From Fierce************

It can't be a change of marriage, right? It's a change of marriage, so I won't watch it.

Pretty good, but five chapters a day. . . I will argue for it

It's not that I look down on Tai Chi. It's obviously good at martial arts, cool and fast-paced. You can play Tai Chi with us. It is strongly recommended not to do Tai Chi

No memory of this world is given, no identity is known, not even a hint of reality.

It would be best to write a starry sky chapter, because there are too many flower-shaped transformation stories, and the world view is within a small scope, but it cannot be too big. If it is too big, the matryoshka doll novel will be boring. Just keep the scope within the prehistoric range.

Like most books, there is no content attached to the title. When you gain the ability, the world goes black for a moment, and then you light up Tai Chi. There is no eternal night.

Generally speaking, the writing style and world view are to my liking, but if I read it as a refreshing article, one uncomfortable point is that there is always a frustrating point followed by a refreshing point, and I don't feel very happy after reading a section. However, I am still looking forward to the subsequent story, and I hope the author can make this book have a good process and ending.

Great author, please come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Changing single, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and women's bodies is perfect, and the description of female abduction is zero. It has a very good fantasy high-level martial arts background setting, the heroine design is not bad, the female character is strong, the battle scenes are full of descriptions, and the golden finger is powerful. The ending was a little rushed, but it was a perfect open ending. The writing is worth collecting. The author really doesn't have to worry about changing one person, getting married or getting married. There are thousands of people with different faces. You are not RMB, so you can't satisfy everyone. With your writing style, you can write anything.

It's quite interesting, but I just don't want to be on the verge of becoming a hundred. I'm going crazy and testing. I don't want to become a hundred, the author [crying]

Well written, keep it up

Overall it's okay. But the setting of your family is too poisonous. He said that eating that kind of elixir can make you an immortal. There are probably a few of them. In the end, the monster treated him like a dog and beat him. And there is a high chance that that thing will suffer backlash. In this case, only a dying person would be able to eat it. Normally there is still such a long time, so I shouldn't eat it. You should not dare to gamble.

Daze is the only free space travel

You know I haven't read a book for an hour and I don't feel comfortable commenting on it. (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ

For now, it's okay, I can watch it

Very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice, very nice.

The overall feeling is quite good, the writing style is also okay, the author's anxiety is also very real, there is no such thing as turning gray or getting married. However, because the author's emotional drama is more delicate, it is easy to misunderstand. If you can continue reading, there will be no problem. I hope the author can work hard.

Suddenly I remembered that the villain's eyes in "The Wizard of Oz" can fly solo [laughing and crying]

G Live, don't live without it

Yan Lingyin has been removed from the shelves. I came to take a look and found out that you, the author, don't have a complete book.

Come on, I just want to read the post [laughs evilly]

You don't feel like Shuangwen!

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Big boost to the author 😊

Author, you can write whatever you want. It is impossible to satisfy everyone if it is difficult to agree with others.

After listening to it for more than ten hours, I feel that it is well written. I can accept fake, hundreds, and single changes. If it is a single change, I can write about friendship, the interaction between men and women or best friends.

You must keep writing, come on, it looks good

You can read it when you are bored. The author can write daily plots well. I hope the author will not be too influenced by others when writing books in the future.

The quality is average, the creativity is good, and the plot is a bit draggy.

It's okay, but it's not cool enough