Sweet Pet******************

After watching the first world, the plot is good, not too long nor too short, and it is not the love-at-first-sight kind of thing emotionally, which I like, but the relationship between Gong and Gong is progressing too fast, and it feels like there is no emotional pull at all, and it develops directly from a stranger to a loved one. The author can write more descriptions of the emotional development between Gong and Shou. It would be better to have more interactions and some intimate scenes (it doesn't have to be too obvious, we can figure it out in our heads [laughing evilly]), thank you so much for the author! [Love][love]

Fortunately, the second world was not fun to watch. It was a bit frustrating and there were few emotional scenes. I didn't even notice that they were together in the second world. Generally speaking, I prefer more emotional scenes. It's not very sweet, of course maybe it's too sweet for me 😉 Keep up the good work, author! ❤

It's quite good-looking, but it makes people's scalp numb when looking at long paragraphs. I suggest you read it in one or two lines to feel comfortable.

I feel that the plot is quite smooth, there are foreshadowings, each time is not very long, and there are more emotional scenes. You can also tell the author what kind of world you like, and the author will consider it, which is very nice!

No one commented. Is this a small world? Give the author Baobao a good review. I went to see it first (lay down

The plot and perfect logic are also quite smooth, and the emotional line progresses very quickly. All in all, it is a good book.

Well written! ! ! ! ! OK OK! ! ! ! ! ! !

Good looking, the male protagonist is not stupid and sweet

So far so good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Although there are not many worlds written so far, they are all very interesting! ! ! Keep up the good work and look forward to other worlds in the future

It's beautiful. My favorite is the first world. The author must keep writing.

Although it has to maintain its character, it is not aggrieved, it is very interesting to watch, the writing is good, and the plot is attractive, but it is not enough to watch! ! !

Meow meow meow is very beautiful but I want to see the confession scene

Thank you so much for feeding me. It's so satisfying. Shuang Jie and Shuang Qiang are the only ones with each other. It's hard not to love each other. The rhythm is also very good. It's not rushed or slow. Please don't say stop updating. I beg you.