Become the Sickly Villain in the Novel

Feeling okay But the dialogue gave me the feeling that it was translated from Japanese to Chinese or Korean to Chinese. It was strange that I had read a Korean or Japanese comic now. The plot is relatively flat and doesn't have too many twists and turns. You can just watch it when you're bored. It feels like a machine translation, bland and uneventful, with many typos and a draggy plot.

Well, it's okay, it's ordinary. After the male protagonist came to the world in the book, he had no memory of the original protagonist. He only knew the characters in the book and said that he had lost his memory, and then he got along with them normally. Because the original protagonist was in poor health, he basically spent time in the hospital. Later, after getting along, the male protagonists of the original book Attack 1 and Attack 2 both fell in love with the male protagonist. However, the male protagonist ended up with the second male protagonist. From the moment the male protagonist entered the book, there was no plot. Everything developed freely~ The main character in the original book, Shou, who is the male protagonist's half-brother, did not end up with Gong 1 in the end. The two did not call each other at all, unlike the various abuses in the book~ The younger brother finally had his own life. In the end, the original protagonist in the book actually awakened, and experienced his own death many times with his own eyes and was unable to change. Later, he met a god and drew the male protagonist closer to the book, and then the original protagonist in the book was reincarnated~

The writing is really good, but there are a few typos. Why is the rating so low? [Crying] [Crying] I almost missed it because of the rating I really cried at the ending. I still like Li Nuo and Li Yan as a couple. It would be great if this couple was CP [crying] [crying]

It's nice to read, but I generally don't have much patience. I mainly read fast-moving articles with many subjects. I rarely read this kind of one-subject book, but! ! ! It's super good-looking, the relationship between the protagonists is sweet, and contains spoilers: Nono is such a good baby, Xiaoyan, a brother-in-law, couldn't defend against everything, haha, but I don't blame him, blame the opponent for being too strong [like]. The emotions are also very delicate. Watching it made me twist like a maggot in bed at night [shy]. It's just that the score is a bit low. Maybe there are fewer people reading it for the time being. This book is a dark horse. I personally feel that the minimum score is 9 points or higher.

It's very good to watch. I recommend everyone to read it. Nono is so charming. It's so gentle that I fell in love with it. The love is also sweet. Five stars. Nono has a charming personality. In fact, she feels like she can be with everyone. She's so gentle.

Oh my god ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I really, really, really like it! I like the gentle Mo Chuan & the cute Nono. Ah ah, the plot is novel and the characters are outstanding. Although President Qin is not bad (very contrasting), I still like Mo Chuan haha, and of course the most important thing is Li Yan! Ahhhhhhhh I like Li Yan [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][adoration][flying kiss][adoration][flying kiss][adoration][sending heart][flying kiss][sending heart][flying kiss][sending heart][flying kiss][adoration][flying kiss][adoration ][Shy][Blowing a kiss][Shy][Flowing a kiss][Shy][Shy][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Shy][Flowing a kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing a kiss][Admiration][Flowing a kiss][Sending a heart][Flowing a kiss][Sending a heart][Flowing a kiss][Sending a heart][Flowing a kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing a kiss][Shy]

I think it's okay. It's well written, but I still feel like I'm more of a brother and a younger brother.

It's so cool. When Li Nuo traveled through time in the book, he had no memory of the original owner, so he had no choice but to pretend to have amnesia. However, after amnesia, his character was gentle and transparent, without the vicious character of the original owner. The original owner's brother Li Yan was tortured by the original owner for a long time, but he was extremely afraid of his brother regaining his memory and fearing that he would turn back to his original vicious brother. Qin Xu and Mo Chuan, who originally hated Li Nuo, took the initiative to approach and take care of them. They never liked to become I care, the author's introduction does not say who is the male protagonist. Let me tell you here that the male protagonist is Mo Chuan. In fact, this reader is fond of the elder brother and the younger brother. After all, the author has more plot lines about the elder brother and younger brother. The original protagonist will appear in the later plot and reveal the truth about Li Nuo's time travel. The villain in it is offline quite late, but he rarely appears. There is a side story. There is no abuse in this article. Personal opinion, please don't criticize.

