Card Maker: at the Beginning, My Sister Received the White Silk from Me.

The author's writing looks very comfortable, with a comfortable narrative structure, unhurried and steady progress, including the emotional line and the improvement of combat power. However, I am afraid that the author will collapse when it comes to multiple female protagonists. After reading the last book, I found that the author's writing was too big and could not be taken back, which made the rest of the book look messy, which has a lot to do with the pseudo-infinite flow. This book does not have this problem now, the main line is clear, and although it is cliche, it is easy to use. I'm not asking you too much, but please can you have 1/5 of the update speed of Peak Eagle? This little bit every day is really not enough. If you keep it, you'll be afraid of later modifications and death.

It's quite interesting. I followed it from the previous one. I hope I won't praise it again.

The overall look and feel of the whole book is very good. The main character is vividly portrayed, at least he is well-portrayed. However, the second female lead (possibly) Yunhuang appears too few times, so I won't list it. The female lead is portrayed. I don't know if the author laughed when he wrote the first female lead, or if he really wanted to live with a female lead. It's okay to be a girlfriend on the Internet, but in reality, he acts like an uncle when he asks for help from his brother. I don't comment. Maybe some people really like this.

The author of "The Reincarnation of the Earth", the quality is guaranteed, but maybe he likes to eat red beans () Just 100,000 yuan for the book test, I still need to get this five-star rating Why don't some people say that we still don't recognize each other? Why are there so many coincidences? Coincidence is the work of the Lord of the Stars Why do we need to delay acquaintance... Let's put it this way, from Yuan's perspective, your prison brother is an unlucky guy who became decadent due to special events. Your online brother has a good chat with you. With the help of filters, you feel that he is really the most perfect person in the world. If you recognize each other too early, my brother will give you nothing. If you meet him later, he will only give you a strange card. You may even suspect that your brother knew this braid too early (after all, you don't know that the big adventure was given by a god of fun), and here you will use strange means to... Er, seduce yourself. How high do you think the good impression will be even if it is high? It's better to make the actual relationship between Su and Yuan closer as the author has arranged now. …And besides, it's really interesting, isn't it?

The author is awesome, his ideas are incredible, and his writing is full of charm and profound meaning. As long as you can't think of it, no author can't write it. The comments from netizens are also very interesting. I suggest you check in more. They are all talented people!

The characters are well-developed, the content is lively and interesting, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is really enviable, and the most important thing is that there is nothing toxic about it. It is also a rare good book in Tomato.

The student spirit is so strong, I like it very much. The decadent deadlock is mixed with the courage to strive for the top. The body felt warm. Hope that those who do not change their original intentions can also How should I put it, make a lot of money? Can you always write the stories you like?

It's very humorous, and there's nothing poisonous about it so far. It doesn't feel like the author is writing a novel for the first time. If you can keep writing in this style and level, it will definitely be a good book [Top post][Top post][Top post]

I am Shennong! There is nothing poisonous about this book so far, although it is about ancient Mongolian drummers. But it was exposed very simply. Both parties now know that their online dating partner is the other person, and the sister also knows that the male protagonist knows that she is his online dating partner. At present, the two parties are still having fun, but I don't know whether it is a stock trading article or a harem. If it is a stock trading article, one point will be deducted. The emotional line is also quite delicate, and there is a lot of fun, which is top-notch.

How should I put it, if I post an entry for this book? Single heroine The protagonist is powerful and decisive in killing Delicate psychological description and reasonable plot advancement A mixture of new and old backgrounds and rich and diverse character settings There are strangely straightforward motives and abbreviated images that are hollow and dry. There is no shortage of inspirational insights, concept collisions, wonderful individuals, and playful attitudes. Interspersed with wonderfully abstract blends and slightly inconsistent but fast speeds There are not many romance novels that children have read. I feel that this book is not particularly suitable for children. Especially from chapter 99 to chapter 200, I feel that the portrayal of the heroine is particularly strange? The motivation is strong, the desire is straightforward, and the description is obscure. There will be a feeling of being uncoordinated and unable to keep up. The protagonist is quite handsome, very three-dimensional, at the same time indifferent and rational, passionate and straightforward, abstract and astringent, reliable and committed, and humane.

