After transmigrating to the Dragon Ball world, where powerful warriors abound and danger lurks everywhere, Belias was shocked to discover that he had become a little Saiyan on Planet Vegeta with a mere 30 points of battle power.
To make matters worse, the planet lay beneath the terrifying shadow of Frieza, and the countdown to its destruction had already begun. Only twelve years remained. He had no System to turn the tide at a crucial moment, nor a miraculous golden finger to fall from the sky. From the start, his situation was so ordinary it was nearly hopeless.
As the days went by, Belias was delighted to discover that his battle power was increasing far faster than anyone else’s.
At last, he found a sliver of hope amid the cracks of fate. With extraordinary courage and intelligence, he escaped Frieza’s brutal control and raced toward the unknown depths of the universe.
He thought he might finally find some peace, but fate seemed to take particular pleasure in tormenting him. He had barely escaped Frieza’s ever-present threat of death when an even greater crisis may have begun lurking ahead.
Could he really be this unlucky? He had only just escaped the tiger’s jaws, and now he might run straight into the dreaded phantom demon Hirudegarn, whose very name struck terror into all who heard it. This evil monster of legend possessed enough power to make the entire world tremble.
In this cruel universe, where the law of the jungle was taken to its extreme, Belias was blessed with exceptional talent, but never underestimated the power of hard work.
Could he crush the all-conquering Frieza family, defeat the evil phantom demon, and make his name resound across the universe?
He had already embarked on this road of no return, one that would rewrite his fate. Let us witness his fiery adventure together, and the great journey of an ordinary Saiyan who forged a legend.
(Upper and lower) Five-star purple-, 9 items B Sense of substitution B, attraction B, plug-in C, setting B, writing style B, imagination B, rhythm B, main line B, character design B, logic B Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: There are no loopholes, and they are not very outstanding. #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. #The overall rating increases, and there will be no negative comments in the comments. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria•11th Edition (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Specially recommended S level (+4 points) 2. Recommended Grade A (+2 points) 3. Acceptable Level B (+1 point) 4. No points deducted, Grade C (0 points) 5. Level D is not recommended (-1 point) 6. Personally unacceptable level E (-3 points) 2. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang•Online articles that I personally can't find fault with Standard: No B rating, attractiveness S 1. Five-star red+: 5 items S, 5 items A 2. Five-star red: 2 items S, 8 items A 3. Five-star red-: 10 items A (2) Excellent Internet articles that I personally feel most people like Criteria: Rare and fine book, no C-grade rating, appeal A 1. Five-star Orange+: Total score is 18 or above, and 8 items are A or above 2. Five-star orange: and the total score is level 16 or above 3. Five-star orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles Standard: common high-quality books, no D-level evaluation, attractiveness B 1. Five-star Purple+: Level 14 or above, and 4 A or above 2. Five-star purple: Level 10 or above 3. Five-star purple-: 8 items B (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard Standard: Personal recommendation, no E-rating, attractiveness C 1. Five-star blue+: total score is 6 or above, and 6 items are B or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 3. Five-star green: 4 items B (5) Medium •Standard online articles that I personally like Standard: no poisonous spots, no bright spots, attractiveness C 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above, and no E-level evaluation 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 or above 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) The next one: Standard online articles that I don't like 1. Samsung White+: Level 0, and no E-level evaluation 2. Samsung white: -1 level 3. Samsung White-:-Level 2 (7) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Two-star white+: level -3 2. Two-star white: -Level 4 (8) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Two-star gray+: -5 levels 2. Two-star gray: -level 6 3. Two-star gray-:-Level 7 (9) There is a lot of room for improvement 1. One star +: level -8 2. One star: -Level 9 (10) Inferior·Silent 1. Sporadic: -Level 10 (11) Xiaxia·Silent
When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.
I feel like something is wrong when I see the backend. Isn't it because I want to open a harem? In Longzhu, when I open a harem, I want to pounce.
Finally, there is a Dragon Ball novel that doesn't follow the original novel, has The Holy Mother, and doesn't have Golden Finger.
Not bad, worth a look👍
The author writes well, keep up the good work
Finally, I once again read a Dragon Ball novel that doesn't follow the plot.
It's very well written, author, come on, keep writing, I will keep reading 👍👍👍