Her Tenderness Is Sugar Coating, and the Filling Is Possession!

It feels pretty good so far. There is a show, but there is a catch in the early stage, that is, Su Muyao always thought that the protagonist was poor, and the various behaviors of the protagonist later did not match the word "poor", which seemed very abrupt. My suggestion is that the protagonist should be changed to someone who is not very poor.

I'm sorry for my poor language organization skills. I think every character in the book has its own personality. Because the author is new to writing, it can be seen that the writing style is very green. This is normal. I would like to suggest that the author should be detailed and appropriate when writing. Every good work is polished with care. The good thing about this author is that he has his own understanding of the emotions between people. It's great to be able to persevere in the early stage of writing. Just try your best and make progress during the period. A single writing method is not enough. If you feel that you have no motivation to write, you can take a rest. There is no need to be too anxious. When the inspiration for writing is exhausted, you can combine things in life, etc., And I won't describe it here. Don't delay your studies because of writing novels. Don't regard writing novels as a task. Remember that it is just a way of leisure and entertainment. We still have our own lives, so we must "diet on information." The above is my evaluation of this book. I hope everyone will be happy every day.

Personally, I think it's okay, but it's a pity that the author has to stop updating.

It's too slow for girls to move to dormitories, and it's not bad except for the men's bathroom and roommates.

Both heroines are very kawaii. I like them both. The author will update a few novels that are almost the same as this one. I like them so much~

Beautiful, very sweet, I feel like I am fainting from the deep river

It's so sweet. Let me look at you.

A very nice book

This book should not only have 7.3

Although the ending is a bit sloppy, we still have to follow the convention Ahem~ Finished spreading flowers. Thank you for accompanying me~

Later, he showed me tears falling down directly.

It's very beautiful [Admiration] [Admiration] I like it very much [Like] [Like] [Like]

Good luck to the author

Very nice but a little lacking

It's really noble

Overall it's ok, quite sweet.

Good looking, good luck to the author

Very nice this book

Really very beautiful

Good, good, good

Come on, author, take a look

Personally I think it looks good

The writing is very good and the whole process is non-toxic.

It's okay. People in our class, people in our class, I

It's okay, author, cheers.

As the author's first book and as an attempt, it's already very good. Come on.

Super super super super super super sweet, I can't stand it

Very nice, don't care about the rating

This book is very good, the emotions are on point, and each character has a vivid image. It is a good work.

Please come on, author.