Very fragrant rice. I really like the character and image of every character in the book. The emotions are quite delicate. Mo Chuan poked me a little bit. The description in the article is a bit Japanese, but the writing style is very good and the whole article is very smooth to read.

The psychological description of the characters is very delicate and their personalities are very clear. I like Mo Li very much! Mo Chuan will give Li Nuo his only love, which may be the reason why Li Nuo chooses him (I also hope that the former Nono can live happily in another world [crying])

Halfway through, I was really curious about who the CP was, but it turns out it's not an orthopedic surgeon [crying] [crying] Li Yan and Li Nuo were so good at eating, but they didn't end up together [crying] [crying]

It's pretty good. I don't see any AI flavor or Japanese-Korean translation flavor. One star is deducted because of the overall characterization and relationships. The ending is more suitable for the protagonist and the younger brother, one male and two other people to live together in an open-ended style, like living with Meimei. Because choosing any one of them would be a pity for the rest. The protagonist is really suitable for starting a harem (eyes moved)

It's okay, it's quite interesting. It creates a great sense of contrast through the book, but I have always been confused about it, that is, I feel that Mr. Qin is a bit too redundant. I feel that the whole process is only interesting to the male protagonist, and in addition, the plot of the original book is that he killed the male protagonist, so I feel that in It seems strange to write that he also wants to win over the male protagonist. Although the male protagonist lost his memory and he became interested in the male protagonist again, he actually didn't do anything for the male protagonist. What he can do can be done by another person, so it feels like he didn't put a lot of emotion into it. It's better to assign him to the male protagonist's brother.

Nice! The text is very visual! All kinds of CP are easy to knock on, but the real attack is better than taking the initiative! So this tells us that when we meet someone we like, we must take the initiative and attack quickly and generously, otherwise our wife will become someone else's.

This novel explains to a great extent that character determines everything! The ending is rushed. It would be better if the relationship between Qin Xu and his younger brother was brought into play! The younger brother has lived so miserable all his life for his elder brother. If the elder brother has a lover, the younger brother should also be happy!

I originally thought he would be with someone named Qin, because Qin is such a standard protagonist, but he ended up with Mo Chuan. Although he is a nice guy, I always prefer someone with a higher status, which is a bit of a pity.

It's super good-looking. Normally, the novel would be about being with the previous male protagonist, but this one satisfied my expectations of being with the second male lead. It's super good-looking [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's quite good. The subject matter is novel. The main character is not the male lead in the book like most of the novels, but the second male lead.

I like it, it's different from the ones I've seen before [adoration][adoration][adoration]

As you can see from the watch, if you take a step back, can the three of them really not be together?

I read this book last year. I deleted my browsing history at that time. I have been thinking about this book during this period of time. Unexpectedly, I read it again today based on my strength. It is very interesting. The plot is a bit bland, but it is sweet.

It's not bad, it feels like a Japanese coming-of-age show (? It's quite warm, but it makes me want to cry. It's inexplicably sad, but I recommend it☺️

Overall, it's pretty good. I'm very happy that Mo Chuan is the official partner and I quite like him. The character dialogue is a bit artificial hahaha, but the plot is okay

Hahahaha I finally ate it, it was not easy for Teacher Mo either hahahaha

I've read almost half of it, it's so good, I'm hooked. I don't know what the follow-up will be like. I've been looking for novels for a while and finally I found a more normal novel. Except for the fact that the male protagonist accepted it too quickly when he first came in, the follow-up development is very good. The male protagonist actually knows how to find a job, and he is wary of the two general attackers. He is not said to have too much contact with the two general attackers. It is very measured, and there are no special flaws. It is very good-looking [lick screen][lick screen][lick screen]

I feel pretty good, I haven't finished watching it yet, but I'm really looking forward to who will be the official partner [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] It's very good-looking, and I also like the official version. Later I discovered that Mo Chuan was also so cute, and they were really happy together [shy][shy]

It's okay, I feel like the emotion comes very suddenly

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It's really good-looking (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧, but what can I say in the early stage? It gives people the feeling that the male protagonist in the original text is the male protagonist, but overall it is good.

It's very beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this kind of writing. It's so novel. It gives people a feeling of Japanese-Korean translation. It's very well written.