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Invite more people to come to Akaishi. I can't be the only one who suffers.

It's okay, but how can someone else become an emperor? How can an immortal have the benevolence of a woman? If I were me, I would never have a great emperor by my side. If I can't win, I would kill him first. With the power of a great emperor, any quasi-emperor will have to die. Whoever dares to be promoted to quasi-emperor, I will be the first to destroy him. If a great emperor comes to the world, I will support the weakest emperor to ensure that he will not threaten me. This is human nature. How can you allow a threat to be around you and not deal with it?

Come on! It is recommended to minimize the description of fighting scenes and describe more of the characters' experiences (stories), so that the characters will be more three-dimensional and saturated. The most attractive thing about this book is that you can watch the rise and fall of "Nine Heavens and Ten Earths" from a third perspective. How the protagonist lives in it and how it affects the world is about the character's experience and human disputes. The excessive description of fighting scenes greatly affects the viewing experience and makes the reading very empty (the key plot description is missing). Control the speed at which the protagonist's realm improves. It should be at the top of the world at this stage, otherwise there is a faint trend of collapse. According to the speed at which Destiny is repaired, how is it possible to punish the protagonist in the short term? In fact, after the plot of becoming an emperor appears, the protagonist is already logically invincible. If this continues, his combat power will collapse. Otherwise, either the protagonist will change the map, or other forces will be attracted in the short term (within a million years), so that the protagonist's power can be balanced. But if you do this, it will become the protagonist's growth history, completely deviating from the novel's purpose! In short, more plot, less combat description (hydrology). Five-star support! Come on!

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

To evaluate, the overall writing style of this book is excellent, and the description is very good. There are some problems in the plot, but it can be seen that this is because the author has been slapping himself in the face. For example, he said that the third military path would not be born before the second military path was condensed, and he ran out to wander around before the second military path began to condense. Then he said that the second military path was not condensed and could not be born, but he ran out to wander again just after it was halfway condensed. Then let's talk about the background. The background of the story tends to cover the sky. , The rules are not all types, the realm and longevity are almost all borrowed, and can even be regarded as plagiarism. The story atmosphere is depressing and suspenseful. Although the title is "Invincible", he has never been invincible. He was abused by ordinary supremes at first, then by normal emperors, then by the forbidden land, and finally by the destiny of the universe. The atmosphere is biased towards the desperate and hopeless atmosphere of Cthulhu. Of course, if you don't read the introduction, the title, and the classification, you can still watch it.

Brothers, come and watch, I can't be the only one who feels uncomfortable watching it

Looking forward to the update. It's great. It has the feeling of a big world that partially covers the sky. Most people write that the supporting characters are too weak and the protagonist is too prominent. It's like watching a person constantly caring about obscenity. It doesn't feel like reading a story.

I can't eat this shit alone

/I recommend the later empress. Continue to live in reverse one life after another. And he develops feelings for the protagonist. Then the protagonist doesn't want anyone to know the secret of his immortality. Then disappear, and then continue to practice, another avenue. Cover up your own scent.

No, the writing is quite good, why was it removed from the shelves [crying][crying]

Don't be fooled. Regardless of the content, this book is very well written. The content is rigorous and logical. The protagonist has a flawless character, an online IQ, a solid Daoist heart, an invincible appearance and has never failed, and is not moved by beauty. He lives forever and quietly observes the changes of the times. He is known as the Sky Poison Emperor! Strongly recommended [send heart][send heart][send heart]

@Without ice First of all, the rating is low It's rare to find an updated novel that I can insist on reading. I can only say that the biggest difference between this longevity novel and other longevity novels is that it starts with a high level, unlike most immortality novels that start from a weak point. Although it is uncomfortable not to write a heroine, the emotional plot after writing the heroine is too difficult for longevity novels to write, so the lack of a heroine is a good point. There will not be too much plot, although I like it very much. Keep writing, keep updating, don't force me to beg you [angry][angry][angry][angry] (Also, what does it mean that the character I gave him died in half a chapter, author!!!!!!!! [Angry][angry][angry][angry][angry])

That's OK. Actually, I want to ask, why do I want to look at my previous comments and when I click on that comment, it will prompt that this book has been removed from the shelves? How strange!

In the end, they begged not to have children, the author Can we finally have another child? Please

This is good, but can the Invincible stream be renamed the Joker🤡 stream?

The world view is not bad. I thought it would be comfortable to read more chapters such as "Yi Yang", but today I found out that it is the next one [shocked]

Overall, this book is a continuation of Master Chen Dong's Zhetian worldview and practice system. As for the content, it has changed the soup but not the medicine. It's actually quite good.

This book is very good. It has the style of Chen Dong. Come on, the author. The combat power is also very reasonable. Unlike some novels, it starts with the emperor. After a few chapters, the combat power crushes the real immortal. It all depends on the system to sign in. It is invincible inexplicably. Don't be discouraged, author. Your writing is really good. If you keep at it, you can achieve a score of 9.

It's still OK, but it's as short as a child's

[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] I came to visit the grave. It's been a long time since you unblocked me.

Yes, yes, it would be better if you could add it to my Dark Feather Supreme [laughing] [laughing] You know [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

The storyline of this book is pretty good! The character of Pig's Foot is well portrayed and the background is huge! However, there is relatively little description of emotions! Living forever is tiring! Boring!

So far, it looks good, but too few people have watched it. I don't know if the author can stick to it.

Another good-looking book, The Invincible Emperor

It looks good, but I don't know why it was taken off the shelves.

Except for one Changsheng Liu, I didn't notice any of the others [face covering] [face covering]

Very nice, but it's no longer available

When the world is upgraded, the rules are not enough, and some restrictions are placed on the creatures in the world. After death, the origin of life returns to heaven and earth, and laws replenish heaven and earth. The world slowly accumulates foundations and leaps into the world. [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

My sensory experience is very good. The author still needs to work hard, so five stars are for encouragement. If it's delayed, don't blame me for being ruthless.

Grain 1. The writing is considered a good longevity novel, and the plot advancement can be slow or fast. However, there are currently few chapters and not much plot advancement content. 2. Suitable for stocking up on books, but may look average if you are catching up on updates.