I'll give it four stars. As a reader of "I Have Proved Immortality", I have quite mixed feelings about that book. On the one hand, I like the interaction between the brother and sister. I also like the card system and the way it is well integrated with the background story. It also combines pretentiousness and combat. It is both interesting and exciting to watch. Snow Mountains and Giant Dragons, Five Turbid Worlds, Demon King Iris, and the last world of cultivating immortals, these chapters can be said to be excellent when taken alone, but when placed in that book, I personally think that the background story of the cards takes up a lot of space, and the card holder fights with the cards. In reality, On the contrary, the progress of the story is in the minority. With such a distribution, even if the stories are excellent and amazing, they will become boring if you read too many of them. Even if you know that these stories are inextricably linked to the protagonists, they are not the current protagonists after all, and you will still subconsciously get tired of them. Looking back at the time when I was watching it, I could finish reading the Five Turbid Evil World chapter completely, I skipped through the Demon King Iris chapter, and I skipped to the end of the World of Immortality chapter halfway through. When I saw the hasty ending of that book, I felt it was a pity that so many interesting stories and interesting characters could no longer appear. On the one hand, I feel that such a work that emphasizes branch plots over main plots and lacks real protagonist creation and plot advancement will not go far. So when I read this book, I was pleasantly surprised because the story of Su Qi and Liu Yuan had a chance to continue. At the same time, I was also a little worried about seeing the same independent story as before, which was smelly and long and lacked a real protagonist. But I am very happy that the story of the two has a new chapter, the usage of the cards is diverse and interesting, and the main line is clearer. The author began to put more words on the two protagonists. The familiar cards appeared again. This time, there was no overpowering the protagonist. The Lord of the Stars became the "backer" of the protagonist. Su Qi and the Adventer battled wits and courage. It's all in good fun. In the recent source construction method competition, although the problem of missing protagonist appeared again, but seeing that the author himself is not satisfied with this paragraph, I believe that the author will write better and better. I will continue to read it, hoping to have the opportunity to make up for the last star in the future. Bull demon, surrender, destroy it

The writing is good, and it can be seen that in order to avoid Chen He, the defense aspect was fully focused. The plot is pretty good, but it just felt so bad towards the end of the writing. . Emmm, it just feels bland Generally speaking, I still recommend [like] and wish Li a score of 9.0 Or above. No, why is the ending so bad😨, can the male protagonist still wake up😭, where is the Lord of the Stars, please save him😡 Happiness +6

The author's thinking is super smooth, with a sense of daily life plus behind-the-scenes, a bit like the inexplicably excited literary youth feeling when watching Dragons, but it doesn't seem too deliberate, and it's super beautiful.

Book title: It's impossible to click on the first impression. I really didn't have to read it and found that it was quite to my liking. Content: The early stage description of the misunderstanding and shame mission is the main line, and the rhythm of the battle is supplemented by the writing is very good. After the cultists came out, something was not right. Firstly, the main plot was pushed too fast. Secondly, the villain's character dropped too much. The following paragraphs are described as light novel romances. It is understandable that writing like this will be fast and easy and will not break the word count. It is undeniable that the pacing aspect is definitely a big problem for the long-term operation of the whole book.

First, the game starts with a classic little poison, but the little poison is not considered poison. It should get better in about chapter 40. Second, the author ate too many red beans. Third, dot, you shouldn't use dot, it's very royal. Fourth, I want to update. The fifth personality is activated. The most vicious person in the early stage was the old man. Maybe the author wanted to draw out a branch line, but the way he handled it seemed that the male protagonist was too self-righteous, and he didn't make it clear later.

Awesome, still the same style as always, today's tomato can be seen here, because I played the deep sequence 20 times in a row and only died on the 9th level. After stacking 6 levels, I only dealt 540,000 damage.

It's good to know how to open a few more systems this time. Although it still doesn't reflect the summoning group fight that the card should have, but it's okay if the subsequent cards don't have summoning types. Anyway, if you don't know how to write, you can avoid writing a little bit and making the latter not up or down. Some, some, no.

It looks good, and the writing style is acceptable for Tomato. I don't think it has any bad points yet. But I want to know if it is single or multiple?

It's so beautiful. I hope the drawings will be curtailed and not too... I hope the book will be finished.

The writing of this book is delicate and sincere, the plot is gripping, and it portrays the complexity of human nature and the entanglement of emotions deeply. The story spans time and geography, with both a shocking turn of fate and a warm and healing spiritual redemption. Each character is vivid and three-dimensional, and their pain and growth are empathetic. The descriptions of friendship, betrayal and forgiveness in the book directly touch the soul, making people unable to calm down for a long time after reading it. The narrative rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, with both breathtaking moments of tension and moments of tenderness that make people cry. There is a profound understanding and compassion for life between the lines. After reading it, it feels like you have experienced a baptism of the soul. The aftertaste is long, and it can be called a touching literary masterpiece.

