The Adventures of Luoluo: I Am the General of the Moon Temple!

(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 13 Sense of substitution A, attraction B, plug-in B, setting B, writing A, imagination A, rhythm B, main line B, character B, logic B Extra points: none Personal feelings: no system + original characters + reasonable plot, hurry up and get to the main line, it is a bit delayed. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 10 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 10 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E After the plot of Tiger King and Tyrannosaurus ended, it started to get a little boring. If new variables are not introduced, my overall feeling is that it will continue to decline.

I have a question. Where is Luoluo? Isn't it gone? They've all gone to Time City. Why hasn't Luoluo come out yet? [Face covering]

I was thinking, if we create a motorcycle warrior based on the J-20, how strong would he be? After all, the J-20's numerical value is already very high.

There are not many good Luoluo fanfics on the market. Are there any other good ones besides this one? Please recommend.

The writing is quite good, but there are a lot of magical changes. According to the plot, Lolo should be out, but the result has not been out yet. The combat power level has not been written. The reason for not writing it should be that you can write the plot and other people's combat power casually, and inflate others a few levels. It all depends on the protagonist's own feeling. When the Golden Iron Beast first attacked the City of Time, it was level 8, and the Thunderbolt was level 2. Then it strengthened a few levels, making the Golden Iron Beast at least level 10 and above, and the Thunderbolt to be close to level 10. Currently in Chapter 68, Boundless Sea is definitely at level 19. The protagonist's combat power level should be around level 17 or 18, at least level 16 or above.

Keep up the good work, there are no big surprises at the moment. The protagonist is brave and resourceful, not crazy, but he can be regarded as a bold artist. I look forward to the follow-up plot. There are still some embarrassing stumbles in some places, but compared to other fan works in the same period, it is indeed of high quality.

A small trash boss at the beginning has three amethysts, nb

The fanfic is very good. Except for the ending, which is a little sloppy, it is not toxic in other aspects. It cannot be compared with the Chiliaoxing one, but it is much better than other fanfics. I can give it an 8.4-8.5 Rating. It is worth reading. It is not smelly or long. In short, it is quite good.

Good luck, come on, the author has made a lot of magical changes and is not very friendly to the original party, but the logic and plot are not bad, and the protagonist is already considered the number one person under the King of War. Why haven't Luoluo and Jingjing come yet? You won't have to wait for Luoluo to come before you can be promoted to the King of War, right?

More updates, it looks really good It's updated once a day. No matter how good-looking the book is, it makes me unmotivated.

It's a very good novel. As a fan fiction author, he combined the current novel ideas to write down a different path. To be honest, although the meaning of the plot of this familiar cartoon is simple, the true meaning conveyed is indeed very thorough. There is no need for deep shaping or complicated plot. It is simply put in front of readers, and it is very consistent with the feeling of the original work. It can be regarded as a very good second work of a childhood classic. Come on, author!

Is this one without Luo Luo? A bit rare

It's pretty good, but why hasn't Luo Luo come out yet? Is this one without Luoluo?

I think it's pretty good. Why is it rated so low? Is it because I didn't take Luoluo to play? [What]

Well written. Come on, author. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

It's great to watch. I'm already looking forward to what Luo Luo will look like when he appears [smile]

Well written, keep up the good work

Awesome fanfic

It's just that the update is a bit slow

Then why isn't the protagonist Luo Luo?

It's really good, but I have a question. Why hasn't the original protagonist Lolo Ren appeared in the author's Adventures of Lolo?

It's so beautiful. Will Luo Luo appear?

The author explains what craftsmanship is and what drinking and sex are harmful to the body and abstinence from drinking.

I saw the latest chapter, Chapter 100, and I feel pretty good for the time being. It's only 250,000 words long. Why is it so short, author?

First of all, on Tomato, whether it's good or not, it's all five stars. It's chapter 55 and Lolo hasn't come out yet. According to the original plot, Attacking the City of Time should be out.

As expected of a reader turned author! Just understand what everyone wants to see! Very well written. Ten chapters a day is enough, you don't need to write as many as twenty or thirty chapters

Not bad, pretty cool to watch, anyway

The follow-up of this book is Luoluo: Family members are invincible, starting with the ceiling war king, and finally can enjoy themselves after fighting for a lifetime!

Looks good, looks good, ends with flowers🎉

It's pretty good. It doesn't need to be divided into grades, but only by grades. The author can describe the combat power more conveniently. The rating is a bit low. It should be at least 8.0.