Journey to the West Is on the Run from Bai Yueguang, and the Rebellious Brothers Are Vying for His Favor.

It's super interesting, but I suggest the author add more extra stories about how the three villains and the heroine got along, because the emotional lines of the protagonists seem a bit abrupt at present, and the characters are relatively flat. Some events may be needed to highlight the unique personality charm of each of them, and how they regard each other as treasures, and then the relationship is particularly good.

It's nice to look at. What's the role of this little junior sister in the book? [Thinking] She just seems so casual. [Thinking]

Good-looking, super, invincible, explosive, good-looking [crying][crying][crying][crying] It's the group's sweetheart, but why is it that my great sage is be! ! ! ! (Although be is more reasonable) But my heart aches! ! ! Especially when I see Tang Seng protecting Miao Ci from behind, I really want to cry. It's like a parent protecting his own child [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Give it five stars, but front row mine. 1. From the beginning to the end, the heroine is not stronger, no, really not, all kinds of monsters and fairies bullying her are just like playing games. 2. In the first 30 chapters, the heroine is miserable. She travels to another world, has no relatives, and is helpless. After the 30th chapter, the heroine becomes miserable non-stop. 3. The theme is light-hearted. Although it feels like the villain has been setting up a trap for a long time, it is actually solved very easily and it feels hasty. 4. Wukong is slightly OOC, and the author is very partial to Yang Jian. It is also Yang Jian who can see obvious emotional development with the heroine in the article. On the plus side, the heroine is really cute, has a positive outlook on life, and has a sense of compassion. On the journey to the west, she is relatively happy. The cp relationship with the three people is not that strong, but it is okay, and the emotional line is very delicate.

If you want to see it, you can refer to my review. This one doesn't have anything that I don't like about it. I have read six or seven Tomato novels related to Journey to the West. The plot of this novel is very measured and the characters are very distinct, especially Niu Shengying. His character is very similar to a character in a novel written by my friend, with a similarity of at least 95%. Although I feel that many characters in novels have such a character, I still like characters who are silly, always off the mark, but very loyal at critical moments, and have a funny talent. The portrayals of Sun Xingzhe, Yang Jian and Nezha are pretty good, but the characters in the extras seem to have become more mature, a bit different from their original characters. Of course, I just watched Yang Jian's extras. I think the Tang Monk, Sun Wukong and Nezha in it are too gentle. Except for the sweetness of Yang Jian and A Ci, they seem a bit bland. The whole plot (excluding extras) is quite fast-paced, and I feel like it ended without watching much. However, I watched it for at least four hours, and I enjoyed it. I wrote a rough plot of the story, including some sweet interactions between the heroine and the three rebels [I don't think it was a lot, but I just finished it without realizing it]. The Tang Monk in it was a bit annoying at first, but later he became more honest [laughter]

It's a very good book. The content is more everyday and warm, and the content is relatively coherent. The heroine is not a strong female type, but she is very positive and can think the best of the situation no matter how difficult the situation is. However, the author can write in the introduction or at the beginning that the heroine is not very strong. Although I can accept it, I saw that there are still many people asking in the comment area, and there are also many likes. Also, I am looking forward to the extra chapter, and will write more (*＾3＾)/~☆

Not bad, this is my first time watching this genre, there are good and bad 1: Demining in the early stage, the heroine is weak and frustrated in the first 35 chapters (the heroine is quite weak in this book, but becomes a little stronger in the later period) 2: The characters are full-bodied and 97% similar to the original characters. The details are well handled, and the post-production process is quite sweet.

It looks good, I give it full marks! The development of the plot is very natural. If scripture seeking is regarded as a job and the identity of a scripture seeker is regarded as a profession, the three rebels in the first quarter are all trying their best to fish. If beating monsters is regarded as performance, these three are all involved in [cover face][cover face][cover face] The whole story is very interesting. Li Miaoci's kind of trying to live as much as possible. If you can't survive, you will be defeated. If you can't win, you will die. Sliding and kneeling to save lives and lying flat. It is really interesting to quickly pass the Westward Journey with one life (doubtful). Extras account for about 30%, which are emotional lines. They are beautiful, natural, and a little sour. I feel sorry for the three traitors, but it also feels very healing.

