Jose’s Bizarre Adventure in America

At first I thought it was a purely original fictional JoJo fanfic. After all, the author's setting is in the real world, right? But there are actually Jero and Dio? The Dominic behind is the weather forecast? Also, I saw a comment that the author personally highlighted. The cartoonist Diego saved in the Persian Gulf was an old thief! Co-authoring jojo is really Araki's autobiography. But there is one thing to say, this kind of setting that can substitute the original characters in the real world is really nice. Diego is not a villain, Jero's family is not an executioner, and even Trump has corresponded to Valentine, which is awesome.

Author, I also want to see Jonathan Joseph Cesar Katz Jotaro Kakyoin Polnareff Abdelichi Josuke Yasuichiro Tairo accompanied by Yoshikage Giorno Bugatti Misda Naranga Apakifu Godiablo Xu Lunjoni Dingshu Jodio, can you arrange it and have a parallel world brawl?

The first volume has ended. Jose and others will leave Los Angeles, while Yoko Hayakawa will stay in Los Angeles to take care of the funeral affairs of her brother Benny and her father. The four Joses will travel across the American continent to Washington on the east coast, heading towards the unknown and destruction. At that time, the "New World" plan promoted by Peace Dove will also kick off. The first batch of meteorite products will cause the death of a large number of innocent people, and will also create a large number of "substitute messengers" in the United States... The subsequent main story will not be limited to the "Insect Arrow" dispute and the birth of "New America". The secret of Alaska is not known to the protagonist and his party - that is, the "strongest power" in the mouth of Eternity...

It feels pretty good. In addition, this is a self-designed stand-in for myself. I don't know if the author will use it or not (I'm sorry if it collides with someone's setting) (humble) Alias: Symphonic Fever Destructive power C Speed A Precision B Sustainability E Range A Growth C Appearance: The main body is a columnar body with a height of 0.5 Meters and a base radius of 0.25 Meters. It has four tentacles of 1 meter in length. The ends of the tentacles are a quarter ring. The tentacles can be retracted into the columnar body. At this time, the avatar looks like a black and purple UFO flying saucer. Ability: A blow from the ring at the end of the tentacle gives the hit part a rotational force (that is, a force couple) that is the same as the direction and force of the blow. Continuous strikes to the same part by the same torus will only refresh the rotation force given by the torus and cannot be superimposed. However, the rotational forces given by different rings to the same part can interact with each other. (Additional explanation, the rotation time is 15 seconds. Symphony Fever can directly apply rotation force to itself to strengthen the blow strength) Fighting method: applying rotational force to cause the struck part to twist relative to the whole, resulting in spraining or even breaking. You can also directly apply rotational force to yourself to strengthen the blow and directly smash something or attack the enemy. The wilderness of greed Destructive power B Speed D Precision C Sustainability B Range C Growth D Appearance: A bloated, khaki-colored humanoid with a giant mouth full of fangs on its face and abdomen, and a strong bite force. Its fat body can cushion the impact well. Ability: It can release a pheromone that makes people feel hungry. The hunger will continue to increase over time, and the desire to eat will become stronger and stronger. (The effective range of the pheromone is 25 meters in radius. The hunger will disappear one minute after stopping inhaling the pheromone) Fighting method: Use pheromones to make the opponent feel hungry, use the good defense of "Greedful Wilderness" to delay time, so that the strong hunger and appetite affect thinking ability, find the right moment to kill with the huge mouth of the abdomen dangerous place Destructive power none Speed none Precision None Sustainability A Range E Growth C Appearance: None, the avatar is attached to the nervous tissue of the main body and has no body. Ability: It can release a special magnetic field, which causes the nervous tissue of creatures within a radius of 50 meters to cause confusion when transmitting information. It is similar to a state where the buttons are tampered with when someone clearly wants to raise the left hand but lifts the right foot. At the same time, because the nervous tissue is affected, the avatar will enter a state similar to excessive sensitivity. Note: Because the "Dangerous Place" is attached to the nervous tissue and can work for the nervous tissue, the body of the "Dangerous Place" is not affected. (I can only think of these two at the moment, I will add more if I have new ideas later)

Generally speaking, the writing is good, but the setting is a bit lacking. It doesn't mention that the protagonist is a time traveler, so how can the protagonist directly tell that the avatar is something from Jojo, and the avatar's inexplicable attack in the early stage is on the plane. There is no foreshadowing and no plot. At the beginning, it is just to clear the level. It is inexplicable. What are we looking at? Come on, there are not many Jojo fan fictions, and your writing is really good. Come on, come on.

Damn it, so the Gerald in this is Gerald Zeppelin?

Needless to say, JOJO is a must-read. Although the writing style is a bit messy and jerky, the cleverly conceived story makes up for it. The chapters that have been updated so far can be said to be very exciting, with awareness, wisdom, and wonderful stand-in abilities. It reminds me of the summer of 2019. I clicked on the fifth JOJO Golden Wind, and then I was deeply fascinated by it. I hope the author can finish this story. Compared with those mindless scammers, the quality is higher 👍 If necessary, the author can use and adopt my self-created substitute [Only Forward], whose name comes from a single by Victor Choi, Destructive power: C Speed: A Precision: C Range: C Growth:? Sustainability: A AbilityEnd...? : Hit the target with your fist, causing a time jump (forward) in units of a certain target. The more times you hit, the greater the jump. One punch is about a fifteen to thirty-minute jump. If you hit too many times, the target except the avatar will be directly annihilated (if the physical limit of the target is exceeded, the target will be annihilated). Hitting intelligent life can allow it to obtain the "future" memory of the parallel world (the moment it obtains the memory, this timeline automatically differentiates into the parallel universe of the "memory" timeline). If you hit something in motion, the thing will be directly positioned to a certain position where it should move according to the general development rules of the thing. For example, if Little A wants to go to the toilet, and he is walking on the way to the toilet, [only forward] can send him to the toilet with a punch, or even skip the process of untying and directly pull the big thing. The ability cannot be dispelled, and the process after activation is determined to be irreversible. It can have effects on oneself and the substitute, and cannot annihilate the substitute, but it can cause the substitute to directly achieve a certain "result". "Essentially, it's just moving towards the "result"..."

The avatar's ability design in the latest chapter is great, but the plot is a bit less circuitous than the three chapters of Civil War. The same goes for many other avatars' battles. Maybe it's because reading novels and comics are different? But overall good

The top JOJO fandom I have seen on Tomato, but unfortunately there are too few people

Come on author, there are very few jojo fans now