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I finished reading it in one sitting, so cool. Just a little dizzy. If you write 200 chapters well, I will give you a big reward. I have rewarded several books before. The early writing was super good, but in the later stage, I just gave it to shit and clams. I hope there will be a girl in purple leather as the heroine, hehe. A visual rating of at least 9.5 Or above. Added a bookshelf, follow it, the author cheers for you [laughing][laughing] Later on, I became brainless and stopped chasing. Nitian [shocked] [shocked]

Relatively high quality. Funny and good. The combat aspect is also well written. This is the first time I have seen combat written in this way. It's the dual-line narrative that I think is better, even the best, in this type of book. Second revision. To put it simply, it's very watery. It's a bit overdone, and it can be seen that the author wants to play a big game. But I really can't handle this kind of water. Let me give you a review. If it gets better in the future, I will change it back.

It's a good book. The author has a good idea. There are multiple parallel worlds running in parallel, and a generation of saviors is added. This is a setting that is poisonous if it is not well written. The author is quite confident in himself. According to the plot, a group portrait and an invincible behind-the-scenes savior organization will be the final ending.

Now updated to chapter 64. (A few nonsense words) There are currently two lines, the game and reality. At this stage, the two lines are gradually merging. The logic of the story lines on both sides feels very clear. The shaping of other characters feels very comfortable and consistent with the character's identity and behavior. As for the so-called heroine (not sure yet) Lin, I feel that their relationship is more like recognition between friends with strong abilities (high IQ)? I do have the feeling that I want to write about a female protagonist (or maybe I misunderstood), but I prefer to describe the daily life between teammates in a three-person team (small group portrait) in the real world. In the story, when the mystery (erased history) appears, it is not that anything can be easily solved just by the protagonist appearing. It is not that the country in the story can only rely on the protagonist or the characters enlightened by the protagonist to solve the problem, but all forces are advancing the story line, and the protagonist is more like a key link in advancing the development of the story line. For other NPCs (should be called...), I feel that the writing is very vivid. When you see their death or near death, you will feel regretful and sad. The character behavior and story development are very natural. In terms of the rhythm of the story, I think the current rhythm is very good. The story is not the kind of pure and refreshing plot that moves forward without thinking. I feel that the world view in the story is very large, and the early foreshadowing and description are very important (it will be very hard to follow up ꒦ິ^꒦ິ). There is a sense of horror and urgency that gradually unravels the fog of history. It gives me the feeling that it is still in the preparation stage of the story, and the real story has not officially begun yet. I am looking forward to the author's follow-up content. Finally, I hope the author will update soon!

Good book, the plot is actually very classic. But the plot planning crushes countless tomato novels of the same type [laughing] To briefly talk about the worldview, there is an artificial intelligence general Nuwa who says that the protagonist needs to be saved. And there is only one world from beginning to end. Once the protagonist completes the task, the upload will be locked and cannot be changed. Then it will appear in reality that even if the protagonist retraces the fixed plot, it will actually arrive at the location of reality [laughter] Highly recommended, a rare book! Looking forward to the next update?

How do you think the author originally wanted to write this book? There are only a few fantasy themes nowadays, such as cultivating immortals, ancient martial arts, gene locks, etc. It may be mediocre to write one alone, but there are also predecessors who have made a big fuss about it. Only by finding a new way and covering all the themes can it be really different. Even where the new road leads is unknown, the author is not the first person to think so, and he will never be the last. Anyway, it seems that no book written like this is particularly famous, right? This era is really an era with a strong fantasy color. In any case, this also means that the author's spiritual world is very rich rather than black and white, which is very gratifying. Looking forward to more "beautiful" works. Although many people on the Internet complain that there are too many newbies, they can't stand the fact that there are so many of us, and quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes. In fact, this is not a review of the book, but more of a reflection on reading the novel.

The writing of this book is a bit interesting. It allows the protagonist to change the history of the past or other time and space and integrate reality. Moreover, this novel is not completely biased towards the protagonist. It can be said that this novel buries the story a bit deeply, which is the kind of story that gets better the longer you go. To be honest, I think I can continue to bury the story deeper and it will be boring to just change the scene. If there are only a few novels with more than 9 reviews, then the author can learn from AI co-writing

I think it's pretty good. It took me so long to choose this book among the mountains and seas of history. It's really good.

It's quite interesting. At present, it seems that it should be divided into three lines, corresponding to the three characters that the protagonist can choose. For example, the immortal cultivator corresponds to which ancient era of immortality, and the genetically modified person corresponds to the gene lock of the Traceability Bureau. However, it is not clear what the ancient warrior corresponds to. The author's writing style is quite good, and the rhythm is The control is also very good, which makes people have the urge to keep watching. What I like most is to see the protagonist using the game to affect the content of another time and space. It is a multi-line progress. From this, it can be seen that the author should have some basic knowledge. I personally recommend it very much, but can the author be faster? [Angry][angry][angry]

He should be a classmate from the history department, right? I don't know which university you are from, but I have a history family and give you a five-star review. The book is okay, with a lot of flaws, but if you have to write hundreds of chapters, it will become a good book once the system is perfected.

Damn, oh, oh, oh, oh, I didn't expect this plot to unfold. It really made my scalp numb. So far, I don't see any big problems, but I'm worried that the author won't be able to grasp the subject matter. After all, the last person I had similar feelings about was an omniscient person.