It's really good-looking. It's not a mindless black god or Buddha. In this book, the three reverse bones, including Tang Monk, can see the true divinity. God loves the common people, and immortals bless the people. He really has the transparency brought by long years. Tang Seng's early image was not pleasing, but he is really firm and kind and is not hypocritical.

So pretty! ! It's just not over yet! I finished reading it in one go! ! Hope it can be all! ! Get them all! So sweet [crying]

How come no one has watched such an interesting Journey to the West? Hahaha, the plot is very comfortable to watch. The one I watched before was either the Great Sage Mengnu or Nezha Mengnu. It doesn't look like a god anymore. This Nezha is very Nezha, the Great Sage is also a great sage, and Tang Monk is also very Tang Monk. Hahaha, there is no sword at the moment. It's an interesting story. It should be a brother-sister relationship at the moment. [Exploration] The relationship between brothers and sisters is very smooth, and it shouldn't develop into love, right?

It's very interesting. The extra love line is quite sweet, but I'm a little bit sorry about the Great Sage. It's true as said, God has no afterlife. He is saying: "We, there is no afterlife." If there is a character I like the most, it is probably the Great Sage. He is very similar to a hero. I have never imagined his emotional line. After all, I am very happy to see him alive again in this form.

Time to give 5 stars. The heroine here is really smart, smart, and has a mouth. If there are any misunderstandings, tell them immediately. Anyway, I really like this heroine. Don't abandon it halfway through because the heroine is weak. Being weak also has its advantages, and I like it very much anyway.

I have never seen an article with this theme before. It suits my taste very well. It's so beautiful. I hope you'll update more (ง •̀_•́)ง! ! !

It's good-looking and well worth reading. After the romance chapter, there is also a modern reunion chapter (from the author's own words), so don't regret it, and there is obviously foreshadowing in the ending of the deserved world [shy]

It's beautiful and unforgettable. I've reread it several times. I particularly like the author's writing style. It's very funny and also gives a sense of peace in the mountains and rivers and the tranquility of the years. The characters of the heroine and the rebels are brought to life, and Tang Monk's later period is also very good. Good review [heartfelt]! ! ! It's just that there are too few chapters and I can't read enough [crying]

This book is really in line with my taste, and the images of these senior brothers and each character written by the author are really good, but I always feel that the ending is not very happy. I have been chasing this book. In fact, I could have written a book review immediately when it was finished, but I felt a little reluctant to let go of their ending, so I have postponed it until now, and there are still images of the first senior brother, second senior brother, and third senior brother! I feel the shape is very good [crying]

This is the first Journey to the West fanfic I have read. Not only did the setting really shock me, the plot is also very interesting, and the author's writing style is also very good. There are many plots from Journey to the West in this book, and the author has made them very interesting and reasonable, making people want to read on. Personally, I like the senior brother Sun Wukong the most. I have liked it since I was a child. However, the author made the relationship between our heroine baby and the great sage so great that I wanted to cry. I think it is more about family affection. Our second senior brother Yang Jian was also very kind to our heroine's baby from the beginning. He was very gentle and caring from the beginning. He has been very good to our heroine's baby ever since. In the chapter, Yang Jian also told the heroine to stay away from him while asking for forgiveness in secret. Not only was he honest with his words, but he also pestered the heroine to take care of her when she was hurt. Who knows the contrast! The interaction with our third senior brother Nezha is also very sweet. In the Nezha chapter, Nezha is very close to our heroine's baby even though he doesn't know her yet. The heroine is injured and needs to replenish her spiritual energy. Nezha takes the initiative to cut meat and make lotus roots for the heroine to drink when she is boiling medicine. He is arrogant but very special to our heroine's baby. This pair of CP also has a strong feeling. Jin Chanzi is also very cute as a master, and he will protect our heroine's baby and not bear her getting hurt. Niu Shengying can be regarded as the comic actor in this book, but when he grows up, Niu Shengying is also quite handsome. Everyone is a cute baby. At the end of each article, I have the urge to cry. The content is obviously very interesting and sweet. It feels like I have also experienced a journey to the West. I have deep emotions and I can't bear to leave you all. I wish the author can write more wonderful articles, they are really good-looking! Author, I will always follow you!

