Others Work Hard to Practice, but You Show Off and Become Immortals

I have read more than 30 chapters and have stopped reading for the time being, but Bird Food is not bad, but I vaguely remember that I found it from the title with multiple female protagonists, which is really strange. (The author has written in a chapter that he likes to be praised, so praise him before you leave. The author is really a good person [smile] [smile])

@ The writing is very good, there are some minor issues but they are innocuous. Don't listen to people who haven't read much. I have hundreds of books on my bookshelf and have read thousands of books. I'm very picky, but even so, you're pretty good. Come on, keep writing.

Not bad, the author wrote it carefully! Most of the bad stories are improved by everyone lying down, but this one is different. This one requires you to use your brain to think about strategies and make some actions to change the plot. It doesn't look so boring! It's quite original!

The author is writing well so far, and it's very enjoyable to read.

Pure and refreshing writing, the writing style needs to be improved, and the killing should be decisive [note]

Oh, oh, oh, oh, very pretty! I fell asleep in the middle of the night, and Niu Niu even took out her phone to look at it [shy]

Author, how about we have a lasting and vigorous love affair?

It's pretty cool, and there will be a lot of updates tomorrow, but the system's sense of presence is too low. It doesn't offer anything except the Immortal Soul and the knife.

What do you people think of giving five stars? I also give five stars to trick the brothers in the back.

You can't let me watch it alone, let's watch it together [laughing]

Beautiful, generous, kind and lovely author, please try your best to update 100,000 times a day. Please don't be ignorant

The writing is quite good. I just ran out of books to read recently, so I put them in the bookshelf first. The author will update them faster, so I don't have to read them.

It's very beautiful. Anyway, I like to watch it.

It looks good, the plot is smooth The author is more active and skinny

Okay, the protagonist and supporting characters are not stupid

Already following. Content and plot are good

I will scold you. I am very grateful to you for giving such good novels.

The opening of the book is somewhat similar to the plot of Long Aotian. Let's give it 5 stars first.

This is the first time I have seen a female author write this kind of fantasy novel, but it is very good. However, the rating is a bit low. I feel sorry for the author for a second.

The author is a girl, so I just give this a five-star review [laughing]

Ordinary children should also love life. It's too simple. It's really cool to still love life despite everything.

I discovered a characteristic. The protagonist only wears bad books when he wears books. I recommend readers to read more bad books. The more poisonous the better. It's impossible to say that I've traveled through time. [Sinister smile]

The author is good-looking and the books he wrote are also good-looking👀

Yes, a regular rebirth and a fire fight scene where the whole family is slapped in the face.

The early part is okay, but the later part is very good, suitable for following.

Well, you can watch it just by looking at the title. After reading it in 10 minutes, you can catch the plot at a glance.

Yes, it's much better than the current flow of articles. It's a cool article. Don't be fooled by the title. You almost missed it because of the title. Love it, it looks good, please update, Why did it end suddenly? He should still be in the water for a while. [Shy]

Good-looking, super good-looking

The writing is really good and beautiful.

I'm curious, is there any difference in this system?