is good. Well, although I don't like that the ending is not a harem, it makes me very uncomfortable when I think that I can only choose one among the four. [Crying][Crying][Crying] But I still like Gu Sheng the most

In fact, the gender swap won't be so awkward. This kind of male protagonist who has a female gender-swapped character is too weak to bear.

The writing is really awesome, the yandere flavor is just right, there is a certain amount of freedom, but there is no eternal freedom. All the heroines have the limit of their tolerance, and they compete for it. They are really possessive. It is a perfect yandere novel.

Four stars, it's a bit toxic but the follow-up is okay. Jiang Hua's plot can be said to be the best written. At first, I thought the protagonist was going to have a yandere again, which was a bit annoying at first, but I never expected that she would die like this [crying]

I just like to see this kind of character creation with a lot of inner fluctuations. Come on, you must stick to it. There is also the inner monologue of the protagonist about himself as a villain. I think you can actually be more open-minded. When you realize that the people around you cherish you, you will not take into account that you are a villain, and you will not care who is the real villain. Spend more time to accompany and respond, and have the feeling of independent thinking.