Uma Musume: Opening the Door to the World

Well, there are many problems. First of all, the pace is too fast. It is obviously a daily story. Because the pace is too fast, the previous text does not follow the following text, giving people an uncomfortable sense of separation (many places are inexplicable). Also, because the daily life is too fast, the character creation is insufficient. The training content is too little, which cannot highlight the growth of the protagonist group (the male protagonist does not feel like a trainer). In summary, although it is a novice among novices, there are no big problems in the story content. In short, the future is promising, so I give it a five-star encouragement. 🍉

Well, if I have to say it myself, this book is actually quite poor. The character creation is not very successful and the pace is too fast. But I think the daily stories I write are quite interesting. Interested readers are welcome to read them. At least I didn't write the characters in an OOC way, right? Anyway, this is my debut novel. For myself, I have a clear conscience and I have tried my best. If you can't accept the book I wrote, you can also write out all my shortcomings and give me a longer memory. Thank you, fellow readers 😘😘😘

Well, regarding the cp, I actually hope it's between Ace and Qianming 🍉, but it still depends on the author, or if there is no cp, I'll write it in the extra chapter Actually, I don't think the trainer is of much use in this article. The record is based on reality, right? But the trainer is just a costume, so is it really of any use? I would say that if this is the case, it would be better not to add trainers () but it is already very difficult to change now.

The future is promising, worth a look