It's really beautiful. The emotional line is perfectly intertwined with the plot line. The main thing is to describe the emotional line. The plot plays a driving role. The male and female protagonists have strong strength, but they are hidden and I don't know it comprehensively. It will only be triggered in crisis or special circumstances, which makes the article. There is pressure to push the plot forward, and the protagonist has strong strength to ensure a sense of satisfaction. In summary, it should be a love novel mixed with in-depth thinking about people and society.

The author is still working steadily as always, not only in the characterization of the characters, but also in the description of the heroine. Not only that, the control of the text, there is no serious literary youth disease, mainly in the vernacular, and this is used in foreshadowing and some character portrayals. It's just that unlike the previous book, there's no feeling like glass is about to break, at the critical point where there's no need to use a knife. The only flaw is, where is the female supporting role in this novel? Compared to the previous book, the portrayal of human nature is a bit weaker. Is this one the main heroine or the harem?

Compared with the previous chapters, the chapters after arriving in the magic city have declined significantly. The male protagonist's character is more personal (the male protagonist is more selfish as can be seen in the inner monologue and part of the enlightenment to the female protagonist). However, in the arrangement of the entire article, he is also a social status that is more official and needs to bear certain responsibilities. Regardless of whether it is voluntary or not, since accepting this status and And the corresponding privileges, or social convenience, the male protagonist should take part of the responsibility. However, judging from the two adventures in the secret realm, this sense of responsibility is not outstanding. Moreover, it can be seen from the arrangement of some chapters that the author wants to express some bad phenomena. It may be because the literary skills are not deep enough, and the expression of thoughts and feelings is a bit abrupt. These are some points that have a bad impression. Talking about the matter, the description of the lives of the male protagonist and the female protagonist and the description of some details are still very novel. If you do not consider the above-mentioned minor issues, just looking at the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, this is still a novel worth reading.

Actually Yuan, do you know? This book is very interesting. The previous book (The Secret Realm of Cards, Warmth Like Going Home) really attracted me. The story between Su Qi and A Yuan is also very interesting, especially The Evil World of Five Turbidities, and the style of card battles in the following made my eyes shine even more. Although the end of the book was sloppy, I believe you can continue writing it. There are not many good books on Tomato now. Although your book cannot be ranked among the top, it is really eye-catching, so please continue to write more.

After reading it, the content is generally good, but I finally know that one of the reasons why the author has been blocked is that the protagonist depicted has a slight anti-social personality. It may be that the author has it but cannot notice it himself, but as a reader or I can generally understand it clearly after reading it. I hope the author can realize this as soon as possible, and I also want to keep writing this book.

I read more than two hundred and sixty chapters in one go, without reading any other books in between. I personally feel that 4 out of 5 paragraphs, the middle and last paragraphs are not very well written, and the rest are fine and worth watching (but I don't know if it's a single or a double).

The previous book was very good, both in terms of the world structure of the Five Turbid Evil World and the subsequent Lord of the Stars, which left a deep impression on me. (Although I came here for Sister Baisi at first) I feel that this book is very smooth. , It flows like water, without deliberately showing off, emmm, to be honest, I am a little interested in card making and so on, but not much. I pay more attention to the author's creation of characters and grasp of the plot. It would be better if the world view has its own style, but it is difficult to agree with everyone, so can it be completed this time? Don't be blocked. Last time Bai Si added another book to the bookshelf, Destiny, and forgot to add it [crying]

It's just that the title and introduction of the book are a bit ambiguous. Many plots in the book are really deep. Of course, I'm not saying that there is no ambiguity in the book (laughs). There are also some very interesting plots. After all, the Lord of the Stars is a fun-loving person [laughs evilly]

It's very, very beautiful, or this is part of reality, but when you feel discouraged, he will have a plot change of hehehe [smile] [smile]. You have to pay attention, such as around Chapter 62, hehe

IQ is online. Compared with some articles that insist on hiding their identity and pretending to be stupid, it is not too real. It's so amazing that the 'brother and sister' discovered each other's identities and realized that the other person was their online dating partner. Things didn't go too fast. To be honest, I won't be surprised at all when this book is published. I can only say read it early and enjoy it, and read it quickly while Shen Hechongyun is in the mood.