It's amazing, so beautiful. It's rare to see such a calm and relaxing novel. Personally, I think that except for Monk Tang's character design, the restoration level is about 90%, and the rest of the characters are almost 98%, which is very good. The fanfic has a fly in the ointment. The female protagonist is weak, but that's normal. After all, everyone else has been practicing for hundreds of thousands of years, but he has only been practicing for ten years. Then there is the female protagonist who is too kind and unsuspecting. But because of this, the story develops like this. What's more, the author's writing style is really excellent. Logically speaking, I should have had some objections, but the author's writing style was so perfect that my objections disappeared.

Ah, it's so beautiful. Why is the rating so low? I think it's at least nine points. In the early stage of Journey to the West, the four senior brothers had different thoughts. It was funny and interesting. They gradually understood and got to know each other. In the later stage, the relationship between the heroine and Erlang Shen was ambiguous. Erlang Shen used his beauty to deliberately seduce and seduce. It's so beautiful [laughing] I highly recommend you guys to watch it. It's so cute [laughs]

This book really touched my heart. The language is very vivid and interesting. There are really many descriptions of appearance in it. It makes people think of Yang Jian endlessly and Nezha's appearance. I am so handsome that I am elated. Overall, this book gave me a special feeling that nothing else can give me. [Adoration][Admiration] Nezha is so handsome. I hope to open another book [shy][shy]

So pretty! Please, please, can you please give me more updates? I'm scratching my head and scratching my head every day [crying]

Come on, come on, the baby is cute. If you want to watch Journey to the West and travel through time, you must watch this! ! ! ! There is no Xipi in the text, but! ! ! You know how annoying that little ambiguity is! ! There are so many extras~ Everyone has their own extras, not only that, but also Shura Field! The heroine's baby Zundu is so cute. At first, she was carrying Sun Wukong, but Nezha and Aci were really annoying. The cute heroine and cool Nezha~ But! ! ! Sun Wukong clearly knows that he is ruthless, but after tens of millions of years, he passed the place where he and the heroine Nezha walked west. The heroine has passed away, and Wukong still thinks of that figure. Whenever he hears about love, the first thing he thinks of is A Ci. This kind of respect is very good! ! ! There is also Yang Jianha, which is also delicious, but I prefer the Yang Jian in the main text. The extra one is not available in Get, so I won't comment here~ Baby is cute, all cute babies who like Journey to the West must go and check it out! ! ! ! No loss in investing! ! !

Super super super super super super super good looking! [Laughs] My CP is too good, not enough to watch, not enough to watch at all. Author, please update quickly. When you are tired, you will write two articles. When you are free, you will write two more articles. No one can make us suffer when we suffer [laughs]

Who knows that when it comes to writing a book review, I can't think of anything, my mind goes blank, I don't care, I just write something casually. I feel that Miao Ci, Yang Jian and Nezha are all very easy to compete with, but Monkey Brother is a bit unsatisfactory. Be is also good, just to exercise the heart. I really like Niu Shengying and Tang Seng in this book. Niu Shengying went to Lingshan with Miao Ci and the others. He did his best on the road and was quite professional. Tang Seng in this book became wise later. It's not bad. Tang Seng in the original book, well, his brain is lacking. It's a bit like Madonna, and I almost forgot about our protagonist Miaici. Miaoci's character and character portrayal are still very good. Although she is often captured together with Tang Seng and her strength is still a bit weak, it does not affect my liking for her as a character. I really like this book.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ! ! ! So pretty! I was shocked to death. The article about Senior Brother made me cry to death. It was actually be! Wow wow wow, but I still look forward to the extra episodes that will drop from time to time. Thank you so much for making such delicious meals for us! (*￣3￣)╭♡

It's super good. I finished reading it in one day. It's a bit sweet, but the quality of the article is very good. The heroine Bai Yueguang, and the great sage, Yang Jian, and Nezha all have extra love stories. It's a derivative of Journey to the West.

I go, it's such a masterpiece. I've never watched Journey to the West before, and I'm not interested in it, but I really feel like I can't compete with her. She's so pretty, and she makes me a little drunk, and I can't get out [I'm about to cry]

Not bad, the subject matter is quite novel, the plot is pretty good so far, a bit interesting... Hehe Come on big

It's good to watch. The plot line at the beginning is generally good to watch, and the solo line at the end is really good to watch. It's a pity that Monkey Brother's is too short. It starts with being kidnapped. It would have been great if it was longer and more detailed.