I Was Targeted by the Sickly Master, but I Couldn't Escape

Because this is the first time for the author to try to write online articles, some articles may not be formatted properly and may look a bit verbose. I will revise them as soon as I find them. I also ask for your understanding [crying]. Of course, the author still doesn't like ntr, so he won't write this. Don't worry, friends [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Single heroine, don't ask, don't ask [crying] Besides, I will continue to do more as long as I'm here [smile], don't worry about the eunuchs.

After reading it, give the author some suggestions. The yandere novel is a little sadistic for pleasure, but a big sadist is harmful to the body. And I generally like to watch the interaction between the male and female protagonists. Try to have as few male protagonists as possible with other women just to make the female protagonist angry, or with the female protagonist acting like this. This is all poisonous. A yandere novel with a single heroine and pure love is enough. The plot can be less, but the sweet interactions can be written more. Looking at it, there are many places to torture, including solving the misunderstanding and it will take a while. What you wrote is not abusive, there is no need to be so abusive.

After reading it, the summary is pretty good, but the early part was confusing, and it was only revealed in the second volume that everyone has their own ending. I think this is good, but I think that Youyue's life has been too bitter. I thought she would have a happy and perfect ending, but I didn't expect that she would be the one who was unhappy in the end. Finally, I think the writing could be a little better: at the end, the protagonist's conversation with Shopkeeper Jiang Fengli could be supplemented, so that Shopkeeper Jiang's ending would be more satisfying.

Blind guess, Mu Zhao was warmed by the male protagonist when he was a child, and later the male protagonist died. After Mu Zhao was so awesome, he found the male protagonist who was reincarnated after death, and the body in the ice coffin was the male protagonist's previous life [take a closer look] It's almost over｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡

The writing is very good and very appetizing. It is rare in Tomato. I hope that the male protagonist will not take the old route of becoming a black man in the later period. Good luck, author [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The writing in the early stage was not very good, it was a bit confusing, and some parts were not coherent, but the later stage was written well. The storyline and some settings were clearly explained, and some supporting characters also had complete endings. Overall, it's worth a read. The author is very talented and has a promising future. I look forward to new works.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. You can look forward to it. I hope the author will get better and better (I personally think it's a single female protagonist [eating melon]). Overall worth seeing

The writing is very good, but can there be only one female protagonist? The author [crying]

Overall, the writing was pretty good, but I felt that the characters' reactions were a bit stiff, and the emotions in some scenes didn't feel reasonable. How should I put it, it didn't feel real, but it's worth encouraging!

I hope it will be well written. I like it very much. I will keep it for now.

Very well written

I can't understand it a bit at the beginning, but the writing is really good at the end

It's beautiful, but you might see it in a foggy way.

I finished reading it in one day [almost crying] All I can say is that I found the treasure. The writing is very good. It's a pity that the author has not published a new book

It seemed like I wanted to write about mutual torture, but it felt like dessert-level mutual torture. The misunderstanding was resolved quickly. Ye Yu feels like the protagonist.

This is the best romance novel I have ever read. Hope single heroine

The writing is vigorous, the diction is elegant, the emotions are sincere, the story has a complete logical structure, echoes from top to bottom, and the characters are three-dimensional. It is truly a masterpiece.

Hope Mouse Tail Juice [smile] Keep up the good work. [Smile]

There is a reason why there are so few people to suppress the fighting power [laughing] It's boring. Give it up. Give it up.

Not bad, very nice.

Very good very good

Very good, very good, come on

It's really good. Come on, author.

Full marks, so beautiful

So pretty, I like it😃😃 It's okay, just average.

It's so exciting😫It's not a slight illness, you have jade!

Not bad, I can write it

Everyone has a happy ending. Just for this reason, it must be 5 stars.

It's a pity. It can be seen that the effort in writing is still in vain. The Tao is impermanent but there is permanence.

Not bad, come on I'm sick, please give me more [Blow a kiss]