The Magical Girl World of Half Sugar Boy

Everyone enjoys watching it. If there are more and more comments, my motivation will become stronger and stronger. [Smile] Please forgive me if you feel uncomfortable watching it. This is my first official attempt at doujins, so I guess there will be a lot of shortcomings. [Cover face] The book is expected to have about 200 chapters, and I will work hard to write it! [Angry] If you have any suggestions or opinions, you can leave a message in the book circle, I will read it [I learned it]

The main character is very upright. I haven't seen such an upright protagonist in a long time [I'm about to cry]. I remember that the first man who started a harem in the Lily series was called Shirou Emiya. Congratulations to Seima for becoming the second one [laughing]

I can only say that it is average. After all, the protagonist is too sweet. He is a half-sugar boy. I dare say that there is absolutely no sugarier character than this one [laughter]

Nice looking, this is really nice looking, especially the mold. Gabe's setting is even more novel My opinion, the plot is pretty good, but why is this blocked? I'm so strong

It's good-looking, but there are too few people who admire the devil, and even fewer of them are male protagonists who are good-looking.

Let me comment, the subject matter is very interesting, a combination of magical girls and Kamen Riders, the protagonist's personality is also very Kamen Rider, and the heroines don't have any poisonous points. But there are still problems. First of all, there are some inexplicable accusations, such as being scolded after rescuing everyone in the video game store, or the accusations when he was a kindergarten teacher, and the deleted part, which are all poisonous points. I guess the author may want to express that the world is not so beautiful, but this kind of plot requires readers to explain it reluctantly. Doesn't the author feel that he is a bit literary? The second issue is about the protagonist, which is a little OOC, such as the Tibetan speaking part. There are other viewers who also expressed the same views. Finally, there is the problem of typos and inappropriate words. Other viewers have also raised them, and they are the most common problems. I still hope that this book will get better and better. Since Gabu's continuous decline in the second half, this fan's sour Gabu is more like

It's good to read. This is the book you can read in my Kamen Rider. I don't ask you for any chivalry, as long as it doesn't ruin it. There are quite a lot of books in this book, but can the author use your imagination?

Although it is a mature fake, the characters are not OOC at all. I support [like][like][like][like][like]

A very nice and interesting novel. Although sometimes I am shocked by the author's amazing wisdom, it is still very good. If I give it a score, it would be 85 points. Firstly, the plot in the early stage is very random and hard to understand. Secondly, the forced smiles all the time affect the viewing experience. Thirdly, the guest appearance is not Brother Xiao Ming but a person I don't know at all (I haven't watched Brother Chad). So It's bad that I was confused, but it's okay that Brother Xiao Ming appeared in the end. Also, I like the fact that the protagonist uses Kuuga's power. After all, I like Kuuga [Sending Hearts] very much. I think the growth of the protagonist or Inoue Seima is also very interesting. He grows from a child who doesn't understand anything to a Kamen Rider in his own right.

A very good book that makes my collection spin. My love comes from Stomark. The book is very beautiful. The emotions, psychology and details of each person are described very well. Thank you to the author for bringing such a good book.

Great, this is what I want to read. Previous novels that focused on tokusatsu and looked forward to pure magical girls were basically not good to read. Finally a very good looking one. I have a bold idea. After the author finishes writing this novel, can he write a novel? Travel through the magical girl world and get the Ultraman Earth Defense Force system at the beginning. As the main defense team at the beginning, we don't need magical girls to protect the earth.

Advantages: The plot is restored, not overly OOC, the protagonist is well portrayed, the plot is interesting, and the author is relatively active Disadvantages: too close relationship with multiple women, obviously she is single Inappropriate points: Is it a Hyakubo to write a male protagonist in a yuri manga? I don't think anyone has said it. After all, Tomato Chrono Kaguya's story has been criticized, but the relationship between the commander-in-chief and the villain in The Demon is quite close, but it seems that the commander-in-chief has no romantic relationship except Leopard. After all, the original work is a solid-color lily, so strictly speaking, it is not a Hyakubo. Summary: The novel is good-looking and the characterization is very good [like] I've seen a lot of high-opening and low-traveling books, but I've seen a lot of flat-opening and high-traveling books. I thought I'd give up reading it, but after reading it, I couldn't stop [face covering] The later stage of 666 was a bit too abusive, Sheng Zhen was too miserable [face covering] The last volume currently seems to be an extreme fox trend, with a high Kai Shen ending up dead. It touches on sensitive topics such as Shura Field. The protagonist clearly has a commander-in-chief and yet he still doesn't draw clear boundaries with others, which can clearly dispel their fantasies.

