The Lovable Foolish Extra Catches the Villain's Eye

The plot is complete and coherent, and the writing is silky and smooth. Although this book is also about being reborn through time travel, the writing angle is very novel. The author has played a big game, and I plan to read it again. I don't quite understand why the rating is so low, at least the first half of the book is really good. The writing style feels like the author is not just playing around with meme, but rather adding a person to the meme. It's so humorous. I feel like a Northeasterner (a stereotype, haha, bushi). Everything Shou says is funny and cute. Yubao is bright and bright, sunny and cheerful, and Congbao has a bit of a love mind and is a domineering CEO who can cooperate with the drama queen, making a sweet couple. The main line is just cookies, but a little glass slag was mixed in later. In other words, I have a complicated view of the Yan family, because actions precede causes and the timeline is too long. I thought they were very self-centered at first, but in the end the author came around logically, and I didn't hate them but I couldn't like them either. Although the emotional lines of the finale were well written by the deputy CPs, there was always a sense of unbalanced literature.

It's good-looking and quite funny. It's a bit silly. The protagonist has a good character. The story is about the past and present lives. It's not a time-travel. The past life is an abuse story. Although they liked each other, something happened to Shou. So in this life, I have a cheerful and sweet personality, but villains are not usually able to cause trouble.

Generally speaking, it's okay. The plots of the previous life and this life are interspersed. The two people in the previous life ended badly. They also have sweet love in this life, which can be regarded as making up for the previous life. It's mainly about relationships, and the career line is not that obvious. In other words, there are a few couples, and the relationship is pretty smooth. The content in the front is not bad, but the ending in the back can be said to be predictable. It is tasteless and a pity to discard. After all, I had already watched the movie and it was almost the finale, so I chose to finish it.

Yubao is so cute, sweet and spicy, and the two of them are fun and loving every day. The plot develops smoothly, the pace is neither urgent nor slow, and there are no deliberate misunderstandings and mistakes. Every character is very distinct, and it's a very good sweet story.

The rating shouldn't be so low!! Teacher, you are so good at writing!! In the early stage, there was a whole joyful rhythm. I like this very much. From the moment we found our family in Xiaoyu, it felt like a two-way development, and the logic was completely rigorous! All the supporting characters are not there to "set off" or advance the plot. It can be seen that the teacher is very careful in shaping each character. The later stage actually made me feel a little bit brain-burning! Very good, super beautiful! Recommended!!

The current rating of this book is not high, but the author's language is very cute, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, so I feel that I can contribute my first review to support the author. I hope the author can write more words and become more popular.

Nice! It was so funny at the beginning, especially Yu Bao's Goosege [snickering] [snickering] There were some places where I was so anxious that neither of them opened their mouths, but luckily they all started talking. Really beautiful, sweet text

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The score is a bit low at first, but I like the content. It's okay, there are no misunderstandings, sadomasochism or anything like that. The two people gradually developed from an initial agreement to a natural love. I thought I was wearing a book, but in fact I still love you all over again. The happy ending in this life makes up for the regrets in the previous life. Woo hoo hoo~ The two babies must always be happy 😘😘😘😘

It's still good-looking. It continues Mengmeng's writing style, but it feels like it's not as spirited as the previous one. It's a bit of a plot for plot's sake, ignoring the coherence of logic and characters. The author said that he is in a bad state and hopes to recover soon ❤️