My imagination is quite big. At Chapter 86, the truth of the world has been revealed and the most attractive point has been revealed. It is possible to predict the follow-up direction. As the game world continues to grind dungeons, enemies will also appear in the real world, from country to country, planet to planet. There is a question. Since the sacred tree belongs to Nuwa, does the appearance of the monster in the first chapter of the game simply pave the way for the male protagonist? Because there is fruit in the monster's body, why not let the male protagonist help solve it so that people from the previous civilization can research genetic medicine? This is the first time I read this type of novel. It's very interesting. I give it five stars.

It's a very good novel, similar to how I felt when I first started reading "Electronic Girlfriend". The most eye-catching part of this book is that the real-life accident is transmitted to the mobile phone in the form of a game in advance, and the identity is chosen. I didn't read it later, but now the identity of the protagonist is a mystery, and it is not yet known whether the characters with different identities share the same face. It's like doing it yourself, which is secretly refreshing. In addition, at least for now, it doesn't seem too toxic, so it's worth watching if you don't have to worry about it.

Emmm, it's pretty good. At first, I was a little annoyed by the protagonist's casual attitude towards the game, but that's right. After all, in his opinion, it's just a game. Now that the protagonist finally realizes that it's more than just a game, I hope the author can write well about both the game world and the real world, and keep a good balance. Don't ruin the book [Chigua]

Pretty good, in tomatoes. My first impression is almost the same as the previous Tomato Books, even better. I have read a similar book before, but it was a mess. I hope the author of this book can keep it up. Really, if it is written like this, it will definitely be popular, and the rating should be around nine points.

So far, it's all very interesting. The author has done a good job integrating elements such as time travel, behind-the-scenes bosses, cities, and fantasy, and the prehistoric ruins are the icing on the cake. Good luck, author! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] (It would be nice if there were more chapters updated every day)

If it looks good, it can be considered a masterpiece if it doesn't end badly. I just don't understand that there is one world in the game and another in reality, right? I listened. I didn't quite understand. Let the author explain it briefly. I don't understand a bit [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I finished reading it in one sitting. Some of the plots were a little bit toxic, but overall it was okay, but a bit short.

It's quite interesting. It's the way the protagonist's mobile game is mapped to the real world and then changes the ending of the real world's destruction (probably). Afterwards, he realizes that he is the true savior. The characters are quite fleshed out and the dialogues are quite interesting.

Five stars for encouragement. The suspense is deep. It feels very good to watch, but the pace is very slow. This kind of thing has to be watched continuously to make it enjoyable. If I don't watch it continuously, it will only whet my appetite and give people a bad feeling. But if I watch it together, it is a very good experience. The author's writing style is actually quite good, how can I put it? Should I say the word count is small or the pace is slow? I can't decide.

It's okay, I recommend adding a label with a female protagonist. Of course, if the author wants to write him off, and finally do a sublimation, then I didn't say it [Thinking]

There are only 62 chapters now, but I can't seem to read any of them. It's too short, and I can't write any climax points yet - the protagonist hasn't discovered anything unusual about the game yet. However, the logic is great, the content is substantial, and the characters are numerous without neglecting the main character. After reading the comments, I discovered that Dragon Kingdom and Daxia are two different countries. The author could give a little reminder when the protagonist enters the game for the first time, such as "it seems to be based on reality." Nice, but too short.

In fact, it is very good and should be given five stars, but the sense of identity separation between the branch plot and the main plot is too strong. Em~ It should be about saving the world, but it seems that the protagonist discovers that this is the branch plot of saving the world.

The writing is quite good, but to be honest, there are too few chapters, and it's a bit confusing at first, but it gets better as you read on. It's different from other books, and I really recommend it. But I don't know if the plot will be bad later on, at least not yet.

It's interesting. The plot is very compact. I feel like it's about to reach the climax. I'm looking forward to it. Can the author send me some manuscripts?

I want to see the latest one, it's good, a lot of things are explained clearly, and the setting is quite interesting. Come on, author, don't write too much later, and there's more! Update soon!

You all write a lot of emotional scenes for the heroine. I think it's just right. It's done in dual timelines. Whether it's this timeline or another timeline, it's okay. I hope you can write some copies. There is still not enough to watch, I hope there will be more updates [adoration][adoration][adoration]

This book is really good. Some people may find it confusing at the beginning, but when you read it later, all the previous foreshadowing will be combined and you will have a feeling of enlightenment. The low score now should be because there were not many chapters in the year before. Many people did not see the turning point of reality and could not understand it, so the score will be low, but I believe that as long as the author maintains the current rhythm, the score of this book will definitely not be low. Come on, author

(This comment only expresses personal praise and support for the author). I personally feel that the content is in line with my aesthetics and feelings. The rhythm is moderate, the plot has ups and downs, the game time is not too much and not too little. The multi-story plot is well described, with daily life interspersed in the middle. It is tense and interesting but also leisurely. I am very satisfied. It should be a single female protagonist. I hope the author will continue to update with this quality. Thank you.

The imagination is really big. I have to say that this subject is a great test of the author's thinking and logic. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up. Maybe the final boss will be Nuwa? After all, the first folding was probably because humans discovered that this was a game world and wanted to resist and break away from it into a real world. However, Nuwa, as a game management AI, was authorized to manage this game. The reason why humans broke away was because the bugs in the system program needed to be cleaned up, so they folded or changed the program. The monster in the door might be Cheng. However, the first patch failed. Nuwa directly restarted the game (folded world) and changed the background of the game world from the first world background to the biological background. The original human players entered the game to kill monsters, but were later discovered by Gu Xingtong. Gu Xingtong's divinity died together, while his humanity left clues and hope.