Pirate*****

I like Yamato, but I don't like Kozuki Oden. I hope the author can change Yamato's idea of ​​becoming Oden!

Momonosuke must die! ! ! Multiple heroines? I hope there will be an extra chapter, and I hope it will be close to the original work, and that it can be changed. Don't keep popping up some of the messy things in other One Piece novels, such as the devil tree sealing the devil, Im coming from other worlds, etc... Etc. This is so uncomfortable to watch! Please author🫸🫷[almost crying] I hope it can make up for my regrets, and I also hope this is an invincible article or a semi-invincible one. Anyway, it is the best among the others.

Why not Tiansuo Zhanyue? Mo Qilin matches Zhan Yue Wudi. Please change to another one.

Blacklist Maria, Runti, and the Empress?

The writing is more exciting. I hope to recruit more crew members in the future, instead of recruiting ten people like Luffy. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, I don't know how many times he died, but there were more than 30 people on Roger's ship.

A good book

It looks good, keep up the good work, author

To be honest, I quite like Huang Erjiu's Chosen Worker. He shouldn't be too good at it. According to his Shining Fruit, he can run very fast. If he can't fight, he can run. I also feel that a lot of things are missing and not written. It's intermittent.

Very good. There are fewer and fewer good books. If you stick to it, you will be rewarded.

It's very interesting, but there's a little less written about [Eating Melon] in Wano Country.

It looks pretty good, but I just want to know if it is a harem with multiple heroines? I think this is a very interesting author. I have a small suggestion. After all, the author has a system, so why not make too many achievements?