The style is good, but stop being ambiguous, I want to watch Pure Maple Sugar [laughs]

The plot structure is clear, there are laughs, and the protagonist's outlook is absolutely positive! Come on, author!

A very good fan novel about Kamen Rider Gabu and his dream of becoming a magical girl. The protagonist's execution of justice in the early stage, leisure and entertainment in the middle stage, and directly igniting the spirit of chivalry in the later stage are much better than a certain person. The harem is all good, no brainlessness or dependence. The heroine really likes the hero out of pure love. Come on, young man, we are optimistic about you! (I'm sorry, remember to give me a title, please)

Nice! It's a slow emotional drama, but the senses are also good. It's just that the protagonist is now the cake king. When can we unlock the Blizzard Ice Cream and the Dominator Jiabu?

I haven't seen Gabu, and I heard that the reputation is not very good, but I can still read it with gusto. The cover is very detailed, the corresponding colors of the protagonist group and the food they give to Shengzhen. This kind of unlocking new forms because of partners is really tokusatsu flavor. Finally, I really like Xunzi. I hope to see Xunzi's if in the future. I wish the author better and better ❤️

It's quite good. I just hope that if the author can make cameos from other Kamen Riders or tokusatsu characters, it doesn't matter if he can't. After all, this work looks pretty good so far😊

Although it has some shortcomings, it does not prevent it from being a good book. You can also see how much I like knights and demons. It's really a pity to stop updating, but I also hope that I can live a better life if I stick to it. If I win the Easter match one day, I believe book friends will definitely come back to read it as soon as possible. (And damn Naomi Takebe by the way) I won the resurrection match the day after I posted it. For some reason, I seemed like a clown in this period. However, I am still very happy to see that I can start writing again, and I hope it won't be too much of a psychological burden.

Very good novel, love comes from Xin Mutian's trip (fish) and fight (crocodile)

I love watching it. It has both the madness of admiration for demons and the enthusiasm of special photography.

It looks good, and most of the chapters are quite interesting, especially the chapter where Rejed guest-starred in the middle to portray Shengzhen. This is the Kamen Rider I want to see! ! ! It is definitely true, but the author himself knows it. To be honest, I always feel like I am interacting with the author when I read it. Also, the author takes a good rest and recuperates his body. When he has an idea, he will start a shocking work. If he doesn't have an idea, he will just write a small chapter. Just like how he portrayed Shengzhen, he can be a little selfish.

It's so good-looking. I highly recommend it. Although there are a lot of interactions with other female characters in the article, the writing is still very, very good. The writing style is really very good. It's very good-looking. I highly recommend it. I originally wanted to save a few more chapters for fun, but in the end I couldn't help but read it\(//∇//)\

The plot and arrangement are very good, but I beg the author to learn how to use punctuation marks. Listening to the book is really painful. Some passages really feel like I can't breathe. Also, the endearments in Japanese anime are really weird to read in Chinese.

Children, after staying up late to catch up, I suddenly remembered that I have to take a test tomorrow [crying] It's really great. If you read this book review, please read it quickly.

It's beautiful, the author is very lively and delicate

One of the best books in this circle. It's pure sweetness at the front and a little bit sharp at the back. Well, overall it's good. It would be better if the update were faster.

It's super, super good [top post], one of the few with the highest quality among the demon fanfics [top post] I can't say anything else, I'm so lucky to have discovered this book! Praise the disrespectful! [Cry]

I like this book very much. I feel that both the plot and the characters are well designed, and some of the funny clips are very timely. Even among all the Kamen Rider fanfics I have read, it is quite good! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The perfect combination of good-looking Gabe and magical girl